Nice idea, something more fleshed out could be made out of it but there is a lot to improve I feel. The controls are not very responsive, and the story feels a bit random. The narration is a good idea, but I don't think you should just tell the player what to do, there should be indicators for that in game. Good luck in the future!
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Thanks a lot for reviewing my game and giving me suggestions and feedbacks. The story line was simple, it was just a person going to the office and then coming back, but this happens so many times that you dont even know that you are in heaven. Then comes the concept about parallel worlds and reality being an illusion.
The controls were responsive but I think in the web it's kinda less responsive, try downloading the game and trying. It should be fixed.
Can I have a bit more detail on having indicator ?
Until then thanks for the suggestion and feedback
The story seems good now that you've explained it, but I feel like it's not clear enough in the game. Try adding little story elements in game, like small easter eggs that give you more context, maybe little hints that something is off and things aren't real or something like that. By indicators I mean not telling the player through narration what to do and where to go, but maybe adding little UI elements like waypoints and objectives, something like that. The narration audio quality was a bit bad and I couldn't understand it at times, but I suppose that's not your fault. I did download it, but the controls were still a bit clunky, I'd suggest tweaking with the character controller a bit. Thanks for being so receptive!