Oh this was really cute and nice! Looovee the style and the light-hearted vibe.
My one suggestions would be, possibly considering adding a shadow underneath the player/maybe objects? This is mostly because I had a bit of finicky trouble figuring out if I was in range of getting a coin, or how close I was to it. It's just a small thing though, so if you decide that simply doesn't fit the style then I think that'd also be fair!
Really excited to play the final game!!
I just encountered and played this game for the first time and the entire time I was just thinking of how... lovely this is. I know you've described different intentions here but I can't help but see this as a love letter to your friends - and that sense of friendship and found family between other trans people's always very comforting to hear about. Thank you for creating this game and sharing it!!!
Wow this is really good ahh!! I read through all of it (unless I missed a sidenote accidentally) and the wordflow in your work is just wonderful. I like that it's sometimes vague in that poetic abstract way, but still clear that the though-provoking didn't get me out of the experience of the game. The end almost had me tear up; it really put my own feelings of freedom with being enby/agender into beautiful words :)
