Let me just say - I'm SO PROUD TO SEE HOW ITS ALL COMING TOGETHER! I've seen snippets of how hard you've worked at figuring out animations (such as the rain, which looks AMAZING).
I can tell you put a lot of love into this, the way you used the music combined with the transitions/effects/ etc was very artistic!
Also, I've said this for forever when I read through the little snippets, but you have a very FLOWERY writing style! It's so nice to read something that's been thought out and it just flows together in such a nice way that doesn't leave the reader feeling stupid AND it's very satisfying. You can really picture the description in your head (though the art and stuff more than does it for you).
The art style is amazing too. It's so beautiful and all the characters look great! You already know who my favorite is >:)
Can't wait to see more! <3