Just wow! Phenomenal story so far!
I am totally in love with the characters you've created. They all have their own stylish elegance to them, which fits really nicely with the overall theme of the story.
The plot itself is well written and the story is paced very smoothly so as a reader, you know what's going on.
Each of the scene's artwork is off the charts fabulous!! It's not your traditional "characters staring at you" type of visual novel, it's more cinematic, which I totally love!!
I feel bad about how underrated and unknown this game is because it certainly passes the threshold of average visual novels out there.
I'm super excited for the next chapters to be released. You have me totally invested in this story and I NEEEED to know what happens next!! :D
Keep up the good work and I hope you continue to make more visual novels after this, you're amazing!!
Edit: Forgot to mention the amazing soundtrack and the use of sound effects throughout the story. Gives me those pleasurable chills, especially the main menu song. Really amazing!!