Wow that was tricky! Nice little puzzle game.

All hail the mighty lord corgi!

Nice sense of humor on the intro. Simple but pleasing art style! Nice entry for the jam.

Oh yeah! Just realized I will be your "20"!

Could you please play and rate my game as well?

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-4/rate/723414

Yo’ Templar here,

• An interesting take on golf games.
• The art and sound fit each other well. A few things to point out:
• I can’t tell if this is a bug: When you rewind, you go back to the start position, the rewind ends, but if you start spamming rewind, then your remaining shots keep increasing.
• While the rewind mechanic fits the theme, I quite doesn’t fit in the game itself, without it is a puzzle golf game where you want to get as much points (patience) as possible while still reaching the exit with your available shots; but with the rewind mechanic it turns into just a regular golf game where you can just keep spamming rewind and farming for points before moving.
• The “points”/patience is quite unclear what each does if there’s even a difference, a better take would have been having different personality traits (following the personality test theme that you’re going for) like fun, loving, patience, etc. This would make the player have to aim for certain traits while avoiding others as they navigate through the level.

This is weirdly cool in a way. Hilarious intro - love it. Other things of particular note:

1) Excellent sound design. Every hit with the patience balls, with the walls just has that OOMF. Very cool.

2) Good art direction. In conjunction with the sound design, your choice of sound, music and art style all fits quite cohesively. Was a pleasant to play from start to finish.

Thematically, I admittedly have no idea what to feel about it. You have implemented it both narratively and mechanically a good incentive for the rewind but I also don't feel particularly satisfied with how it works. I think it's the fact that you have to replay the level everytime? While sure, it a way that DOES test your patience but it just goes against the nature of having a fun game?

I might be rambling on that previous paragraph. So if you are interested in gathering more feedback after this game jam, consider asking what people think of your rewind mechanic. I'm actually at a loss and I don't really know.

Very fun game actually, for how short it is. Too bad I got a cat, I simply was too impatient I guess. :[

fun and very short game. sound effects were good, graphics are okay.rewind mechanic used as a restart the level i guess. i got a puppy :3

Controls were a little difficult to grasp at first, my ball took about 1 minute before it finally reset and it didnt exactly explain

Interesting game! I like the Windows Powershell vibe I get from it. Got a cat :3

interesting and fun game well done 

rated!

Fun game and the theme was cool!

amazing game really i picked no i do not want a dog irl i don't like dogs so yeah

The theme is fun and I like the old text editor-MS Basic style of it. I love that rushing the game only grants you a fruit fly xD

Very relaxing game, i got 1426.

Fun concept and interesting gameplay! I like that there are different endings based on how much patience you earn, but since you can go back to previous rooms it's really easy to get lost of patience, it just takes, well, patience. The visuals and aesthetic were great too, would have liked a backing track  or ambient noise during gameplay.

I like that you went with a very simplistic, yet polished art style!

Great mechanics.  It's funny that when I choose "No", it tells me that this is not the right choice. Good job :D

I thought this was a really unique game because of the narrator AI aspect, really loved the Asimov reference too. It was genuinely fun to play and very straightforward and I was interested to find out my  outcome. Loved the music too!

who wouldn't adopt a puppy!? very nice little game and the narrator lines were super funny! great work!