I just played through the whole game again with the new update and must say I'm very happy. I've been playing many similar games here on itch io and this one is by far my favorite.
I did come across a few missing frames (specially when you are punishing Rachel yourself) and there are a few grammar mistakes (your/you're is common). Other than that, I'm loving this!
I know this one just came out, but when can we expect the next update?
I've noticed the grammar errors, too. Normally I'd think, "Whatever, it's a silly porn game," but given that the setting is an extremely strict secondary school, these are the kind of details worth getting right. They make a point of the titular character having an extensive vocabulary for some jokes with the character April, as well.
Another common grammatical error is in dialogue when characters are addressing the headmaster as "sir." It is properly capitalized and preceded or followed by a comma.
yes, I feel very strongly about grammar errors, especially since this is put out in a public game for all to see. I mean really, how hard is it to get this right. I notice some people aren't able to take a little criticism. Too bad. In times past before everyone got so sensitive, people welcomed strong criticism in order to perfect they're craft, now everyone seems to just want a bunch of "yes" men to pat them on the back. Too bad, so sad.
Nagual11, constructive criticism is fine and I accept it but you played my game for free, said that you found it "an enjoyable distraction", but then for some reason felt the need to come on my forum and throw childish insults at me. You called me a "dumb ass" and a "moron" on your review. I am entitled not to be insulted on my website. As it happens I do understand the grammatical issues you pointed out (I wrote, designed and coded this whole game myself so I'm not an idiot), however, there are over 100,000 words of dialogue in my game and I don't have the time or budget to proof read everything as much as I would like. I do continually fix any errors that I find or people point out to me. Perhaps you would like to report specific mistakes so they can be corrected rather than just being rude. After all, I didn't force you to play this free game, I really think that your rudeness towards me is unjustified.
