I think you might need an editor if you're not fluent in English but if you are then you just have a couple of typos and run-on sentences here and there. I'll help you with your game description because it bothers me a little bit that such a wonderful game's description has a typo😅 (But your game needs extensive editing)
"You, the player go through your boring life in the office until a certain tv head Man comes into your life and chances "changes" it forever."
PS: I hope this doesn't hurt or offend you or anyone, don't get me wrong I LOVED this game!! 🥰
I also understand that you made this game in 4 days, CONGRATS!!🤩