It's smart that you saved on graphics where it's supposed to be dark. I'd make Gelly have the memories and experiences you'd expect from a Gelly and still be funny. Odette should be a good host and tell you how to get around. Is the goblin boss thing from Casper? The gore wasn't there and are the Trolls disgusting? When does the janitor get paid and why is the janitor the maid? Is Odette squeezing service out of the Janitor extraordinaire to take advantage? You sure need janitors if you have rats. Odette should be Norse? I like names that are memorable. I like her name, but she mentions some strange hard to pronounce place that I'd easily forget because it's something my brain would spit out. I like discovering interesting things that might be useful later. It teaches home economics, searching, communicating and being resourceful in a fantastic way. Medieval times though had more lore in speech. Sound effects tells you clues, mood or when you unlocked something special. I'd probably spend more time with it if were more rewarding right away. I like treasure, potions, amulets and trading. Perhaps diamonds. Maybe rats should be guides. I like helpful strangers. I'd spend more time too if there was a glamorous glorious being. Someone you'd really like and look up to or else is very ominous. Well It's just a short and it's probably more when its deeper. I'd add some greek mythical characters for style. tricksters. firepower. fairy tale creatures with themes. decorated sword. gauntlet. and finally the grail.