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ok I tried really hard to convince myself not to argue online about meaningless shit but I couldn't do it so here we are again, arguing online about meaningless shit.


Yeah adrian doesn't have that many options after getting kicked out, but what about dylan? He isn't near homeless and they'd already be spending tons of time paying them back anyway. Instead he gets converted into a resistance member bc he is stupid and thinks he can fight against the world. But we need a good narrative so I guess it's fine


Getting shot in the ear is not fine. What does it matter if it isn't "permanent damage"? Again, if someone shot you would you forgive them so easily in a week? Have you been shot before? It's inane and it was mostly done as a show of accuracy, benjie is already screwed as far as the story is concerned. And then the writer wants me to feel bad for them later on, yeah ok. Sure.


Yeah ok ultimately we will not know if oswald killed those 2 henchmen or not, but he heavily implied it and also, even if it was something else, we won't know about it for another 2 years or so (at least) because we will wait, and wait and wait, for an update that took 7 months and wait again until we get some form of closure regarding a psycho like oswald. 


They may not have a patreon (which is probably for the best) but i'm just surprised they care at all, especially since its been almost 2 years and very little is actually written yet, with the latest update being 2 thirds done (of one chapter!). And apparently It never went on hiatus at all, so thats out too.

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Again, by all logic standards he would have gone to Dylan BEFORE finding out it was Eden who fucked up his life, do you honestly believe they'd let someone walk away and casually live with a friend after they erase his life? All going to Dylan would have accomplished is turning Dylan into a target as well.

The getting shot part is irrelevant, it's depressing and showcases how little of a choice Adrian has. He has no other option than to roll with the punches especially considering the guy who shot him is going to be training him on a near-daily basis. It was unfortunate but not life-threatening or devastating, I've been shot before in places much worse than a mere near miss on my ear, I WISH the shots were a near miss. Let's also put ourselves in Adrian's shoes, no other options, he has to stay in the base probably until Eden is fucked, he'll see the raccoon walking around and training him frequently, and he legit is in no position to get pissy with him. While it's not excusable it's understandable that Adrian would forgive and forget quickly.

There were 3 henchmen that went into the bar that night, one threatened Adrian the other 2 went with Oswald, there is absolutely no way he killed those two agents. He says "I took care of it" but that doesn't mean killing them, killing agents on TOP of their base is remarkably idiotic to the point where it seems the author has to clarify it so people like you don't get the wrong idea. It's heavily implied if you have a set mindset into wanting to think that, biased views. 

It's also mentioned this project was a partnership with 3 other VNs, if that's the case then I'm fairly certain they're busy with their own VNs to actually work on this project, that'd explain the delays. Hell even if they didn't have other VNs to work on I doubt all of them can afford to work on this VN full-time, life is demanding enough without having people shit all over you while you're trying to make a free project. Constructive criticism works wonders, blatant complaining does the opposite.