I really appreciated the Art direction you took with this game. Cool use of the Parallax effect when looking around the rooms. Dystopian world felt very intriguing and made me want to explore more.
For improvements, I think you need to tighten up on the writing a bit; the cleaning you room section felt about right, with lots of options for mental resistance being presented to the player. However, the amount of text and descriptions for the Elevator and Punks cornering you felt excessive, making me want to skip some reading to get to some story progression.
I would recommend working on it more. Cool game and interesting world that needs some refining. Good job!