I think the idea is there but the execution needs a rehaul. The biggest issue is having to wait long periods of time before being able to do something. If you plan on doing so you need to provide the player an alternative game experience. Jokes and riddles don't work for games as a filler. Also if you think you aren't good with UI and music the best way to go about it is to work on them and improve. I'm sure you can do it!