Thank you. I spent most of the jam time on the art. I've been disappointed by what I've put out for previous jams and really wanted to make a solid effort here, so I'm glad you like it.
I'm guessing by linear you mean you could only finish one characters storyline? I did notice the odds of finishing the you woman's story is higher than finishing the little girl's. I plan to even that out in the full version.
thank you for taking the time to play my game.