There are of course some things that could be improved on, however for this being their first game it is not bad!
I was able to bypass the car key and just grab the flashlight through the car, which was funny to me
Yeah the English is broken, but not everyone speaks English as their main language, and the point does get across despite it being broken, so not going to dwell on this point any longer
The “jumpscares” or scares in general are a bit dull, they aren’t bad and I’m glad that they are not in your face with a png overlay and a loud screamer
The store layout / design is a bit weird, like why is there a bedroom in the grocery store lol
The audio levels are a bit all over the place, the music at the end and the gunshot are a bit too loud imo
But all in all, not bad for a first game, I have seen way worse, keep at it and with every game/demo you’ll improve!