Hey there! I just played the demo of your NSFW visual novel, and I have to say, I was really impressed! The storyline and characters are both really interesting, and I can definitely see the potential for this to be a great game.
As someone who's played a lot of visual novels in the past, I think one of the key things that sets your game apart is the attention to detail and the quality of the writing. You've really created a world and characters that feel authentic and engaging.
Of course, as with any project, there's always room for improvement. One thing that I think could really take your game to the next level is incorporating more interactivity and player choice. Giving players more agency in how the story progresses can really make the experience more immersive and engaging.
Overall, though, I'm really excited to see where this project goes next. I think you've got something really special here, and I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops over time. Keep up the great work!
PS: A new Patron in Da House!