I also hope so. If you ever need help editing texts in English and Russian, LMK.
I'm not a native speaker, but I teach English as a foreign language for a living and I help proofread/translate VNs for free.
I helped edit https://namelessnoun.itch.io/infamous8/ and the video scripts for https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCC2P80KxEtlkoTFscHsH3NA/videos
I translated Infamous8 and one lewd VN into Russian.
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Andrea, I profusely apologize to you for not commenting earlier [not that your life would depend on it, though)].
I read OLSK a year ago. As a seasoned VN reader I was confident, 'Nah, no onions. Nope, the story is predictable. No way in ren...py will it make me cry, there is no voicing even.'
And yet I was crying. I don't know how you did it, but I was crying.
And the ending is just great, though I expected the MC to leave.
The CG with the half-transparent marine silhouette is a great embodiment of the whole story.
PS I hadn't cried after losing some girls in Katawa Shoujo, I wasn't crying while playing some grim VNs, but Azzurra and Giovanni...
well, even if Beatrix dragged the body, she's bound to leave a blood trail and it should be a bit different.
The uniforms are out of question, I pointed out the writings on them, not the epolettes or insignia
BTW three cops don't have even 1 gun).
Three military futas have only 1 machine gun, Meredit must have forgotten her SVD rifle under the pillow)
And that's all in the face of recent riots
My favourite parts of the game:
- Lady Mantis quipping Beatrix
- the feeling of having to comply to any wicked shit and then trying 'and what if I don't obey?' To find out you don't lose much)))
- the way MC gets to open 2 new locations, nothing Godsent, work your ass off!
- the timer when Player has only 10 seconds to decide with the threatening BGM
- the clash between police and the military, the chain of command and authority wrestling - so life-like!
- the games Beatrix plays with everyone and the flashback to her 8th husband in Demo
- Eva coming to passed out player 'I'm not like those cruel, oppressing Mantis members, I like you', and then MC finding out just how much she likes him 8 days later
- Sister Hannah taking dibs on you and other Church members opinion on that
- sisters Bloom are having a stupid spat, but resort to you as a 3rd party, so if you aren't into watersports, you still feel obliged, 'well, why not? after all one o them is really cool, what if ...?'
...I probably should stop or there'll be no end to this.