The game looks interesting so far! On the technical side, the GUI is very nice, I love the music and sound - very atmospheric; both the art style and the character designs are eye-catching and beautiful.
I've enjoyed the brief introduction to the world at the beginning of the game, informative enough to settle you in the story but not so long you end up tired of the lore within first few minutes. I'm interested to see where the story goes :) I don't know what it is about 'jerk' characters that interests me the most but I like Arthmael already, although I can't wait to meet the rest of LIs (so happy to see an NB character on the list!)
As far as issues go, I've spotted a misspelling (Cadice says helping the people was her 'responsability' instead of 'responsibility') ; and one grammar mistake (first interrogation, 'What did you planned to do?' should be 'What did you plan to do') while reading the game. Also on one occasion the main character sprite seems to flicker (in the room at the end after the 'Maybe I've been too naive, too blind' line), I'm not sure if that was intentional or not but it felt a bit off. I'm also pretty sure I caught another misspelled word but for the life of me I could not find it again, so that might have just been me being too tired after work to function ^^''