I don't know how much I have to say but I'll say what I have to say anyway.
I absolutely love the "casual poetry" writing style that you have. It's really adding to the feeling that UTS could be a fairy tale from another world, it really feels like something I could read in one of the weird old fairy tale compilations I used to read when I was a child. The characters are extremely huggable (this is a high compliment btw), ESPECIALLY Dulari, I will protect her at all costs I don't care. ALSO. Big shoutout to platonic love here, I love it when that happens, we need more of it.
Not to mention, gods, the story did make me cry at one point (you know which one), and even outside of that point, it was emotionally engaging all the way through, so I didn't even have trouble with my terrible attention span (which is rare these days). It's landing on my Certified Classics list. Thank you for the experience.