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WalkthroughThis pull request introduces extensive updates to a graphics rendering project, focusing on enhancing the WebGPU-based rendering framework. The changes encompass multiple files, adding new rendering functions, state management structures, and utilities for handling graphics data. Key additions include the Changes
Sequence DiagramsequenceDiagram
participant Main as Main Module
participant Loaded as Loaded Function
participant Context as Rendering Context
participant Canvas as Canvas
participant Renderer as Caterfoil Renderer
Main->>Loaded: Initialize
Loaded->>Context: Initialize Context
Loaded->>Canvas: Reset Size
Loaded->>Canvas: Initialize Textures
Loaded->>Renderer: Render App
Renderer->>Renderer: Compose Render Objects
Renderer->>Context: Paint Render Tree
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🔇 Additional comments (63)
src/main/moon.pkg.json (2)
7-7
: Verify the embed command syntax.
The command uses variables $input
and $output
. Let's ensure this syntax is compatible with the build system.
3-9
: Verify the shader file path and build tool.
The pre-build configuration looks correct, but let's verify the referenced files and tools exist.
src/main/js-value.mbt (16)
1-2
: No issues found in the declaration of JsValue.
5-6
: Simple string-to-JsValue conversion.
Looks good.
9-10
: Number-to-JsValue conversion is straightforward.
No particular issues.
13-14
: Boolean-to-JsValue conversion is correct.
No issues identified.
17-18
: Object-to-JsValue conversion is straightforward.
No issues.
21-22
: Array-to-JsValue conversion is straightforward.
No issues.
25-26
: Function-to-JsValue conversion is straightforward.
No issues.
29-30
: Definition of JsObject type.
No concerns.
31-34
: JsObject::new correctly creates an empty JavaScript object.
Implementation is minimal and effective.
35-42
: Potential property-overwrite risk in JsObject::set.
When setting a new property in JavaScript, existing properties will be overwritten without warning. This is likely intended, but verify if any checks are needed.
43-46
: JsObject::get retrieves property values accurately.
Simple and clear.
47-50
: JsObject::as_value conversion is direct.
No concerns.
51-53
: JsArray type definition.
Appears correct.
54-57
: JsArray::new creates an empty array.
Implementation is correct.
58-61
: JsArray::push appends values to the array.
Straightforward logic.
62-64
: JsArray::as_value conversion is direct.
No concerns.
src/main/container.mbt (7)
1-7
: Definition of Point4D.
Data structure is simple and clear.
9-17
: Point4D::new provides optional parameters with defaults.
Implementation is correct, using .or_default().
19-25
: Definition of Color struct.
Straightforward RGBA storage.
28-35
: Color::new sets alpha to 1.0 if omitted.
Implementation is consistent with typical color defaults.
38-41
: Definition of Vertex with position and color.
No issues.
44-56
: Vertex::to_value builds a dictionary of float arrays.
Implementation looks correct for bridging data to a GPU-friendly or JS-friendly structure. However, confirm externally that the format matches what the downstream expects (e.g. no missing fields).
59-88
: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
comp_container function composes a list of Vertex instances and groups them for rendering.
Implementation appears valid. It might be worth confirming visually or in test code that these coordinates and color values produce the expected rendering result (particularly with negative coordinates).
Would you like me to generate a script to check usage of comp_container across the codebase and ensure no mismatch in function signatures or data structures?
src/main/shader/triangle.wgsl (9)
2-2
: Imports caterfoil::ga4.
No issues.
4-15
: UBO structure with camera and scaling parameters.
Implementation is standard. Just ensure alignment with how the uniform buffer is bound on the host side.
17-19
: Params struct storing a single float.
No issues.
21-22
: Uniform bindings for UBO and Params.
No issues found.
26-30
: Definition of PointResult.
Captures 3D position plus float scalars. Straightforward data structure.
32-32
: Declares a constant sqrt2.
No issues.
34-66
: transform_perspective applies a 4D to 3D perspective transform.
Implementation seems logically consistent. Consider edge cases when r s is near zero or negative, which might cause large or NaN screen_scale.
70-73
: VertexOut structure includes transformed position and color.
No issues.
89-92
: fragment_main returns the unmodified color.
Standard passthrough fragment shader.
src/main/ffi.mbt (22)
14-14
: Definition of Promise type.
No immediate issues.
16-22
: Promise::then supports chaining with a (JsValue) -> JsValue function.
Implementation looks good for standard async handling.
23-29
: Promise::catch_error for error handling.
Implementation is straightforward.
31-33
: js_undefined returns JavaScript undefined.
No concerns.
35-37
: initialize_context may fail if Caterfoil is undefined.
Check for Caterfoil’s existence or environment check if needed.
39-41
: paint_caterfoil_tree triggers Caterfoil’s painting.
No issues.
43-48
: render_caterfoil_tree takes a CaterfoilRenderObject and a dispatch function.
Implementation is fine. Ensure dispatch is optional or required as needed.
50-52
: reset_canvas_size adjusts the canvas dimension.
No issues.
54-56
: initialize_canvas_textures sets up textures in Caterfoil.
Implementation is standard.
58-60
: setup_mouse_events configures Caterfoil’s mouse input.
No concerns.
62-64
: load_gamepad_control sets up gamepad input.
No issues.
66-66
: Definition of Window type.
No concerns.
68-71
: window() returns global browser window object.
Implementation is correct.
73-75
: Window::set_onresize.
No concurrency or re-entrancy concerns given typical browser event handling.
77-79
: Window::set_onload.
Implementation is straightforward.
81-81
: Definition of Document type.
No issues.
84-85
: Window::document returns the global document object.
No concerns.
88-88
: Definition of Element type.
No issues.
91-96
: Document::query_selector executes a DOM lookup.
If user input is involved in the selector, confirm it’s sanitized or restricted. Otherwise, no issues.
98-100
: caterfoil_object creates a CaterfoilRenderObject from JsValue.
Implementation is straightforward.
102-104
: caterfoil_group aggregates multiple render objects into a group.
Logic is minimal and correct.
106-107
: log_js_value logs the given JsValue to the console.
Helpful for debugging.
src/main/shader-triangle.mbt (1)
38-55
: Validate inputs before computing perspective transformation.
Consider adding checks or constraints for edge cases, such as when 'look_distance' is zero or negative, to avoid unexpected results.
src/main/caterfoil.mbt (2)
12-57
: Check potential mismatch in field names between JavaScript and Rust.
Ensure all property names (e.g., "attrsList" vs. "attrs_list") are handled consistently in both Rust and JavaScript. Mismatches can lead to difficult bugs.
103-105
: Error handling in object creation.
In cases where CaterfoilObjectOptions
might be invalid, consider how caterfoil_object(options.as_value())
handles errors (like missing required fields).
src/main/atom.mbt (1)
2-4
: Thread safety concerns.
If this Atom
is intended for concurrency or multi-thread scenarios (in other language contexts), consider adding synchronization or clarifications about single-thread usage only.
index.html (1)
12-18
: Body style overrides for higher-level frameworks.
If a parent framework or theme might override body styles, confirm that black background and overscroll behavior remain consistent in final deployed environments.
src/main/main.mbt (1)
1-1
: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider completing the Store and Action implementations
The empty Store
and Action
declarations suggest incomplete porting from TypeScript. These are typically core components in state management.
Would you like help implementing the Store and Action types based on the TypeScript version?
Also applies to: 4-8
src/main/gpu.mbt (1)
1-34
: LGTM! Comprehensive vertex format implementation
The GPUVertexFormat
enum correctly implements all standard WebGPU vertex formats.
#|@fragment | ||
#|fn fragment_main(vtx_out: VertexOut) -> @location(0) vec4f { | ||
#| return vtx_out.color; | ||
#|} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Fragment shader: possibility of advanced shading.
Returning the exact vertex color is correct for a simple pipeline. If advanced shading, lighting, or texturing is planned, keep in mind that expansions here will require additional inputs, such as normals or UV coordinates.
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fn dispatch() -> Unit { | ||
render_app() | ||
} | ||
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///| | ||
extern "js" fn log_caterfoil() = | ||
#| () => console.log(globalThis.Caterfoil) | ||
fn render_app() -> Unit { | ||
let tree = comp_container() | ||
render_caterfoil_tree(tree, dispatch) | ||
paint_caterfoil_tree() | ||
} |
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🛠️ Refactor suggestion
Enhance dispatch to handle Actions
The dispatch
function currently doesn't process the Action
enum or update the store state. Consider implementing proper action handling for state management.
fn dispatch() -> Unit {
// TODO: Add action parameter and handle different action types
// match action {
// Action::... => { /* handle action */ }
// }
// Update store
render_app()
}
Committable suggestion skipped: line range outside the PR's diff.
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src/main/caterfoil.mbt (5)
7-7
: Use a more descriptive field name for “data”.
There's a prior suggestion to rename “data” to something more explicit like “vertex_data” or “attribute_data.” This clarifies intent, making the code more readable.
39-49
: Validate optional “get_params” runtime usage.
Be sure calls from JavaScript check if “getParams” is a function before invoking. Otherwise, referencing it when “None” may cause runtime issues. Consider returning a no-op or using default parameters.
Would you like a script to scan for “getParams” usage and ensure it’s called safely?
56-62
: Prepare for unsupported topologies in the future.
In case new topologies (e.g., “PatchList”) are introduced, ensure the application gracefully handles them or shows a clear error message.
70-78
: Use the language's standard conversion if available.
If MBT or the runtime offers a feature equivalent to “Display/ToString” traits or a typeclass, it might reduce manual boilerplate.
111-117
: Consider expandability for grouping logic.
If you need hierarchies, nested transformations, or advanced grouping in the future, adding optional metadata or transformation fields now will help avoid major refactoring later.
src/main/atom.mbt (1)
17-19
: Consider handling callbacks or signals on reset.
As previously mentioned, if other parts of your system should react to value changes, integrate a callback or event trigger here. This avoids silent state updates that bypass re-render or side-effects.
src/main/main.mbt (2)
13-16
: Enhance dispatch to handle actual actions.
A prior suggestion noted that the dispatch function could process different “Action” variants to update the store. If you plan to manage state changes, factor that logic here.
25-50
: Refactor the “loaded” function to improve error handling.
This function mixes context setup, texture initialization, and window logic. It might benefit from smaller functions or inline checks (e.g. handling promise rejections).
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Populate the “Action” enum or remove it if unused.
An empty enum may confuse readers about its purpose. Consider adding real variants or removing it until needed.
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moon.mod.json (1)
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: Add repository URL and package descriptionThe repository field is empty and description is missing. These fields are important for package discoverability and user understanding.
"name": "tiye/caterfoil", "version": "0.1.0", "readme": "README.md", - "repository": "", "repository": "https://github.com/WebGPU-Art/caterfoil.mbt", "license": "Apache-2.0", "keywords": [], - "description": "", "description": "WebGPU-based graphics project with shader support and state management", "source": "src"
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src/lib/js-value.mbt (4)
2-2
: Good introduction of the base JsValue type.
Defining a generic type to represent various JavaScript values is essential for seamless interop. This approach appears straightforward and flexible.
5-6
: Ensure correct type conversion logic.
All these functions: from_string, from_number, from_bool, from_object, from_array, and from_fn simply pass the values directly. This is fine for minimal bridging, but consider adding safeguards (e.g., verifying input shapes) if errors or unexpected values might appear in more advanced use cases.
Also applies to: 9-10, 13-14, 17-18, 21-22, 25-26
29-30
: JsObject type definition looks good.
This struct paves the way for wrapping JavaScript objects in a type-safe manner.
52-53
: JsArray type is aptly introduced.
This type structure will help manage JavaScript arrays more effectively.
src/main/container.mbt (5)
2-7
: Struct naming clarity.
Point4D is self-explanatory for a four-dimensional point, though w is often used for homogeneous coordinates in 3D transformations. This is consistent with graphics usage.
10-17
: Default parameter approach.
Allowing optional float parameters is convenient and the usage of or_default is concise. Just ensure that zero defaults are correct for all contexts where this constructor is used.
20-25
: Color struct design is clear.
(r, g, b, a) is a common approach. Good usage of alpha defaulting to 1.0.
28-35
: Optional parameters for Color.
Again, defaults appear correct. It's worth verifying that or_default won't conflict with alpha if the user supplies zero. If alpha=0 is intentional, this is fine.
38-41
: Vertex is well-defined.
Combining position and color is standard for a basic vertex structure.
src/lib/ffi.mbt (6)
14-15
: Promise type definition is minimal.
Defining a custom type for JavaScript Promises can streamline asynchronous interop.
31-32
: js_undefined utility function.
This is a small convenience that might be useful in bridging logic.
35-37
: Direct pass-through to the Caterfoil API.
These bridging functions (initialize_context, paint_caterfoil_tree, render_caterfoil_tree, reset_canvas_size, initialize_canvas_textures, setup_mouse_events, load_gamepad_control) pass calls to the global Caterfoil object. If security or performance contexts become a concern, add guards or pre-checks on the calls (e.g., if Caterfoil is undefined).
Also applies to: 39-41, 43-48, 50-52, 54-56, 58-60, 62-64
81-82
: Document retrieval is straightforward.
Returning the global document from the current window is typical.
Also applies to: 84-85
88-88
: Element type introduced.
Simple bridging type for DOM elements is consistent with your other definitions.
91-96
: query_selector bridging.
Exposes standard DOM queries. The code is straightforward, though consider error handling if the element is not found (i.e., it returns null in JavaScript).
src/lib/caterfoil.mbt (8)
2-10
: Well-structured CaterfoilObjectOptions.
This design is logical for capturing essential parameters: label, shader, topology, attributes, data, optional indices, and an optional function for parameters. Good alignment with typical rendering pipelines.
13-53
: "as_value" method effectively converts structure to a JsValue.
You properly handle arrays and sub-objects. Consider verifying large data sets or nested objects for performance or memory usage. Also, watch for potential name collisions in the object’s properties if they expand.
56-62
: ShaderPrimitiveTopology is intuitive.
You’ve enumerated standard topologies used in WebGPU.
70-78
: String conversions of the enum.
Straight mapping to descriptive strings is correct.
81-86
: CaterfoilAttribute ties field name to attribute format.
This is consistent with typical vertex attribute definitions.
89-94
: "as_value" reliably wraps the attribute.
Minimal overhead. The code is readable.
97-99
: CaterfoilRenderObject bridging.
Converting to a JsValue is straightforward. This helps ensure consistency with the rest of your “as_value” pattern.
Also applies to: 100-104
106-108
: object and group functions.
These produce render objects from your typed structures. The usage of “caterfoil_object” and “caterfoil_group” is consistent with the bridging code in ffi.mbt. Overall, it’s a clean approach to encapsulating the rendering logic.
Also applies to: 111-117
src/lib/moon.pkg.json (1)
1-1
: Verify if shader build configuration is needed
The empty configuration file might need shader build settings similar to those in src/main/moon.pkg.json
. If this directory contains or will contain shader files, consider adding appropriate build configuration.
✅ Verification successful
Empty configuration file is appropriate
The empty configuration in src/lib/moon.pkg.json
is correct as this directory contains MoonBit library files (.mbt
) that define types and interfaces, not shader files. The shader build configuration is properly placed in src/main/moon.pkg.json
where the actual shader files are processed.
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moon.mod.json (1)
2-2
: Verify package name consistency across codebase
The package name has been changed from "caterfoil-crafts" to "caterfoil".
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Package name change appears consistent across the codebase
The package name change from "caterfoil-crafts" to "caterfoil" is consistent across configuration files. The new name "tiye/caterfoil" is correctly referenced in:
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src/main/moon.pkg.json (1)
5-7
: Verify shader path and consider version pinning.
The shader path is relative. Ensure that shader/triangle.wgsl
exists in the correct location relative to this configuration file.
✅ Verification successful
Shader path verified and correctly located
The shader file triangle.wgsl
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src/lib/gpu.mbt (1)
36-71
: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Optimize string conversion for performance.
The current string conversion uses runtime matching. Consider using a static lookup table or const strings for better performance.
/// Static mapping of formats to their string representations
const FORMAT_STRINGS: [(GPUVertexFormat, &'static str)] = [
(GPUVertexFormat::Uint8x2, "uint8x2"),
// ... other mappings
];
pub fn GPUVertexFormat::to_string(self : GPUVertexFormat) -> String {
- match self {
- Uint8x2 => "uint8x2"
- // ... other cases
- }
FORMAT_STRINGS
.iter()
.find(|(format, _)| *format == self)
.map(|(_, s)| s)
.unwrap_or_default()
}
Note: This is a suggestion for potential optimization if string conversion becomes a performance bottleneck. The current implementation is clean and maintainable.
Likely invalid or redundant comment.
src/main/main.mbt (5)
7-7
: Empty Action enum needs implementation
20-24
: LGTM: Rendering pipeline looks good
The rendering pipeline follows a clear sequence:
- Creates component tree
- Renders the tree with dispatch callback
- Paints the final result
42-46
: Port the compilation info handler to MBT
57-58
: LGTM: Main function initialization looks good
The main function correctly sets up the application entry point.
28-29
:
Add error handling for WebGPU initialization
Critical WebGPU operations should include error handling.
-let _ret = @caterfoil.initialize_context().then(fn(_ctx) {
let _ret = @caterfoil.initialize_context().catch(fn(err) {
console_error("Failed to initialize WebGPU context:")
console_error(err)
}).then(fn(_ctx) {
Likely invalid or redundant comment.
extern "js" fn JsObject::new() -> JsObject = | ||
#| () => ({}) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Validate named property access and potential conflicts.
These external "set", "get", and "as_value" methods imply direct property manipulation. In a larger system, consider potential property naming collisions or non-string keys. Additional error handling may be worthwhile if used in untrusted contexts.
Also applies to: 36-41, 44-45, 48-49
extern "js" fn JsArray::new() -> JsArray = | ||
#| () => [] |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Array manipulation functions are straightforward.
Creating a new array and pushing values directly is a clean approach. Similar to objects, consider possible error handling for large or unexpected inputs if the arrays are user-controlled.
Also applies to: 59-60, 63-64
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fn comp_container() -> @caterfoil.CaterfoilRenderObject { | ||
let data = [] | ||
let vertex_list = [ | ||
{ position: Point4D::new(x=-100.0), color: Color::new(r=0.5, g=0.5, b=0.5) }, | ||
{ position: Point4D::new(x=100.0), color: Color::new(r=0.5, g=0.5, b=0.5) }, | ||
{ position: Point4D::new(y=-100.0), color: Color::new(r=0.5, g=0.5, b=0.5) }, | ||
{ position: Point4D::new(y=100.0), color: Color::new(g=1.0) }, | ||
{ position: Point4D::new(z=-100.0), color: Color::new(g=1.0) }, | ||
{ position: Point4D::new(z=100.0), color: Color::new(r=1.0) }, | ||
{ position: Point4D::new(w=-100.0), color: Color::new(r=1.0) }, | ||
{ position: Point4D::new(w=100.0), color: Color::new(r=1.0) }, | ||
] | ||
for vertex in vertex_list { | ||
data.push(vertex.to_value()) | ||
} | ||
@caterfoil.group([ | ||
@caterfoil.object({ | ||
label: "triangle", | ||
shader: triangle_wgsl, | ||
topology: LineList, | ||
attrs_list: [ | ||
{ field: "position", format: Float32x4 }, | ||
{ field: "color", format: Float32x4 }, | ||
], | ||
data, | ||
indices: None, | ||
get_params: None, | ||
}), | ||
]) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider bounding logic for geometry.
While comp_container populates data for lines in each dimension, you may want to handle dynamic geometry or support different shapes. This function is quite specialized for demonstration. That’s acceptable for now, but keep in mind future extensibility needs.
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self : Promise, | ||
f : (JsValue) -> JsValue | ||
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#| (self, f) => self.then(f) | ||
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Promise methods for chaining.
then and catch_error are mapped directly to JavaScript Promise methods, which is good. Consider whether you need to handle rejections in then or manage a final/finally method for resource cleanup.
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///| | ||
struct Atom[T] { | ||
mut value : T | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add documentation for the Atom structure.
The Atom[T]
structure appears to be a core state management primitive. Consider adding documentation comments explaining:
- The purpose and use cases
- Thread safety guarantees (if any)
- Example usage
/// A container for mutable state of type T.
///
/// # Example
/// ```
/// let counter = Atom::with_value(0)
/// counter.reset(counter.deref() 1)
/// ```
struct Atom[T] {
mut value : T
}
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider version pinning for external dependency.
The import of tiye/caterfoil/lib
doesn't specify a version. Consider pinning to a specific version for reproducible builds.
///| | ||
pub(all) enum GPUVertexFormat { | ||
Uint8x2 | ||
Uint8x4 | ||
Sint8x2 | ||
Sint8x4 | ||
Unorm8x2 | ||
Unorm8x4 | ||
Snorm8x2 | ||
Snorm8x4 | ||
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Uint16x4 | ||
Sint16x2 | ||
Sint16x4 | ||
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Snorm16x4 | ||
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Float32x4 | ||
Uint32 | ||
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Uint32x3 | ||
Uint32x4 | ||
Sint32 | ||
Sint32x2 | ||
Sint32x3 | ||
Sint32x4 | ||
Unorm10_10_10_2 | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add WebGPU spec reference and format documentation.
The GPUVertexFormat
enum comprehensively covers WebGPU vertex formats. Consider adding:
- Link to WebGPU spec
- Documentation for each format's byte size and usage
- Memory layout details
/// Vertex format types as defined in the WebGPU specification.
/// See: https://www.w3.org/TR/webgpu/#vertex-formats
///
/// Each format describes how vertex data is laid out in memory:
/// - Number of components (1-4)
/// - Data type (int, uint, float)
/// - Bit width (8, 16, 32)
/// - Normalization
pub(all) enum GPUVertexFormat {
/// Two 8-bit unsigned integer components
Uint8x2
// ... (similar docs for other variants)
}
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider optimizing render calls
The current implementation triggers a full render on every dispatch. Consider:
- Implementing a render batching mechanism
- Adding checks to prevent unnecessary renders
- Documenting the rendering lifecycle
This will help optimize performance, especially with frequent state updates.
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🛠️ Refactor suggestion
Define state properties in Store struct
The Store
struct is currently empty. Consider adding properties to manage the application state, such as canvas dimensions, rendering settings, or any other stateful data needed by the application.
-struct Store {} derive(Default)
struct Store {
canvas_width: f32,
canvas_height: f32,
clear_color: Color,
// Add other state properties
} derive(Default)
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src/lib/quaternion.mbt (2)
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mut w : Float | ||
mut x : Float | ||
mut y : Float | ||
mut z : Float | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider making quaternion components immutable if possible
Currently, the w, x, y, and z fields are declared as mutable. If frequent in-place operations are not strictly required, consider defaulting to immutable and providing specific mutation methods to reduce potential side effects.
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self.z * other.y | ||
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self.x * other.z | ||
self.y * other.w | ||
self.z * other.x | ||
let z = self.w * other.z | ||
self.x * other.y - | ||
self.y * other.x | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add doc comments for non-commutative multiplication
Quaternion multiplication is not commutative. Adding a brief mention in the doc comment would help novices avoid confusion.
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pub fn Quaternion::from_euler_angles( | ||
x : Float, | ||
y : Float, | ||
z : Float | ||
) -> Quaternion { | ||
let two : Float = 2.0 | ||
let half_x = x / two | ||
let half_y = y / two | ||
let half_z = z / two | ||
let cos_x_2 = @math.cos(half_x.to_double()).to_float() | ||
let cos_y_2 = @math.cos(half_y.to_double()).to_float() | ||
let cos_z_2 = @math.cos(half_z.to_double()).to_float() | ||
let sin_x_2 = @math.sin(half_x.to_double()).to_float() | ||
let sin_y_2 = @math.sin(half_y.to_double()).to_float() | ||
let sin_z_2 = @math.sin(half_z.to_double()).to_float() | ||
Quaternion::{ | ||
w: cos_x_2 * cos_y_2 * cos_z_2 sin_x_2 * sin_y_2 * sin_z_2, | ||
x: sin_x_2 * cos_y_2 * cos_z_2 cos_x_2 * sin_y_2 * sin_z_2, | ||
y: cos_x_2 * sin_y_2 * cos_z_2 sin_x_2 * cos_y_2 * sin_z_2, | ||
z: cos_x_2 * cos_y_2 * sin_z_2 sin_x_2 * sin_y_2 * cos_z_2, | ||
} | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Clarify rotation order for Euler angles
When converting from Euler angles, the rotation order (e.g., XYZ, ZYX, etc.) is crucial. Document the order used here (it appears to be a standard X->Y->Z approach).
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src/main/container.mbt (5)
9-17
: Good usage of optional parameters.
Using default values for optional Float parameters in Point4D::new is a neat approach, keeping constructors flexible and concise.
33-40
: Default alpha usage is sensible.
Providing an alpha default of 1.0 ensures fully opaque colors when not specified. Looks good.
43-46
: Structure clarity.
Vertex strictly couples a position and color. This is straightforward for 3D rendering pipelines.
49-61
: Hash map conversion is well-implemented.
Converting to a dictionary with separate "position" and "color" keys is neat. Ensure numeric arrays match the expected GPU shader attributes (e.g. float32).
64-95
: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Potential check for negative dimension values.
This function creates a range of negative/positive extremes (e.g., x= -100.0 to 100.0). While valid for demonstration, you may want to clarify whether negative w or negative coordinates are intentional. Also, note that you’re using “comp_fly_city()” but commented out “comp_lamp_tree()”. Confirm that the final assembly is correct.
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Negative coordinate values are intentional and correct in this context
The code shows a consistent pattern of using large positive and negative values (±100.0) to create axis lines for visualization. This is a common practice for rendering coordinate system guides. The commented out comp_lamp_tree()
and active comp_fly_city()
are also intentional, as they serve different visualization purposes:
comp_fly_city()
uses a scale of 200.0 units in x-directioncomp_lamp_tree()
(currently disabled) uses a scale of 100.0 units in y-direction
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src/main/lamp-tree.mbt (1)
31-66
: Flexible approach to geometry.
comp_lamp_tree builds a multiline structure via quaternions. This is creative. Ensure that color usage is consistent with the rest of the pipeline if additional attributes are needed (normals, etc.).
src/lib/quaternion.mbt (20)
1-41
: Well-documented usage examples.
The doc comments and inline examples are a helpful introduction to new contributors.
48-53
: Potential pitfall with mutable fields.
As previously mentioned in older review comments, if frequent in-place modifications are unneeded, making fields immutable by default can reduce side effects.
56-63
: Convenient constructor.
q(...) is a nice shortcut for creating quaternions, helpful for quick definitions.
66-68
: Identity quaternion is correct.
Quaternion::id returning w=1.0 and x=y=z=0.0 is standard. No issues.
70-83
: Good optional usage.
Quaternion::new with optional parameters is consistent with other “new” patterns. Straightforward implementation.
91-96
: In-place scale.
Checks out, but be mindful of chaining in-place transformations for clarity.
115-117
: Conjugate is straightforward.
Implementation is mathematically correct.
127-129
: Accurate square length.
Implementation is standard.
132-134
: Accurate length.
Implementation is standard, using sqrt of square_length.
137-139
: Reasonable default.
Default is a zero quaternion. This can be used for “no rotation, zero magnitude.”
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: Maximum float usage.
“Ties” to internal float representation can vary by platform, but if MoonBit ensures portability, that’s fine.
153-160
: Clear addition logic.
Simple and direct, no issues.
163-168
: Operator usage is consistent.
The in-place operator pattern is consistent with the rest of the library.
171-178
: Non-commutative multiplication.
Implementation aligns with the standard Hamilton product for quaternions. Good.
181-202
: In-place multiplication.
Implementation is correct. A note reminding devs that quaternion multiplication is non-commutative would be beneficial in doc comments.
210-217
: Straightforward subtraction.
Implementation is fine.
220-225
: In-place subtraction.
Operator usage is consistent.
228-230
: Negation approach is correct.
All components are flipped. This is typical for quaternions.
233-254
: Euler angle conversion clarity.
Method is standard, but document the rotation order (x->y->z). For multi-axis rotations, that detail is frequently important.
99-101
: Validate near-zero length before inverse.
If square_length is near zero, this could produce NaNs. Consider safety checks.
src/main/moon.pkg.json (1)
3-9
: Pre-build embedding workflow is clear.
The new pre-build step to embed the WGSL shader is a solid approach. Just make sure your environment includes all required tooling for “:embed”.
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struct Color { | ||
r : Float | ||
g : Float | ||
b : Float | ||
a : Float | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Expand usage examples for Color.
The Color struct is clear. A brief mention of typical RGBA ranges (0.0 to 1.0) could prevent user confusion.
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fn fold_line4( | ||
level : UInt, | ||
base : @caterfoil.Quaternion, | ||
v : @caterfoil.Quaternion, | ||
a : @caterfoil.Quaternion, | ||
b : @caterfoil.Quaternion, | ||
c : @caterfoil.Quaternion, | ||
d : @caterfoil.Quaternion, | ||
full_ : @caterfoil.Quaternion, | ||
minimal_seg : Float | ||
) -> Array[@caterfoil.Quaternion] { | ||
let v_ = v * full_ | ||
let br_a = v_ * a | ||
let br_b = v_ * b | ||
let br_c = v_ * c | ||
let br_d = v_ * d | ||
if level == 0 || v.square_length() <= minimal_seg { | ||
[base br_a, base br_b, base br_c, base v] | ||
} else { | ||
let l2 = level - 1 | ||
fold_line4(l2, base, br_a, a, b, c, d, full_, minimal_seg) | ||
fold_line4(l2, base br_a, br_b - br_a, a, b, c, d, full_, minimal_seg) | ||
fold_line4(l2, base br_b, br_c - br_b, a, b, c, d, full_, minimal_seg) | ||
fold_line4(l2, base br_c, br_d - br_c, a, b, c, d, full_, minimal_seg) | ||
fold_line4(l2, base br_d, v - br_d, a, b, c, d, full_, minimal_seg) | ||
} | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Recursion depth caution.
fold_line4 looks correct, but depth=10 can generate large arrays. Consider adding a boundary or a user-specified max to prevent potential performance hits in bigger scenes.
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fn comp_fly_city() -> @caterfoil.CaterfoilRenderObject { | ||
let fly_city = fold_line4( | ||
// 14, | ||
10, | ||
@caterfoil.Quaternion::default(), | ||
@caterfoil.Quaternion::new(x=200.0), | ||
@caterfoil.Quaternion::new(y=20.0, w=25.0), | ||
@caterfoil.Quaternion::new(x=5.0, y=20.0, z=10.0, w=25.0), | ||
@caterfoil.Quaternion::new(x=5.0, y=20.0, z=10.0, w=15.0), | ||
@caterfoil.Quaternion::new(y=20.0, w=15.0), | ||
@caterfoil.Quaternion::new(w=50.0).inverse(), | ||
0.16, | ||
) | ||
let data = [] | ||
for point in fly_city { | ||
let v = Vertex::{ | ||
position: Point4D::new(x=point.x, y=point.y, z=point.z, w=point.w).scale( | ||
4.0, | ||
), | ||
color: Color::new(r=1.0, g=1.0), | ||
} | ||
data.push(v.to_value()) | ||
} | ||
@caterfoil.object({ | ||
label: "fly-city", | ||
shader: triangle_wgsl, | ||
topology: LineStrip, | ||
attrs_list: [ | ||
{ field: "position", format: Float32x4 }, | ||
{ field: "color", format: Float32x4 }, | ||
], | ||
data, | ||
indices: None, | ||
get_params: None, | ||
}) | ||
} |
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🛠️ Refactor suggestion
Encapsulate repeated logic.
comp_fly_city mostly duplicates comp_lamp_tree logic, differing in initial quaternions. Factor out common code to reduce duplication and future maintenance overhead.
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pub fn Quaternion::scale(self : Quaternion, t : Float) -> Quaternion { | ||
Quaternion::{ w: self.w * t, x: self.x * t, y: self.y * t, z: self.z * t } | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Element-wise scale suits many use cases.
No issues. Possibly highlight this is not a “pure rotation” scale if the end user is expecting uniform rotation.
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pub fn Quaternion::conjugate_mut(self : Quaternion) -> Unit { | ||
self.x = -self.x | ||
self.y = -self.y | ||
self.z = -self.z | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Mutable conjugate.
Note that flipping signs in place can lead to confusion if used extensively. Provide usage guidelines.
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pub fn Quaternion::op_eq(self : Quaternion, other : Quaternion) -> Bool { | ||
(self - other).square_length() < 1.0.to_float() / max_value | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Equality check might be too relaxed.
Comparing with 1.0 / max_value is a minimal epsilon, but consider whether that’s sufficient for your domain’s floating precision.
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pub fn Quaternion::op_div(self : Quaternion, b : Quaternion) -> Quaternion { | ||
self.op_mul(b.inverse()) | ||
} |
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Zero check recommended for quaternion division
The implementation of quaternion division uses inverse()
, which internally divides by square_length()
. Since there are no zero checks in the implementation, division by a zero quaternion (where w=x=y=z=0) would lead to undefined behavior. Adding a zero check would prevent this edge case.
src/lib/quaternion.mbt
: Add zero check inop_div
orinverse
method usingsquare_length()
comparison with epsilon, similar to the pattern used inop_eq
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Division by a quaternion.
Implementation by multiplying with inverse is standard. Additional zero-check might be beneficial.
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Let me also check for any existing zero checks in the codebase and the square_length implementation.
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Based on the code analysis, I can now provide the final response:
Add guard clause for zero-length quaternions
The inverse_mut
method divides by square_length()
without any validation. This could lead to undefined behavior or numerical instability when the quaternion has zero length. Add a guard clause that either:
- Returns early for zero-length quaternions
- Throws an error for invalid input
- Sets a default value (like identity quaternion)
Example locations needing attention:
src/lib/quaternion.mbt:104-107
:inverse_mut
methodsrc/lib/quaternion.mbt
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Mutable inverse.
Same caution about zero-length. A fallback or guard clause can avoid numerical instability.
Let me search for related code to verify the concern about zero-length quaternions.
Let me search for any normalization or validation checks in the codebase that might be relevant to this concern.
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"alias": "caterfoil", | ||
"value": [] | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider version pinning.
Importing “tiye/caterfoil/lib” without a version can lead to unpredictable builds if that library changes. For large projects, pin a specific commit or version.
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src/main/moon.pkg.json (1)
10-20
: 🛠️ Refactor suggestionPin dependency versions for build reproducibility
Both
tiye/quaternion/lib
andtiye/caterfoil/lib
imports should specify versions to ensure reproducible builds. This is particularly important for a graphics rendering project where subtle changes in dependencies could affect visual output.Consider updating the imports to include specific versions or commit hashes:
"import": [ { "path": "tiye/quaternion/lib", "version": "<specific-version>", "alias": "quaternion" }, { "path": "tiye/caterfoil/lib", "version": "<specific-version>", "alias": "caterfoil", "value": [] } ]
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src/main/moon.pkg.json (1)
3-9
: Verify shader file existence
The pre-build configuration looks correct according to MoonBit's specifications. Let's verify the existence of the shader file.
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src/main/lamp-tree.mbt (3)
1-28
: Recursion depth caution.
fold_line4
looks correct, but a recursion level of 10 can generate large arrays. Consider providing a user-specified upper boundary or a more dynamic limit to avoid potential performance issues when handling bigger scenes.
30-66
: Encapsulate repeated logic between lamp-tree & fly-city.
The implementation of comp_lamp_tree
is almost identical to comp_fly_city
aside from the initial quaternions. Consider factoring out shared logic to reduce duplication and ease future maintenance.
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: Same structure repeated.
comp_fly_city
largely replicates comp_lamp_tree
. This duplication could be reduced by extracting common code into a helper function, improving clarity and maintainability.
.mooncakes/tiye/quaternion/src/lib/quaternion_test.mbt (4)
1-12
: Smoke tests for zero and NaN quaternions.
These initial tests effectively confirm the creation of zero and NaN quaternions. They look solid.
14-41
: Constructor tests for default and partial arguments.
Good thoroughness in testing various constructor paths. The coverage is commendable, checking each component thoroughly.
43-51
: Check floating precision issue in "scale/large_scalar" test.
The comment // why 1024?
suggests an unexpected offset for the y
component (30000001024). Verify if the tested environment or any rounding intricacies are causing this anomaly.
53-236
: Broad coverage of quaternion operations.
The series of tests (inverse, dot, equality, length, conjugate, addition, multiplication, division) excellently covers corner cases. However, in the "Quaternion::op_div/basic"
test (lines 226-236), the inline remark suggests a certain expected quaternion, yet the inspected content differs. Confirm if the final test output is correct or if the comment describing the manual calculation needs an update.
.mooncakes/tiye/quaternion/src/lib/quaternion.mbt (1)
1-41
: Informative documentation.
The docstrings and example usage provide a clear introduction to quaternion operations in MoonBit, helping users quickly understand this module’s capabilities.
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1-1
: Empty JSON file.
This file currently contains no content, which may be intentional as a placeholder. Confirm if additional metadata is expected in the future.
moon.mod.json (2)
4-6
: Consider the stability of early version dependencies
The quaternion package is at version 0.0.1, which typically indicates an early, potentially unstable release. Consider:
- Pinning to a specific commit hash for stability
- Waiting for a more stable release (>=0.1.0)
- Vendoring the code if the API is likely to change
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The package name has changed from "tiye/caterfoil-crafts" to "tiye/caterfoil". This could affect existing imports and references.
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- Clear description
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- Appropriate license specification
src/lib/ffi.mbt (3)
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.
Directly returning the global window
works in a browser environment but can fail on server-side or other non-browser contexts. If you anticipate usage outside the browser, consider gating or providing a fallback for safer cross-environment behavior.
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: Naming consistency for caterfoil_object
& caterfoil_group
.
These function names differ slightly from other patterns in the code. A more descriptive naming convention, like create_caterfoil_object
or create_caterfoil_group
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///| Quaternion {w, x, y, z} | ||
pub(all) struct Quaternion { | ||
mut w : Float | ||
mut x : Float | ||
mut y : Float | ||
mut z : Float | ||
} derive(Eq) | ||
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// Show | ||
///| | ||
pub fn Quaternion::to_string(self : Quaternion) -> String { | ||
"Quaternion { w: \{self.w}, x: \{self.x}, y: \{self.y}, z: \{self.z} }" | ||
} | ||
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///| | ||
pub impl Show for Quaternion with output(self, logger) { | ||
logger.write_string(self.to_string()) | ||
} | ||
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///| shortcut of create quaternion | ||
pub fn q(w : Float, x : Float, y : Float, z : Float) -> Quaternion { | ||
Quaternion::{ w, x, y, z } | ||
} | ||
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///| shortcut of creating quaternion from integers | ||
pub fn qi(w : Int, x : Int, y : Int, z : Int) -> Quaternion { | ||
q(w.to_float(), x.to_float(), y.to_float(), z.to_float()) | ||
} | ||
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///| returns an identity quaternion | ||
pub fn Quaternion::id() -> Quaternion { | ||
Quaternion::{ w: 1.0, x: 0.0, y: 0.0, z: 0.0 } | ||
} | ||
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///| returns a quaternion from xyz | ||
pub fn Quaternion::new( | ||
w? : Float, | ||
x? : Float, | ||
y? : Float, | ||
z? : Float | ||
) -> Quaternion { | ||
Quaternion::{ | ||
w: w.or_default(), | ||
x: x.or_default(), | ||
y: y.or_default(), | ||
z: z.or_default(), | ||
} | ||
} | ||
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///| Scales a quaternion (element-wise) by a scalar, returns a new one | ||
pub fn Quaternion::scale(self : Quaternion, t : Float) -> Quaternion { | ||
Quaternion::{ w: self.w * t, x: self.x * t, y: self.y * t, z: self.z * t } | ||
} | ||
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///| | ||
pub fn Quaternion::scale_mut(self : Quaternion, t : Float) -> Unit { | ||
self.w = self.w * t | ||
self.x = self.x * t | ||
self.y = self.y * t | ||
self.z = self.z * t | ||
} | ||
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///| return a inverse of a quaternion | ||
pub fn Quaternion::inverse(self : Quaternion) -> Quaternion { | ||
self.conjugate().scale(1.0.to_float() / self.square_length()) | ||
} | ||
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///| mutable version of inverse | ||
pub fn Quaternion::inverse_mut(self : Quaternion) -> Unit { | ||
self.scale_mut(1.0.to_float() / self.square_length()) | ||
self.conjugate_mut() | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Inverse edge case check.
Quaternion::inverse
and inverse_mut
simply calculate 1.0 / square_length()
. Note that a zero-length quaternion will result in NaNs or Infs. Although the tests handle it as expected, consider adding a small note in the docstring to warn users about inverting zero-length quaternions.
///| Returns true if the two quaternions very cloase, compared like: | ||
/// ```ignore | ||
/// |a-b|^2 < epsilon | ||
/// ``` | ||
pub fn Quaternion::op_eq(self : Quaternion, other : Quaternion) -> Bool { | ||
(self - other).square_length() < 1.0.to_float() / max_value | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Potential threshold adjustments in op_eq.
(self - other).square_length() < 1.0 / max_value
might be too permissive or too restrictive for certain floating scenarios. Consider allowing a configurable epsilon for finer-grained tolerance, depending on typical usage and numerical ranges.
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# Quaternion Library for MoonBit | ||
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MoonBit does not have `num_traits::Float` so this library is only using `Float`(i.e.`f32`). | ||
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```bash | ||
moon add tiye/quaternion | ||
``` | ||
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Find docs on Mooncaches. |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add usage details.
The README provides a basic overview of adding the library. Consider including fuller example usage, any relevant precision caveats, and a link to the test cases for advanced reference.
"version": "0.1.0", | ||
"deps": { | ||
"tiye/quaternion": "0.0.1" | ||
}, | ||
"readme": "README.md", | ||
"repository": "", | ||
"license": "Apache-2.0", |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add repository URL
The repository field is empty. Adding the repository URL would help users find the source code and contribute.
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same "printed page" as the copyright notice for easier | ||
identification within third-party archives. | ||
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Copyright [yyyy] [name of copyright owner] |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Complete the copyright notice
The copyright notice template needs to be filled out with the appropriate year and copyright owner information:
- Copyright [yyyy] [name of copyright owner]
Copyright 2024 WebGPU-Art
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pub extern "js" fn js_undefined() -> JsValue = | ||
#| () => undefined | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Usage of js_undefined
.
js_undefined
is a minimal bridging function. If it’s only used internally, consider inlining it within its call sites to reduce indirection. Otherwise, keep it for semantic clarity to indicate an explicit return of JavaScript undefined
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pub extern "js" fn paint_caterfoil_tree() -> Unit = | ||
#| () => Caterfoil.paintCaterfoilTree() | ||
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///| | ||
pub extern "js" fn render_caterfoil_tree( | ||
el : CaterfoilRenderObject, | ||
dispatch : () -> Unit | ||
) -> Unit = | ||
#| (el, dispatch) => Caterfoil.renderCaterfoilTree(el, dispatch) | ||
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///| | ||
pub extern "js" fn reset_canvas_size(canvas : Element) -> Unit = | ||
#| (canvas) => Caterfoil.resetCanvasSize(canvas) | ||
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pub extern "js" fn initialize_canvas_textures() -> Unit = | ||
#| () => Caterfoil.initializeCanvasTextures() | ||
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pub extern "js" fn setup_mouse_events() -> Unit = | ||
#| () => Caterfoil.setupMouseEvents() | ||
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///| | ||
pub extern "js" fn load_gamepad_control() -> Unit = | ||
#| () => Caterfoil.loadGamepadControl() | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Check for Caterfoil
object availability or errors.
All these external calls assume a globally available Caterfoil
object without error handling. If Caterfoil
is undefined or not loaded, these functions may throw runtime errors. Consider verifying its existence and gracefully handling missing or partial implementations (e.g., logging a warning).
///| set_onresize | ||
pub extern "js" fn Window::set_onresize(self : Window, f : () -> Unit) -> Unit = | ||
#| (window, f) => window.onresize = f | ||
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pub extern "js" fn Window::set_onload(self : Window, f : () -> Unit) -> Unit = | ||
#| (window, f) => window.onload = f | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Avoid overriding existing window event handlers with direct assignment.
window.onresize = f
and window.onload = f
remove any previously registered handlers. When multiple listeners are required, it’s preferable to use an event listener approach (e.g., addEventListener
). This design prevents accidental overwriting of existing logic.
///| | ||
pub(all) type Document | ||
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pub extern "js" fn Window::document(self : Window) -> Document = | ||
#| () => document | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Clarify document retrieval logic.
Window::document
unconditionally returns document
, implying a single top-level document. If there's a possibility of multiple frames or a specialized document context, ensure this approach covers all usage scenarios.
pub extern "js" fn Document::query_selector( | ||
self : Document, | ||
selector : String | ||
) -> Element = | ||
#| (document, selector) => document.querySelector(selector) | ||
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🛠️ Refactor suggestion
Handle potential null returns from querySelector
.
document.querySelector(selector)
can return null
if nothing matches. Consider returning an optional-like type (if supported) or handling this gracefully to avoid possible runtime errors.
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src/main/quat-tree.mbt (1)
13-16
: Verify negative ratio usage.
A negative ratio can lead to interesting fractals, but ensure that this behavior is intentional and does not cause confusion or unexpected results in certain transformations.
src/main/container.mbt (1)
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: Validate default arguments in Point4D::new
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struct Branch { | ||
from : @quaternion.Quaternion | ||
to : @quaternion.Quaternion | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider adding a brief doc comment for Branch
.
A short explanation of Branch
can aid others in understanding that it represents a line between two quaternions in your fractal tree structure.
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struct BaseBranch { | ||
line : @quaternion.Quaternion | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Clarify purpose for BaseBranch
.
While the structure definition is straightforward, consider elaborating on how BaseBranch
differs from Branch
or how it is intended to be used exclusively for transformations.
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fn generate_lines( | ||
base : @quaternion.Quaternion, | ||
l0 : @quaternion.Quaternion, | ||
level : UInt | ||
) -> Iter[Branch] { | ||
let line_to = base l0 | ||
let next : Iter[Branch] = if level > 0 { | ||
transformers | ||
.iter() | ||
.flat_map(fn(info) { | ||
let trans = info.line | ||
return generate_lines(line_to, l0 * trans, level - 1) | ||
}) | ||
} else { | ||
[].iter() | ||
} | ||
return ([{ from: base, to: line_to }].iter() next.iter()).iter() | ||
} |
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🛠️ Refactor suggestion
Consider limiting or monitoring recursion depth for performance.
generate_lines
is a recursive function called with level = 8
, which can produce a large number of lines quickly. For performance or memory constraints, consider capping the recursion depth, providing a user-defined limit, or implementing an early stopping condition.
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fn comp_quat_tree() -> @caterfoil.CaterfoilRenderObject { | ||
let p0 = @quaternion.q(0, 0, -15, 0) | ||
let l0 = @quaternion.q(0, 0, 20, 0) | ||
let lines = generate_lines(p0, l0, 8) | ||
let scaled = 20.0.to_float() | ||
let data = [] | ||
for branch in lines { | ||
let v = Vertex::{ | ||
position: Point4D::new( | ||
x=branch.from.x, | ||
y=branch.from.y, | ||
z=branch.from.z, | ||
w=branch.from.w, | ||
).scale(scaled), | ||
color: Color::new(r=1.0, g=1.0), | ||
} | ||
data.push(v.to_value()) | ||
let v = Vertex::{ | ||
position: Point4D::new( | ||
x=branch.to.x, | ||
y=branch.to.y, | ||
z=branch.to.z, | ||
w=branch.to.w, | ||
).scale(scaled), | ||
color: Color::new(r=1.0, g=1.0), | ||
} | ||
data.push(v.to_value()) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Document the geometry choices in comp_quat_tree
.
The function draws a fractal-like geometry with a fixed p0
and l0
. Adding clarifying comments or parameters could make it more adaptable or configurable for various fractal shapes.
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label: "fly-city", | ||
shader: triangle_wgsl, | ||
topology: LineList, | ||
attrs_list: [ | ||
{ field: "position", format: Float32x4 }, | ||
{ field: "color", format: Float32x4 }, | ||
], | ||
data, | ||
indices: None, | ||
get_params: None, | ||
}) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Review object label for clarity.
Using "fly-city"
as the label may be confusing without context. If it reflects the fractal concept, add a concise note explaining the naming choice or rename it to describe the fractal more literally.
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fn comp_axis() -> @caterfoil.CaterfoilRenderObject { |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add doc comment for comp_axis
.
A short explanation would make it clear that this function just draws the X, Y, Z, and W axes and colors them for reference.
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label: "triangle", | ||
shader: triangle_wgsl, | ||
topology: LineList, |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Align the label with the rendered topology.
The label is "triangle"
even though the topology is LineList
. Consider changing the label to something like "axis-lines"
for consistency.
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struct Point4D { | ||
x : Float | ||
y : Float | ||
z : Float | ||
w : Float | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add an inline comment or doc block for Point4D
.
Explaining that it is a four-dimensional point can aid contributors who are new to the concept, especially in 3D/4D transformations.
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fn Vertex::to_value( | ||
self : Vertex | ||
) -> @moonbitlang/core/hashmap.T[String, Array[Float]] { | ||
let dict : @moonbitlang/core/hashmap.T[String, Array[Float]] = @moonbitlang/core/hashmap.new() | ||
dict["position"] = [ | ||
self.position.x, | ||
self.position.y, | ||
self.position.z, | ||
self.position.w, | ||
] | ||
dict["color"] = [self.color.r, self.color.g, self.color.b, self.color.a] | ||
dict |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Facilitate modular usage of Vertex::to_value
.
Vertex::to_value
is highly useful. Consider if other data structures might also benefit from a similar conversion pattern for standardized serialization.
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///| | ||
fn comp_container() -> @caterfoil.CaterfoilRenderObject { | ||
@caterfoil.group([ | ||
// comp_lamp_tree(), | ||
// comp_fly_city(), | ||
// comp_axis(), | ||
comp_quat_tree(), | ||
]) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add references or comments for other objects in comp_container
.
You have commented out calls to other components (e.g., comp_axis
, comp_fly_city
). A note clarifying how these might be toggled on/off or combined in the future would help maintainers.
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src/main/moon.pkg.json (1)
16-24
: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)Consider version pinning for dependencies.
Importing dependencies without version constraints can lead to unpredictable builds if the libraries change.
Consider updating the import configurations to include specific versions:
{ "path": "tiye/quaternion/lib", - "alias": "quaternion" "alias": "quaternion", "version": "<specific-version>" }, { "path": "tiye/caterfoil/lib", "alias": "caterfoil", - "value": [] "value": [], "version": "<specific-version>" }
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src/main/container.mbt (6)
1-7
: Add an inline comment or doc block for Point4D
.
This aligns with the previous suggestion to clarify the struct’s purpose at a glance.
20-22
: Consider promoting immutability for Point4D::scale
.
If you want to prevent unintended side-effects, passing by reference instead of consuming self
could be more idiomatic.
35-40
: Expand usage examples for Color
.
A brief mention of typical RGBA ranges (e.g., 0.0 to 1.0) can prevent user confusion.
59-71
: Conversion to a hash map is well-structured; also facilitate modular usage of Vertex::to_value
.
Storing vertex data in a dictionary is straightforward for interoperability. Consider whether other data structures should adopt this pattern for uniformity.
74-82
: Add references or comments for other objects in comp_container
.
For the commented-out calls (e.g., comp_axis, comp_fly_city)
, add a note explaining how to enable or combine them for future flexibility.
1-82
: Overall Assessment
All other parts in this file appear correct and well-structured. Good job.
src/main/shader/polyline.wgsl (2)
35-67
: Consider edge case handling for negative or extreme r
values in transform_perspective
.
If r
becomes negative or too large, it might trigger undesired clipping or distortions.
105-108
: Fragment shader is straightforward.
No flaws detected—returning the vertex color looks fine.
package.json (1)
3-3
: Confirm version compatibility and check for vulnerabilities.
After incrementing vite
and @webgpu-art/caterfoil
, verify no breaking changes or security advisories affect your build.
Also applies to: 7-7
.gitattributes (1)
6-6
: LGTM! Wildcard pattern correctly matches shader files.
The pattern src/main/shader-*.mbt
appropriately covers all shader files (triangle, polyline) while being future-proof for additional shaders.
src/main/moon.pkg.json (1)
3-14
: LGTM! Pre-build tasks are well-structured.
The shader embedding tasks are properly configured with consistent naming and paths.
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struct UBO { | ||
cone_back_scale: f32, | ||
viewport_ratio: f32, | ||
look_distance: f32, | ||
scale: f32, | ||
camera_position: vec4f, | ||
forward: vec4f, | ||
// direction up overhead, better unit vector | ||
upward: vec4f, | ||
rightward: vec4f, | ||
w_direction: vec4f, | ||
}; |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add doc comments for each field in UBO
.
Short descriptions for each uniform field can help maintainers understand how these values drive the perspective calculations.
src/main/shader/polyline.wgsl
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@vertex | ||
fn vertex_main( | ||
@location(0) position: vec4f, | ||
@location(1) color: vec4f, | ||
@location(2) direction: vec4f, // width also encoded in w | ||
@location(3) side: i32, | ||
) -> VertexOut { | ||
var output: VertexOut; | ||
let p = transform_perspective(position).point_position; | ||
let scale: f32 = 0.002; | ||
let width = length(direction.xyz) * scale; | ||
let unit_direction = normalize(direction); | ||
let p_next = transform_perspective(position unit_direction).point_position; | ||
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// use perpendicular direction to draw the line | ||
let canvas_direction = (p_next - p).xy; | ||
let perp = vec2(-canvas_direction.y, canvas_direction.x); | ||
let brush = vec4f(perp * width * 0.5, 0., 0.); | ||
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output.position = vec4(p.xyz * scale, 1.0); | ||
if side > 0i { | ||
output.position = brush; | ||
} else { | ||
output.position -= brush; | ||
} | ||
output.color = color; | ||
return output; | ||
} | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Evaluate line thickness calculation for degenerate cases.
Using (p_next - p).xy
works well, but if the direction is near zero, you might need a safeguard to avoid artifacts.
src/main/shader-polyline.mbt
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#| camera_position: vec4f, | ||
#| forward: vec4f, | ||
#| // direction up overhead, better unit vector | ||
#| upward: vec4f, | ||
#| rightward: vec4f, | ||
#| w_direction: vec4f, | ||
#|}; | ||
#| | ||
#|struct Params { | ||
#| _pad: f32, | ||
#|} | ||
#| | ||
#|@group(0) @binding(0) var<uniform> uniforms: UBO; | ||
#|@group(0) @binding(1) var<uniform> params: Params; | ||
#| | ||
#|// perspective | ||
#| | ||
#|struct PointResult { | ||
#| point_position: vec3f, | ||
#| r: f32, | ||
#| s: f32, | ||
#|}; | ||
#| | ||
#|const sqrt2: f32 = 1.41421356237; | ||
#| | ||
#|fn transform_perspective(p: vec4f) -> PointResult { | ||
#| let forward = uniforms.forward; | ||
#| let w_direction = uniforms.w_direction; | ||
#| let upward = uniforms.upward; | ||
#| let rightward = uniforms.rightward; | ||
#| let look_distance = uniforms.look_distance; | ||
#| let camera_position = uniforms.camera_position; | ||
#| | ||
#| let moved_point: vec4f = (p - camera_position); | ||
#| | ||
#| let s: f32 = uniforms.cone_back_scale; | ||
#| | ||
#| /// use a combined direction to sense both forward and w_direction, | ||
#| /// it is tricky since we don't know the real sight in 4D space | ||
#| let look_direction = (forward w_direction) / sqrt2; | ||
#| | ||
#| let r: f32 = ga4_vec4f_inner(moved_point, look_direction) / look_distance; | ||
#| | ||
#| // if dz < (s * -0.9) || dw < (s * -0.9) { | ||
#| // // make it disappear with depth test since it's probably behind the camera | ||
#| // return PointResult(vec3(0.0, 0.0, 10000.), r, s); | ||
#| // } | ||
#| | ||
#| let screen_scale: f32 = (s 1.0) / (r s); | ||
#| let y_next: f32 = ga4_vec4f_inner(moved_point, upward) * screen_scale; | ||
#| let x_next: f32 = ga4_vec4f_inner(moved_point, rightward) * screen_scale; | ||
#| let z_next: f32 = r 0.4; // negtive value is behind the camera and will be clipped | ||
#| | ||
#| return PointResult( | ||
#| vec3(x_next, y_next / uniforms.viewport_ratio, z_next) * uniforms.scale, | ||
#| r, s | ||
#| ); | ||
#|} | ||
#| | ||
#|// main | ||
#| | ||
#|struct VertexOut { | ||
#| @builtin(position) position: vec4f, | ||
#| @location(0) color: vec4f, | ||
#|}; | ||
#| | ||
#|@vertex | ||
#|fn vertex_main( | ||
#| @location(0) position: vec4f, | ||
#| @location(1) color: vec4f, | ||
#| @location(2) direction: vec4f, // width also encoded in w | ||
#| @location(3) side: i32, | ||
#|) -> VertexOut { | ||
#| var output: VertexOut; | ||
#| let p = transform_perspective(position).point_position; | ||
#| let scale: f32 = 0.002; | ||
#| let width = length(direction.xyz) * scale; | ||
#| let unit_direction = normalize(direction); | ||
#| let p_next = transform_perspective(position unit_direction).point_position; | ||
#| | ||
#| // use perpendicular direction to draw the line | ||
#| let canvas_direction = (p_next - p).xy; | ||
#| let perp = vec2(-canvas_direction.y, canvas_direction.x); | ||
#| let brush = vec4f(perp * width * 0.5, 0., 0.); | ||
#| | ||
#| output.position = vec4(p.xyz * scale, 1.0); | ||
#| if side > 0i { | ||
#| output.position = brush; | ||
#| } else { | ||
#| output.position -= brush; | ||
#| } | ||
#| output.color = color; | ||
#| return output; | ||
#|} | ||
#| | ||
#|@fragment | ||
#|fn fragment_main(vtx_out: VertexOut) -> @location(0) vec4f { | ||
#| return vtx_out.color; | ||
#|} | ||
#| |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider referencing an external WGSL file rather than embedding it as a large multiline string.
This can improve readability and allow for better editor/tooling support.
src/main/quat-curve.mbt
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struct PolylineVertex { | ||
position : Point4D | ||
color : Color | ||
direction : Point4D | ||
side : Int | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add a doc block for PolylineVertex
.
Describing each field (position, color, direction, and side) clarifies how they shape polylines.
src/main/quat-curve.mbt
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fn PolylineVertex::to_value( | ||
self : PolylineVertex | ||
) -> @moonbitlang/core/hashmap.T[String, Array[Float]] { | ||
let dict : @moonbitlang/core/hashmap.T[String, Array[Float]] = @moonbitlang/core/hashmap.new() | ||
dict["position"] = self.position.to_array() | ||
dict["color"] = [self.color.r, self.color.g, self.color.b, self.color.a] | ||
dict["direction"] = self.direction.to_array() | ||
dict["side"] = [self.side.to_float()] // need int but JavaScript auto converts | ||
dict | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Avoid duplicating logic between PolylineVertex::to_value
and Vertex::to_value
.
If possible, unify these implementations for more consistent serialization practices.
src/main/quat-curve.mbt
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fn comp_quat_curve() -> @caterfoil.CaterfoilRenderObject { | ||
let data = [] | ||
let points : Array[@quaternion.Quaternion] = [] | ||
for i = 0; i < 100; i = i 1 { | ||
// a spiral curve | ||
let t = i.to_float() / 10.0 | ||
let x = t * 10.0 | ||
let y = t * (@math.cos(t.to_double()) * 10.0).to_float() | ||
let z = t * (@math.sin(t.to_double()) * 10.0).to_float() | ||
let w = t * 1.0 | ||
points.push({ x, y, z, w }) | ||
} | ||
for i = 0; i < 99; i = i 1 { | ||
// for each line segment, push two triangles, or 6 vertices | ||
let p0 = points[i] | ||
let p1 = points[i 1] | ||
let length = (p1 - p0).length() | ||
let width = 2.0.to_float() | ||
let direction = (p1 - p0).scale(1.0.to_float() / length) | ||
let direction = Point4D::from_quaternion(direction.scale(width)) | ||
let pos = Point4D::from_quaternion(p0) | ||
let pos_next = Point4D::from_quaternion(p1) | ||
let color = Color::new(r=1.0) | ||
data.push( | ||
PolylineVertex::{ position: pos, color, direction, side: 0 }.to_value(), | ||
) | ||
data.push( | ||
PolylineVertex::{ position: pos_next, color, direction, side: 0 }.to_value(), | ||
) | ||
data.push( | ||
PolylineVertex::{ position: pos, color, direction, side: 1 }.to_value(), | ||
) | ||
data.push( | ||
PolylineVertex::{ position: pos, color, direction, side: 1 }.to_value(), | ||
) | ||
data.push( | ||
PolylineVertex::{ position: pos_next, color, direction, side: 1 }.to_value(), | ||
) | ||
data.push( | ||
PolylineVertex::{ position: pos_next, color, direction, side: 0 }.to_value(), | ||
) | ||
} | ||
@caterfoil.object({ | ||
label: "triangle", | ||
shader: polyline_wgsl, | ||
topology: TriangleList, | ||
attrs_list: [ | ||
{ field: "position", format: Float32x4 }, | ||
{ field: "color", format: Float32x4 }, | ||
{ field: "direction", format: Float32x4 }, | ||
{ field: "side", format: Sint32 }, | ||
], | ||
data, | ||
indices: None, | ||
get_params: None, | ||
}) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider making spiral resolution customizable in comp_quat_curve
.
A tunable parameter or approach can help manage performance and complexity for large numbers of points.
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Actionable comments posted: 14
🔭 Outside diff range comments (1)
src/lib/color.mbt (1)
Line range hint
20-74
: Check spelling ofblue_brigher
.
Should it beblue_brighter
? If so, rename to avoid confusion.
♻️ Duplicate comments (1)
src/main/quat-curve.mbt (1)
2-3
: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)Consider adding a parameter for the spiral resolution
Hardcoding the iteration count to 100 may work for now, but could limit flexibility. Introducing a customizable resolution or step size for the spiral curve can accommodate various use cases without needing to modify this source code.
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🔇 Additional comments (48)
src/main/main.mbt (6)
3-4
: Populate ‘Store’ with meaningful fields or keep it minimal intentionally.
In a previous review, it was recommended to define state properties in Store
. Reiterating that suggestion here for clarity.
6-7
: Populate or remove the ‘Action’ enum.
Past feedback suggested adding variants or removing this enum if it’s not used.
9-13
: Initialization of the store looks correct.
No immediate concerns here. This usage of Atom::with_value
is straightforward.
20-24
: Ensure fallback on builder errors in render_app
.
Returning [email protected]
is great, but confirm that upstream handles the error properly if it bubbles up.
27-54
: Query selector and event overrides need caution.
query_selector("canvas")
may return null, potentially causing failures.- Directly assigning
window.onresize
can override other handlers. Consider usingaddEventListener
for safer composition.
61-64
: Consider porting or removing the compilation info handler.
A prior review recommended porting __caterfoilHandleCompilationInfo
for error extraction. If you still need it, uncomment and adapt.
src/main/quat-tree.mbt (6)
1-5
: Add doc comments to describe Branch
.
A short explanation of its purpose helps clarify how it fits into the quaternion fractal logic.
8-10
: Clarify how BaseBranch
differs from Branch
.
Code might benefit from a quick note explaining whether BaseBranch
is for base transformations or a different use case.
13-14
: Double-check sign and usage of ratio
& r2
.
Negative ratio is interesting for fractal transforms. Make sure this is intentional.
19-26
: Use more descriptive names for your transformers if they have distinct roles.
Helps with maintenance and readability.
29-46
: Consider limiting recursion depth in generate_lines
.
A large recursion level might cause performance or memory issues. If needed, provide user-defined limits.
49-89
: Review object label “fly-city” for clarity.
If it’s a fractal or quaternion tree, clarify or rename the label to reduce confusion for readers.
src/lib/caterfoil.mbt (10)
2-3
: Initialization function appears well-defined.
Make sure Caterfoil.initializeContext()
is available globally. Otherwise, handle or log errors if undefined.
5-7
: paint_caterfoil_tree
usage looks straightforward.
No immediate issues; just confirm drawing steps and external script availability.
10-15
: Confirm render_caterfoil_tree
integrates well with your dispatch mechanism.
Passing a callback to an external JS function requires consistent function signatures.
41-49
: CaterfoilObjectOptions
fits well for flexible rendering.
Ensure your optional get_params
function is tested.
52-92
: as_value
method is comprehensive.
Data structure transformation looks correct. Just confirm that nested arrays match the expected JavaScript shape.
95-107
: CaterfoilAttribute
usage is straightforward.
This successfully translates fields into JS for GPU pipeline usage.
111-112
: CaterfoilRenderObject type alias
No issues – a clean approach to unify the render object type.
114-118
: CaterfoilRenderObject::as_value
bridging
Ensure no type mismatch in the final JavaScript object if modifications happen outside.
120-122
: object(options)
creation is succinct.
It helps keep code readable by delegating the final object creation to JS.
125-131
: Grouping multiple render objects
Implementation is fine. Just ensure lifetimes and references remain valid if you transform the final group object in JS.
src/lib/color.mbt (2)
2-7
: Color
struct is simple and clear.
No immediate issues; straightforward RGBA representation.
10-17
: Defaulting alpha to 1.0 is typical.
Implementation is correct. If partial transparency is required, ensure usage is consistent across the code.
src/lib/ffi.mbt (9)
2-3
: Consider documenting the Promise
type.
A prior review suggested clarifying that it mirrors JS promises. This helps new contributors.
5-16
: Evaluate whether a .finally
method is needed.
If you’re handling resources or cleanup, adding a finalizing method can be valuable.
19-21
: js_undefined
bridging is useful.
No issues here; just confirm all call sites want a literal JS undefined.
30-32
: Direct assignment to window.onresize
.
This overrides any existing handler. If multiple resize actions are expected, consider addEventListener
.
34-36
: Overwriting window.onload
can block other onload logic.
addEventListener("load", ...)
might be more robust for multi-handler scenarios.
48-53
: query_selector
might return null.
Consider returning an optional type or checking for validity to avoid runtime errors.
55-57
: Object bridging with caterfoil_object
.
Neatly matches usage in caterfoil.mbt
; naming is consistent enough if well-documented.
59-61
: caterfoil_group
grouping approach
This is a neat abstraction; no major concerns.
63-64
: Simple log_js_value
is helpful for debugging.
No suggestions; this bridging function is minimal and effective.
src/main/quat-curve.mbt (1)
5-13
: Verify quaternion usage and range
The quaternion's final component w = t * 1.0
appears to be scaling linearly with the iteration count. Ensure that downstream code handles non-normalized quaternions.
src/main/lamp-tree.mbt (1)
73-108
: Encapsulate common logic between comp_lamp_tree
and comp_fly_city
Both functions do similar operations: calling fold_line4
, iterating over points, creating Vertex
objects, and building a CaterfoilRenderObject
. Consider extracting the shared logic into a helper to simplify maintenance.
src/lib/vertex.mbt (2)
16-28
: Avoid duplicating the to_value
pattern
Both Vertex::to_value
and PolylineVertex::to_value
share conceptually similar transformations. Consider unifying or abstracting them if further expansions are anticipated, to reduce duplication and keep changes consistent.
64-130
: Validate width usage
When width
is unspecified, it defaults to 2.0. Ensure that a width of 0.0 or negative values are gracefully handled, preventing unintended scaling or visual artifacts.
src/lib/moon.pkg.json (1)
1-3
: Confirm that dependencies resolve correctly
You’re importing tiye/quaternion/lib
under alias quaternion
. Confirm this path or alias remains valid as your project expands. Mismatches between names or folder structures are a frequent cause of build errors.
.gitignore (1)
13-13
: LGTM: Appropriate addition to .gitignore
The addition of .mooncakes/
to ignore build/cache artifacts is appropriate.
package.json (1)
3-3
: Verify compatibility with updated dependencies
The update to @webgpu-art/caterfoil
from ^0.0.1 to ^0.0.3 is significant since early versions (0.0.x) might include breaking changes. Please ensure compatibility with your WebGPU rendering implementation.
Let's check the changelog and recent issues:
Also applies to: 7-7
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Let me check the actual usage in the identified files:
Dependency update appears safe to proceed
The codebase has minimal integration with @webgpu-art/caterfoil
:
- It's only imported and exposed to the window object in
src/caterfoil.mjs
- It's properly excluded from Vite's dependency optimization
- The update from 0.0.1 to 0.0.3 adds three new dependencies but doesn't show signs of breaking changes in the basic usage pattern
Since the integration is simple and isolated, the version update should be safe. The Vite update is just a patch version increment (6.0.5 to 6.0.6) which typically only includes bug fixes.
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src/main/alias.mbt (1)
1-11
: Well-organized type aliases with clear separation
The type aliases are well-organized and improve code readability by providing convenient shortcuts to commonly used types.
Let's verify the imported types exist:
moon.mod.json (2)
2-2
: LGTM: Package name update and quaternion dependency addition
The package rename and addition of the quaternion dependency align well with the project's graphics rendering focus.
Also applies to: 4-6
9-9
: Add repository URL
The repository field is still empty. Adding the repository URL would help users find the source code and contribute.
src/main/container.mbt (1)
1-10
: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add documentation and improve error handling
A few suggestions to enhance this component:
- Add documentation explaining why certain components are commented out and when they might be enabled.
- Consider adding error handling for the BuilderError type that's specified in the return type.
Example documentation format:
/// Container component that composes multiple rendering objects
/// Currently enabled:
/// - axis: Basic coordinate system visualization
/// - quat_curve: Quaternion-based curve rendering
/// TODO: Enable additional components:
/// - lamp_tree: (Add description)
/// - fly_city: (Add description)
/// - quat_tree: (Add description)
Likely invalid or redundant comment.
src/main/moon.pkg.json (2)
9-13
: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider version pinning for caterfoil dependency
The caterfoil import doesn't specify a version, which could lead to build inconsistencies. Consider pinning to a specific version like you did with quaternion.
{
"path": "tiye/caterfoil/lib",
"alias": "caterfoil",
- "value": []
"value": ["0.1.0"]
}
Likely invalid or redundant comment.
3-3
: Verify if pre-build configuration is needed
The pre-build array is empty. If shader embedding or other pre-build steps are needed, they should be configured here.
✅ Verification successful
Empty pre-build configuration is correct
The codebase uses shader strings directly from the caterfoil library through function calls (@caterfoil.lines_wgsl()
and @caterfoil.polyline_wgsl()
), rather than embedding external shader files. Since there are no standalone shader files or other assets that need pre-processing, the empty pre-build array is the correct configuration.
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src/main/axis.mbt (2)
1-2
: Add doc comment for comp_axis
.
A short explanation would make it clear that this function just draws the X, Y, Z, and W axes and colors them for reference.
24-26
: Align the label with the rendered topology.
The label is "triangle"
even though the topology is TriangleList
. Consider changing the label to something like "axis-lines"
for consistency.
src/main/main.mbt
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fn main { | ||
log_caterfoil() | ||
@caterfoil.window().set_onload(loaded) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Check if overriding onload
is desired.
If other onload actions exist, they’ll be replaced. Event listeners might be more flexible if multiple callbacks are needed.
for i = 0; i < 99; i = i 1 { | ||
// for each line segment, push two triangles, or 6 vertices |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Optimize loop structure
A line segment is computed for every pair of adjacent points. If spiral resolution changes significantly, consider a more memory-efficient approach or early checks to handle degenerate segments (very small or zero length).
src/main/quat-curve.mbt
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@caterfoil.object({ | ||
label: "triangle", | ||
shader: @caterfoil.polyline_wgsl(), | ||
topology: TriangleList, | ||
attrs_list: PolylineVertex::attrs(), | ||
data, | ||
indices: None, | ||
get_params: None, | ||
}) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Update the object label or clarify usage
The label is set to "triangle"
, but the geometry forms a polyline-like structure with two triangles per segment. Consider naming it "spiral-polyline"
or something more descriptive.
fn fold_line4( | ||
level : UInt, | ||
base : Quaternion, | ||
v : Quaternion, | ||
a : Quaternion, | ||
b : Quaternion, | ||
c : Quaternion, | ||
d : Quaternion, | ||
full_ : Quaternion, | ||
minimal_seg : Float | ||
) -> Array[Quaternion] { | ||
let v_ = v * full_ | ||
let br_a = v_ * a | ||
let br_b = v_ * b | ||
let br_c = v_ * c | ||
let br_d = v_ * d | ||
if level == 0 || v.square_length() <= minimal_seg { | ||
[base br_a, base br_b, base br_c, base v] | ||
} else { | ||
let l2 = level - 1 | ||
fold_line4(l2, base, br_a, a, b, c, d, full_, minimal_seg) | ||
fold_line4(l2, base br_a, br_b - br_a, a, b, c, d, full_, minimal_seg) | ||
fold_line4(l2, base br_b, br_c - br_b, a, b, c, d, full_, minimal_seg) | ||
fold_line4(l2, base br_c, br_d - br_c, a, b, c, d, full_, minimal_seg) | ||
fold_line4(l2, base br_d, v - br_d, a, b, c, d, full_, minimal_seg) | ||
} | ||
} |
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🛠️ Refactor suggestion
Guard against large recursion
The fold_line4
function recursively generates quaternions until level == 0
or a minimal segment size is reached. For bigger scenes or accidental large recursion levels, add checks or user feedback to prevent performance bottlenecks or stack overflows.
src/main/lamp-tree.mbt
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fn comp_lamp_tree() -> @caterfoil.CaterfoilRenderObject { | ||
let lamp_tree = fold_line4( | ||
// 14, | ||
10, | ||
Quaternion::default(), | ||
Quaternion::new(y=100.0), | ||
Quaternion::new(y=20.0, w=22.0), | ||
Quaternion::new(x=16.0, y=20.0, w=23.0), | ||
Quaternion::new(x=16.0, y=20.0, w=27.0), | ||
Quaternion::new(y=20.0, w=28.0), | ||
Quaternion::new(w=50.0).inverse(), | ||
0.02, | ||
) | ||
let data = [] | ||
for point in lamp_tree { | ||
let v = @caterfoil.Vertex::{ | ||
position: Quaternion::new(x=point.x, y=point.y, z=point.z, w=point.w).scale( | ||
4.0, | ||
), | ||
color: @caterfoil.Color::new(r=1.0, g=1.0), | ||
} | ||
data.push(v.to_value()) | ||
} | ||
@caterfoil.object({ | ||
label: "lamp-tree", | ||
shader: @caterfoil.lines_wgsl(), | ||
topology: LineStrip, | ||
attrs_list: [ | ||
{ field: "position", format: Float32x4 }, | ||
{ field: "color", format: Float32x4 }, | ||
], | ||
data, | ||
indices: None, | ||
get_params: None, | ||
}) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Allow user-defined recursion levels
comp_lamp_tree
currently calls fold_line4
with a fixed level (10). Consider adding a parameter or config to permit different recursion depths based on user needs or performance constraints.
src/main/axis.mbt
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let triangles_list = @caterfoil.create_vertex_data!(axis_x, width=1) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!(axis_y, width=1) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!(axis_z, width=2) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!(axis_w, width=2) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Document the width differences between axes.
Z and W axes have width=2 while X and Y have width=1. Consider adding a comment explaining the reasoning behind these different widths, or standardize them if there's no specific need for the variation.
src/main/axis.mbt
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let axis_x : Array[@caterfoil.Vertex] = [ | ||
{ position: Quaternion::new(x=-20.0), color: Color::yellow() }, | ||
{ position: Quaternion::new(x=200.0), color: Color::yellow() }, | ||
] | ||
let axis_y : Array[@caterfoil.Vertex] = [ | ||
{ position: Quaternion::new(y=-20.0), color: Color::orange() }, | ||
{ position: Quaternion::new(y=200.0), color: Color::orange() }, | ||
] | ||
let axis_z : Array[@caterfoil.Vertex] = [ | ||
{ position: Quaternion::new(z=-20.0), color: Color::gray() }, | ||
{ position: Quaternion::new(z=200.0), color: Color::gray() }, | ||
] | ||
let axis_w : Array[@caterfoil.Vertex] = [ | ||
{ position: Quaternion::new(w=-20.0), color: Color::blue_brigher() }, | ||
{ position: Quaternion::new(w=200.0), color: Color::blue_brigher() }, | ||
] |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider symmetric axis ranges.
The axes currently extend from -20 to 200, which is asymmetric. For better visual reference, consider using symmetric ranges (e.g., -100 to 100).
- { position: Quaternion::new(x=-20.0), color: Color::yellow() },
- { position: Quaternion::new(x=200.0), color: Color::yellow() },
{ position: Quaternion::new(x=-100.0), color: Color::yellow() },
{ position: Quaternion::new(x=100.0), color: Color::yellow() },
(Apply similar changes to other axes)
Committable suggestion skipped: line range outside the PR's diff.
fn ShaderPrimitiveTopology::to_string(self : ShaderPrimitiveTopology) -> String { | ||
match self { | ||
PointList => "point-list" | ||
LineList => "line-list" | ||
LineStrip => "line-strip" | ||
TriangleList => "triangle-list" | ||
TriangleStrip => "triangle-strip" | ||
} | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Standardize string format across to_string implementations.
The string format is inconsistent between the two enums:
- ShaderPrimitiveTopology uses kebab-case ("point-list")
- GPUVertexFormat doesn't use hyphens ("uint8x2")
Consider standardizing the format across all string representations.
Also applies to: 62-96
} | ||
|
||
///| | ||
fn ShaderPrimitiveTopology::to_string(self : ShaderPrimitiveTopology) -> String { |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Align visibility modifiers for to_string methods.
GPUVertexFormat::to_string is marked as pub
while ShaderPrimitiveTopology::to_string isn't. Consider standardizing the visibility across similar methods.
-fn ShaderPrimitiveTopology::to_string(self : ShaderPrimitiveTopology) -> String {
pub fn ShaderPrimitiveTopology::to_string(self : ShaderPrimitiveTopology) -> String {
Also applies to: 62-62
///| | ||
pub(all) enum ShaderPrimitiveTopology { | ||
PointList | ||
LineList | ||
LineStrip | ||
TriangleList | ||
TriangleStrip | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add documentation for primitive topology types.
Consider adding documentation explaining each topology type and its use cases, similar to the vertex format documentation suggestion from the previous review.
/// Primitive topology types as defined in the WebGPU specification.
/// See: https://www.w3.org/TR/webgpu/#primitive-topology
///
/// Each topology describes how vertices are interpreted to form primitives:
/// - PointList: Each vertex defines a point
/// - LineList: Every two vertices define a line
/// - LineStrip: Each vertex after the first forms a line with the previous vertex
/// - TriangleList: Every three vertices define a triangle
/// - TriangleStrip: Each vertex after the first two forms a triangle with the previous two vertices
pub(all) enum ShaderPrimitiveTopology {
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///| | |
pub(all) enum ShaderPrimitiveTopology { | |
PointList | |
LineList | |
LineStrip | |
TriangleList | |
TriangleStrip | |
} | |
/// Primitive topology types as defined in the WebGPU specification. | |
/// See: https://www.w3.org/TR/webgpu/#primitive-topology | |
/// | |
/// Each topology describes how vertices are interpreted to form primitives: | |
/// - PointList: Each vertex defines a point | |
/// - LineList: Every two vertices define a line | |
/// - LineStrip: Each vertex after the first forms a line with the previous vertex | |
/// - TriangleList: Every three vertices define a triangle | |
/// - TriangleStrip: Each vertex after the first two forms a triangle with the previous two vertices | |
pub(all) enum ShaderPrimitiveTopology { | |
PointList | |
LineList | |
LineStrip | |
TriangleList | |
TriangleStrip | |
} |
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src/main/main.mbt (5)
6-7
: Populate the 'Action' enum or remove it if unused
This was previously flagged in a past review. Having an empty enum can confuse readers about its purpose.
15-17
: Handle potential render errors
Calling render_app?().unwrap()
might terminate the entire application if render_app
fails. Using .unwrap()
is risky; consider more graceful error handling or user feedback.
27-54
: Provide more robust error handling in loaded
Currently, initialize_context
and render_app
calls are unwrapped. Any failure will abort the function. Consider adding recovery or logging to help diagnose issues during initialization.
58-59
: Check overriding onload behavior
Directly setting window.onload
may conflict with other possible onload tasks. Using event listeners could be more flexible if the application grows.
62-65
: Port the compilation info handler or remove commented code
These lines reference a potential error extraction mechanism. If still relevant, port the logic to MBT; otherwise, remove to reduce clutter.
src/lib/caterfoil.mbt (9)
1-4
: Initialize context
The wrapper around Caterfoil.initializeContext()
looks good. Confirm that the JS function returns a promise consistently.
6-8
: Paint function is straightforward
paint_caterfoil_tree
is a thin wrapper. As usage increases, ensure performance remains acceptable for large scenes.
10-15
: Dispatch callback usage
render_caterfoil_tree
accepts a dispatch callback. Consider verifying that the callback is properly invoked in the underlying JS code.
17-19
: Canvas size reset
reset_canvas_size
ensures the canvas is appropriately sized for the rendering context. Looks correct.
21-23
: Canvas textures
initialize_canvas_textures
sets up textures after canvas size changes. This is a common pattern; ensure it’s idempotent for repeated calls.
37-39
: Consistent naming
polyline_wgsl
is consistent with Caterfoil.polylineWgsl
. Good job matching names here.
41-43
: LocalStorage connectivity
connect_retained_atom_to_srorage
helps restore viewer states. Ensure that sensitive data isn’t inadvertently persisted.
129-140
: CaterfoilAttribute
The approach to store a field
and a format
is straightforward. If you anticipate expansions (e.g., offset, stride), consider adjusting the struct to remain future-proof.
157-163
: Grouping multiple render objects
group(children)
creates a new JS array and calls caterfoil_group
. This is efficient. Revisit if excessive grouping leads to performance overhead.
package.json (2)
3-3
: Check if the incremental upgrade is beneficial.
Upgrading vite
from ^6.0.5
to ^6.0.6
is minor. Ensure you’ve reviewed relevant changelogs or release notes to confirm compatibility and performance benefits.
7-7
: Validate any breaking changes.
Upgrading @webgpu-art/caterfoil
from ^0.0.1
to ^0.0.4
may include new or changed functionality. Verify that your project’s usage of @webgpu-art/caterfoil
is still correct, especially for rendering logic.
///| | ||
struct Store {} derive(Default) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Store struct is empty
Currently, Store
is empty and only derives Default
. If future state management is expected, consider planning or documenting the properties that this struct might hold.
src/main/main.mbt
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///| | ||
let store : @caterfoil.Atom[Store] = @caterfoil.Atom::with_value( | ||
Store::default(), | ||
) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Atom usage
Using Atom
for global state is a good approach. Ensure that modifications to Store
account for concurrency or reactivity if the Atom
is updated frequently.
pub extern "js" fn lines_wgsl() -> String = | ||
#| () => Caterfoil.triangleWgsl | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Function naming mismatch
lines_wgsl
returns triangleWgsl
in JS. Consider renaming it for clarity or updating the Caterfoil side if it’s truly for lines.
pub(all) enum ObjectData { | ||
WithPoints(Array[Vertex]) | ||
WithTriangles(Array[PolylineVertex]) | ||
} | ||
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///| | ||
fn ObjectData::to_data( | ||
self : ObjectData | ||
) -> Array[@hashmap.T[String, Array[Float]]] { | ||
match self { | ||
ObjectData::WithPoints(data) => { | ||
let ret = [] | ||
for vertex in data { | ||
ret.push(vertex.to_value()) | ||
} | ||
ret | ||
} | ||
ObjectData::WithTriangles(data) => { | ||
let ret = [] | ||
for vertex in data { | ||
ret.push(vertex.to_value()) | ||
} | ||
ret | ||
} | ||
} | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
ObjectData enum and to_data
Storing points or triangles in a uniform data structure is clear. Watch out for large data sets, as repeated JS object creation can be expensive.
src/lib/caterfoil.mbt
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pub(all) struct CaterfoilObjectOptions { | ||
label : String | ||
shader : String | ||
topology : ShaderPrimitiveTopology | ||
attrs_list : Array[CaterfoilAttribute] | ||
data : ObjectData | ||
indices : Array[UInt]? | ||
get_params : (() -> Array[Float])? | ||
} | ||
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///| | ||
fn CaterfoilObjectOptions::as_value(self : CaterfoilObjectOptions) -> JsValue { | ||
let obj = JsObject::new() | ||
obj.set("label", JsValue::from_string(self.label)) | ||
obj.set("shader", JsValue::from_string(self.shader)) | ||
obj.set("topology", JsValue::from_string(self.topology.to_string())) | ||
let attrs_list = JsArray::new() | ||
for attr in self.attrs_list { | ||
attrs_list.push(attr.as_value()) | ||
} | ||
obj.set("attrsList", attrs_list.as_value()) | ||
let data = JsArray::new() | ||
for val in self.data.to_data() { | ||
let obj = JsObject::new() | ||
for key, value in val { | ||
let arr = JsArray::new() | ||
for v in value { | ||
arr.push(JsValue::from_number(v)) | ||
} | ||
obj.set(key, JsValue::from_array(arr)) | ||
} | ||
data.push(JsValue::from_object(obj)) | ||
} | ||
obj.set("data", data.as_value()) | ||
// indices | ||
let get_params = fn() -> JsValue { | ||
match self.get_params { | ||
Some(f) => | ||
JsValue::from_fn(fn() { | ||
let ret = f() | ||
let arr = JsArray::new() | ||
for val in ret { | ||
arr.push(JsValue::from_number(val)) | ||
} | ||
arr.as_value() | ||
}) | ||
None => JsValue::from_bool(false) | ||
} | ||
} | ||
obj.set("getParams", JsValue::from_fn(get_params)) | ||
obj.as_value() | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
CaterfoilObjectOptions is comprehensive
The builder pattern is well-designed, but it’s quite extensive. Consider adding doc comments for each field to help users.
src/main/hyper-cube.mbt
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///| | ||
fn comp_hyper_cube() -> @[email protected] { |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider adding a descriptive doc comment.
Currently, the doc comment is empty (“///|”). Document the purpose of comp_hyper_cube
and the kind of object it returns in more detail, so other developers can easily understand its functionality and usage.
let p1 = @quaternion.q(-unit, -unit, -unit, -unit) | ||
let p2 = @quaternion.q(unit, -unit, -unit, -unit) | ||
let p3 = @quaternion.q(unit, -unit, unit, -unit) | ||
let p4 = @quaternion.q(-unit, -unit, unit, -unit) | ||
let p5 = @quaternion.q(-unit, unit, -unit, -unit) | ||
let p6 = @quaternion.q(unit, unit, -unit, -unit) | ||
let p7 = @quaternion.q(unit, unit, unit, -unit) | ||
let p8 = @quaternion.q(-unit, unit, unit, -unit) | ||
let p11 = @quaternion.q(-unit, -unit, -unit, unit) | ||
let p12 = @quaternion.q(unit, -unit, -unit, unit) | ||
let p13 = @quaternion.q(unit, -unit, unit, unit) | ||
let p14 = @quaternion.q(-unit, -unit, unit, unit) | ||
let p15 = @quaternion.q(-unit, unit, -unit, unit) | ||
let p16 = @quaternion.q(unit, unit, -unit, unit) | ||
let p17 = @quaternion.q(unit, unit, unit, unit) | ||
let p18 = @quaternion.q(-unit, unit, unit, unit) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Parameterize or label quaternions for clarity.
Defining 18 separate quaternion points is somewhat verbose. If maintaining explicit definitions is necessary, provide more descriptive names or comments that explain each point’s meaning (e.g., corners, edges, etc.). Otherwise, consider generating them programmatically.
{ position: p5, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p1, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p5, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p2, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p6, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p3, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p7, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p4, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p8, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
// Upper | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p11, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p12, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p12, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p13, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p13, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p14, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p14, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p11, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p15, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p16, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p16, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p17, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p17, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p18, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p18, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p15, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p11, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p15, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p12, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p16, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p13, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p17, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p14, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p18, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
// conect | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p1, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p11, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p2, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p12, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p3, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p13, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p4, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p14, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p5, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p15, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p6, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p16, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p7, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p17, color: white }, | ||
]) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!([ | ||
{ position: p8, color: white }, | ||
{ position: p18, color: white }, | ||
]) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Refactor the repetitive vertex construction.
The code builds each pair of vertices in multiple separate calls to @caterfoil.create_vertex_data!
. This is correct but verbose and potentially prone to errors if future modifications are needed. Consider consolidating repeated patterns (e.g., using loops, helper functions, or macros) to reduce duplication and improve maintainability.
let p16 = @quaternion.q(unit, unit, -unit, unit) | ||
let p17 = @quaternion.q(unit, unit, unit, unit) | ||
let p18 = @quaternion.q(-unit, unit, unit, unit) | ||
let white = Color::new(r=1.0, g=0.5, b=0.2, a=0.6) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Rename the color variable to match its actual value.
white
is misleading since it’s actually an orange-ish color (r=1.0, g=0.5, b=0.2, a=0.6
). Using a more accurate name (e.g., orangeColor
) would improve maintainability and avoid confusion.
-let white = Color::new(r=1.0, g=0.5, b=0.2, a=0.6)
let orange_color = Color::new(r=1.0, g=0.5, b=0.2, a=0.6)
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@caterfoil.object({ | ||
label: "axis", | ||
shader: @caterfoil.polyline_wgsl(), | ||
topology: TriangleList, | ||
attrs_list: @caterfoil.PolylineVertex::attrs(), | ||
data: WithTriangles(data), | ||
indices: None, | ||
get_params: None, | ||
}) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Ensure label consistency with the function name.
The returned CaterfoilRenderObject
has a label
of "axis"
, whereas the function is named comp_hyper_cube
. Unless it’s intentional, it might be more consistent to use something like "hyper_cube"
or a similarly descriptive label.
- label: "axis",
label: "hyper_cube",
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label: "axis", | |
shader: @caterfoil.polyline_wgsl(), | |
topology: TriangleList, | |
attrs_list: @caterfoil.PolylineVertex::attrs(), | |
data: WithTriangles(data), | |
indices: None, | |
get_params: None, | |
}) | |
} | |
@caterfoil.object({ | |
label: "hyper_cube", | |
shader: @caterfoil.polyline_wgsl(), | |
topology: TriangleList, | |
attrs_list: @caterfoil.PolylineVertex::attrs(), | |
data: WithTriangles(data), | |
indices: None, | |
get_params: None, | |
}) | |
} |
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src/main/quat-tree.mbt (5)
2-5
: Add doc comments for Branch
.
A brief explanation clarifying that Branch
represents a quaternion line segment can help future contributors understand the purpose of this struct.
8-10
: Clarify the purpose or usage for BaseBranch
.
Consider adding documentation or a short note explaining how BaseBranch
differs from Branch
in usage or design intent.
19-26
: Use more descriptive variable names within transformers
.
The array elements are quaternion transformations. Using names that reflect their specific transformation roles can improve readability.
29-46
: Consider limiting recursion depth in generate_lines
.
High recursion levels (like 8) can generate a large number of branches and potentially impact performance.
49-68
: Document geometry choices in comp_quat_tree
.
Briefly explain why these particular quaternions and scalars are used, so maintainers can adapt or extend this fractal generation logic.
src/main/main.mbt (6)
1-2
: Remove or clarify the commented import.
If the import remains needed for future usage, add a short comment explaining why it's commented out. Otherwise, remove it for cleaner code.
4-4
: Consider defining state properties in Store
.
If you anticipate storing application-wide data (e.g., canvas size, user preferences), document or add them here.
7-7
: Populate or remove the empty Action
enum.
An empty enum may confuse future readers. Consider adding real variants or removing it until needed.
15-17
: Enhance dispatch
to handle Action
enum.
Right now, dispatch
simply calls render_app
. If Action
is intended to orchestrate state changes, incorporate logic to handle different actions.
20-24
: Separate concerns in render_app
.
Currently, render_app
handles both component creation and rendering. Splitting these responsibilities can make the code more maintainable.
58-59
: Check if overriding onload
is desired.
If multiple onload behaviors are expected, switching to event listeners might be more flexible than assigning a single callback.
src/main/lamp-tree.mbt (3)
2-28
: Guard against large recursion in fold_line4
.
For higher recursion levels or larger scenes, consider adding checks to prevent extensive memory usage or stack overflow.
31-59
: Factor out common logic from comp_lamp_tree
.
The logic here may overlap with other functions. Consider extracting shared functionality to a helper function for maintainability.
62-89
: Refactor comp_fly_city
to avoid code duplication.
comp_fly_city
and comp_lamp_tree
appear similar. Reusing shared sections would reduce maintenance overhead.
src/lib/caterfoil.mbt (7)
33-35
: Function naming mismatch for lines_wgsl
.
The underlying JavaScript references triangleWgsl
. Rename either the MBT function or the JS property for clarity.
45-48
: Clarify differences between WithPoints
and WithTriangles
.
A brief note on how each is processed or rendered would help developers choose the right option.
51-70
: Beware large data sets with ObjectData::to_data
.
Storing numerous vertices can lead to expensive JS object creation. Consider streaming or chunking the data for massive graphs.
73-80
: Add doc comments for each field in CaterfoilObjectOptions
.
Elaborate on how shader
, topology
, and get_params
affect rendering to guide future maintainers.
133-135
: Short doc summary for CaterfoilAttribute
.
A quick explanation clarifying each field can prevent confusion about how vertex formats map to WebGPU strings.
149-153
: Enhance bridging in CaterfoilRenderObject::as_value
.
Consider debugging or validation when converting objects to JS, particularly if unexpected shapes or usage might occur.
155-182
: Validate options in object(...)
.
If user-supplied data is malformed or missing required fields, consider adding checks to prevent partially initialized objects.
src/main/container.mbt (2)
3-3
: Clarify guard usage or remove placeholders.
The guard seems to protect nothing currently. Either expand its usage or remove it if it’s truly a placeholder.
6-10
: Add doc comments or references for commented-out components.
Explaining which components are intended for demonstration or future activation can reduce confusion.
src/main/quat-product.mbt (3)
7-11
: Nested loops with size=2
appear manageable but consider bounding or cautioning future changes.
If size
grows, the four nested loops can become expensive. Add a note or a safeguard to prevent accidental large loop expansions in production.
12-12
: Remove or conditionally wrap debug print statement.
Though commented out, if it’s re-enabled for debugging, wrapping it in a conditional debug flag (or removing it) helps avoid performance overhead.
19-20
: Handle potential errors from create_vertex_data?
.
This function returns a Result
and is unwrapped. Ensure the upstream code can handle failures, or add an explicit error message if it fails.
src/main/axis.mbt (1)
5-19
: Consider symmetric axis ranges and consistent widths.
The axes run from -20.0 to 200.0, which is asymmetric. Past comments noted this might be unintentional. Also, alpha values differ among axes. Unless required, aligning these ranges/colors/widths can help with visual clarity.
src/lib/ffi.mbt (3)
5-16
: Consider a .finally
method or alternative.
JavaScript often uses .finally
for cleanup. Evaluate if you need that pattern as well.
29-35
: Use event listeners instead of direct assignment for onresize
and onload
.
Assigning window.onresize
and window.onload
overwrites any previously set handlers. Multiple event listeners might provide more flexibility.
48-53
: Guard against null
return from querySelector
.
If no element matches, an error might occur when the result is used. Consider returning an Optional type if supported, or handle it gracefully upstream.
src/main/hyper-cube.mbt (5)
1-1
: Add a descriptive doc comment.
To improve clarity, provide a brief explanation of the function's purpose and the shape it renders.
5-20
: Parameterize or label quaternions for clarity.
If explicit definitions are necessary, explain each point or name them meaningfully; else consider a programmatic approach.
21-21
: Rename the color variable to reflect its actual hue.
“white” is misleading because the color is actually more orange.
22-151
: Refactor the repetitive vertex construction.
Consolidate repeated patterns to reduce verbosity and improve maintainability.
152-152
: Good consistency in labeling.
The label "hyper-cube" aligns well with the function name—no further changes needed.
fn loaded() -> Unit { | ||
let _ret = @caterfoil.initialize_context().then(fn(_ctx) { | ||
@caterfoil.initialize_canvas_textures() | ||
// atomClearColor.reset({ r: 0.0, g: 0.0, b: 0.0, a: 0.0 }); | ||
let window = @caterfoil.window() | ||
let document = window.document() | ||
let canvas = document.query_selector("canvas") | ||
render_app?().unwrap() | ||
window.set_onresize(fn() { | ||
@caterfoil.reset_canvas_size(canvas) | ||
@caterfoil.initialize_canvas_textures() | ||
@caterfoil.paint_caterfoil_tree() | ||
}) | ||
@caterfoil.reset_canvas_size(canvas) | ||
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// window.__caterfoilHandleCompilationInfo = (e, code) => { | ||
// if (e.messages.length) { | ||
// console.error(e); | ||
// } | ||
// }; | ||
// // setupMouseEvents(canvas); | ||
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@caterfoil.load_gamepad_control() | ||
@caterfoil.paint_caterfoil_tree() | ||
@caterfoil.js_undefined() | ||
}) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add robust error handling in loaded
.
Consider adding explicit handling for potential failures in context initialization, texture loading, and gamepad input to prevent silent errors.
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fn comp_quat_product() -> @caterfoil.CaterfoilRenderObject { |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add a short doc comment to clarify function purpose.
A concise doc comment explaining the quaternion-based multiplication and how it populates the render data would help maintainers quickly grasp its function.
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let size : Int = 2 | ||
let times : Int = 200 | ||
let multiplicand = @quaternion.new(w=1.0, x=0.08).normalize().scale(1.006) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Parameterize or document these constants (size
, times
, and the multiplicand scaling factors).
Currently, they are magic numbers. Consider making them configurable or documenting the rationale for these specific values (e.g., 2, 200, 1.006).
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trail.push({ position: p.scale(20), color: Color::white(a=0.2) }) | ||
for m = 0; m < times; m = m 1 { | ||
p = p * multiplicand | ||
trail.push({ position: p.scale(20), color: Color::white(a=0.4) }) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Color alpha values are hard-coded.
The repeated alpha values (0.2, 0.4) are magic numbers. Consider making them constants or parameters to allow easier adjustments and a more flexible color scheme.
} | ||
} | ||
} | ||
@caterfoil.object(label="curve", data=WithTriangles(data)) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Rename the object label for clarity.
Currently labeled "curve"
, but it might be more descriptive to name it something like "quat-product-curve"
to reflect the operation performed in this function.
for i = 0; i < 99; i = i 1 { | ||
// for each line segment, push two triangles, or 6 vertices | ||
let p0 = points[i] | ||
let p1 = points[i 1] | ||
let length = (p1 - p0).length() | ||
let width = 2.0.to_float() | ||
let direction = (p1 - p0).scale(1.0.to_float() / length) | ||
let direction = direction.scale(width) | ||
let pos = p0 | ||
let pos_next = p1 | ||
let color = Color::new(r=1.0) | ||
data.push({ position: pos, color, direction, side: 0 }) | ||
data.push({ position: pos_next, color, direction, side: 0 }) | ||
data.push({ position: pos, color, direction, side: 1 }) | ||
data.push({ position: pos, color, direction, side: 1 }) | ||
data.push({ position: pos_next, color, direction, side: 1 }) | ||
data.push({ position: pos_next, color, direction, side: 0 }) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Check for degenerate segments and handle them gracefully.
If two consecutive points end up the same, the length is zero, and you’d be dividing by zero. Add a small safeguard to avoid potential runtime issues.
Would you like a short code snippet demonstrating a quick length check before dividing?
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data.push({ position: pos_next, color, direction, side: 1 }) | ||
data.push({ position: pos_next, color, direction, side: 0 }) | ||
} | ||
@caterfoil.object(label="curve", data=WithTriangles(data)) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Label clarity.
Labeling this "curve"
is acceptable, but as this code is spiral-specific, consider naming it "spiral-curve"
or a descriptive variant.
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///| | |||
type Promise |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add doc comments for Promise
type.
Describe how it parallels JavaScript promises and any differences if applicable.
///| | ||
extern "js" fn caterfoil_object(options : JsValue) -> CaterfoilRenderObject = | ||
#| (options) => Caterfoil.object(options) | ||
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///| | ||
extern "js" fn caterfoil_group(children : JsArray) -> CaterfoilRenderObject = | ||
#| (children) => ({type: "group", children}) | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Document or rename caterfoil_object
and caterfoil_group
for clarity.
They return CaterfoilRenderObject
, but function names might be more descriptive as create_caterfoil_object
or create_caterfoil_group
.
pub extern "js" fn log_js_value(value : JsValue) -> Unit = | ||
#| (value) => console.log(value) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider multi-level logging in log_js_value
.
Currently logs to console.log
. If you need different severity levels (info
, warn
, or error
), factor this out or wrap it in a more robust logger approach.
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(1 hunks)src/main/lamp-tree.mbt
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src/main/quat-product.mbt (3)
4-6
: Parameterize or document these constants.
size
, times
, and the scaling factor could be made configurable or documented to clarify their rationale.
14-17
: Color alpha values are hard-coded.
Repeated alpha values (0.2
and 0.4
) are magic numbers. Consider using named constants or parameters for easier maintenance.
25-25
: Rename the object label for clarity.
Currently labeled "curve"
. A more descriptive label such as "quat-product-curve"
aligns better with the function’s purpose.
src/lib/ffi.mbt (8)
2-2
: Add doc comments for the Promise
type.
Clarifying how it parallels JavaScript promises will help other developers quickly understand its usage.
5-16
: Consider adding a finally
-like method on Promise
.
A .finally
method handles cleanup tasks regardless of resolve or reject, which can be helpful in many asynchronous flows.
19-21
: Evaluate whether js_undefined
is necessary or should be inlined.
If it’s used only in one or two places, inlining might simplify the code. Otherwise, keeping it is fine for semantic clarity.
29-36
: Avoid overriding existing window event handlers with direct assignment.
Using window.onresize = f
and window.onload = f
can clash if other code also sets these. Prefer addEventListener
for more flexibility.
37-43
: Clarify document retrieval logic.
window.document()
always returns the top-level document
. If multiple frames or contexts might exist, ensure this approach suffices.
48-53
: Handle potential null
returns from query_selector
.
document.querySelector(selector)
can return null
. Consider returning an optional type or providing a fallback to avoid runtime errors.
54-61
: Document or rename caterfoil_object
and caterfoil_group
for clarity.
These create CaterfoilRenderObject
s, so more descriptive naming or doc comments can improve discoverability.
63-64
: Consider multi-level logging in log_js_value
.
At present, it logs via console.log
. If you need different severities (info, warn, error), a more robust logging method may help.
src/main/quat-tree.mbt (5)
2-5
: Add a doc comment to clarify the Branch
struct’s purpose.
A concise explanation will help others quickly understand that it represents a line in quaternion space.
8-10
: Clarify the intent of BaseBranch
.
Explaining how BaseBranch
differs from a regular Branch
can reduce confusion around its usage.
19-26
: Use more descriptive naming for transformers
array elements.
Currently, they’re just quaternions with partial reference to ratio
. Clarifying each element’s role might improve maintainability.
29-46
: Consider bounding or monitoring recursion depth in generate_lines
.
A recursion level of 8 can produce a large number of lines quickly. A cap or performance check may be beneficial for big scenes.
49-68
: Document the geometry choices in comp_quat_tree
.
Explain how fractal-like geometry is generated with p0
, l0
, and loops. This can enhance understanding and configurability.
src/main/main.mbt (8)
1-2
: Remove or clarify the commented import.
If no longer needed, removing unused code makes for cleaner project organization.
3-4
: Store struct is empty; consider defining needed state properties directly.
Documenting or adding properties to Store
clarifies how the application state should be managed.
7-7
: Populate or remove the empty Action
enum.
An empty enum can be confusing if it’s never used. Document planned variants or remove it until it’s needed.
9-12
: Ensure concurrency or reactivity is properly managed with this global Atom.
Frequent updates can introduce race conditions if not handled carefully.
15-17
: Handle potential errors more gracefully in dispatch
.
Using .unwrap()
can abruptly terminate the application if render_app?
fails.
20-24
: Consider optimizing or batching renders in render_app
.
Right now, it triggers a full render on each call. If frequent, this could affect performance.
27-52
: Add robust error handling within loaded
.
Currently, silent failures may occur if context initialization or other operations fail.
62-65
: Port the compilation info handler if needed.
The commented TypeScript snippet might be essential for surfacing error messages. Consider re-implementing or removing.
src/main/lamp-tree.mbt (3)
2-28
: Guard against large recursion in fold_line4
.
A recursion level of 10 can generate expansive data. Consider adding checks or letting users specify the limit.
31-59
: Allow user-defined recursion levels in comp_lamp_tree
.
Currently fixed at 10. Making this configurable can help tune performance or shape complexity.
61-83
: Encapsulate repeated logic in comp_fly_city
and comp_lamp_tree
.
They share similar patterns of calling fold_line4
, scaling points, and building data. Factoring out common code may reduce duplication.
src/main/hyper-cube.mbt (5)
1-2
: Add a descriptive doc comment
This doc comment is currently empty. Please provide an overview of what this function does, the meaning of its parameters, and the resulting render object for future maintainers.
5-20
: Parameterize or label quaternions for clarity
You have 18 distinct quaternions; consider documenting or programmatically generating them to convey their significance (e.g., corners, edges). This will increase maintainability and reduce confusion.
21-21
: Rename color variable to match its actual hue
The variable is named white
, but it actually holds an orange-like color. Rename for clarity.
- let white = Color::new(r=1.0, g=0.5, b=0.2, a=0.6)
let orange_color = Color::new(r=1.0, g=0.5, b=0.2, a=0.6)
22-151
: Refactor the repetitive vertex construction
The successive calls to @caterfoil.create_vertex_data!
are verbose. Consider looping over a list of edge pairs or using a helper function to reduce duplication and improve maintainability.
152-153
: Label is now consistent
Great job using "hyper-cube"
to label the object, matching the function name. No further changes needed here.
src/lib/caterfoil.mbt (5)
45-48
: Clarify differences between WithPoints and WithTriangles
Adding a concise note about how each variant is rendered (or consumed by the shader) can help developers choose the correct variant.
73-80
: Add doc comments for CaterfoilObjectOptions fields
The struct is comprehensive, but brief explanations for each field would enhance readability, especially for new contributors.
129-132
: Thank you for providing vertex format documentation
The lines 130–132 offer a good summary. This clarifies the format usage.
155-167
: Verify shader selection logic
When ObjectData
is WithPoints
, the code defaults to lines_wgsl()
, which internally references triangleWgsl
. Verify the drawing mode and naming are truly correct for point-based geometry.
Also applies to: 169-171
185-191
: Consider checking empty arrays in group
If children
is empty, returning an empty group might be unintentional. Log a warning or handle it gracefully.
src/main/axis.mbt (2)
1-1
: Add a doc comment for comp_axis
A short explanation about the four axes and their intended usage (visual reference) can help new contributors quickly understand this function.
5-20
: Consider using symmetric axis ranges
You currently have -20.0
to 200.0
for each axis. Past reviews suggested symmetrical ranges to make the axes more conventional (e.g., -100.0 to 100.0).
src/main/quat-curve.mbt (4)
1-2
: Add a doc comment describing the quaternion-based spiral logic
A brief explanation of how the quaternions form a spiral will help contributors follow the math.
5-13
: Parameterize the iteration count and constants
Values like 100
and 10.0
are hard-coded. Making them configurable allows easier experimentation and performance tuning.
14-30
: Check for degenerate segments
If p0
and p1
happen to be the same, dividing by zero can occur. Consider a small epsilon check.
32-32
: Label clarity
"curve"
is generic. If this code produces a spiral or specialized shape, consider using a more descriptive name (e.g., "spiral-curve"
).
src/main/quat-product.mbt
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fn comp_quat_product() -> @caterfoil.CaterfoilRenderObject { |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add a short doc comment explaining the function’s purpose.
This helps maintainers understand why quaternion products are generated in this manner.
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data = data | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data?(trail, width=0.6).unwrap() |
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🛠️ Refactor suggestion
Use safe error handling instead of unwrap()
.
Relying on .unwrap()
can cause a runtime panic if create_vertex_data?
fails. Consider returning or logging the error for more robust handling.
data.push(v) | ||
} | ||
@caterfoil.object( | ||
label="lamp-tree", |
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Mismatched label in comp_fly_city
.
You’re returning an object with label="lamp-tree"
, which conflicts with the function name and intention. Consider updating:
- label="lamp-tree",
label="fly-city",
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label="lamp-tree", | |
label="fly-city", |
///| need a better name from Caterfoil | ||
pub extern "js" fn lines_wgsl() -> String = | ||
#| () => Caterfoil.triangleWgsl | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Rename or confirm function naming
lines_wgsl
returns Caterfoil.triangleWgsl
, which can confuse contributors. Confirm or rename to more accurately reflect its purpose (e.g., triangle_wgsl
vs. lines_wgsl
).
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///| | ||
fn comp_container() -> @[email protected] { | ||
guard true else { raise @caterfoil.BuilderError("ok") } |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Remove or customize the guard statement
guard true else { ... }
will never trigger an error, making it effectively dead code. Consider removing it or replacing with a meaningful condition if needed.
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@caterfoil.group([ | ||
comp_axis!(width=1), | ||
// comp_fly_city(), | ||
// comp_lamp_tree(), | ||
// comp_hyper_cube!(), | ||
// comp_quat_curve(), | ||
// comp_quat_tree(), | ||
comp_quat_product(), | ||
], |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Document the commented-out components
Several components (comp_fly_city
, comp_lamp_tree
, etc.) are commented out. Add a short note explaining how or when you intend to include them, so future maintainers can understand the bigger picture.
let triangles_list = @caterfoil.create_vertex_data!(axis_x, width=width.or(1)) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!(axis_y, width=width.or(1)) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!(axis_z, width=width.or(1)) | ||
@caterfoil.create_vertex_data!(axis_w, width=width.or(1)) | ||
@caterfoil.object(label="axis", data=WithTriangles(triangles_list)) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Clarify line-based data
You’re using WithTriangles
for line drawing. Confirm if the current approach is intentional or if WithPoints
would better reflect axis geometry.
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src/main/quat-product.mbt (3)
15-17
: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)Parameterize or document magic numbers in multiplicand initialization.
The values 0.08 and 1.006 lack context about their significance.
Consider extracting these as named constants:
const DEFAULT_QUATERNION_X = 0.08 // Add comment explaining significance const DEFAULT_SCALE_FACTOR = 1.006 // Add comment explaining significance let multiplicand = multiplicand.or( - @quaternion.new(w=1.0, x=0.08).normalize().scale(1.006), @quaternion.new(w=1.0, x=DEFAULT_QUATERNION_X).normalize().scale(DEFAULT_SCALE_FACTOR), )
27-28
:⚠️ Potential issueReplace unwrap() with proper error handling.
Using unwrap() can cause runtime panics if create_vertex_data fails.
Consider propagating the error:
- @caterfoil.create_vertex_data?(trail, width=width.or(0.6)).unwrap() @caterfoil.create_vertex_data?(trail, width=width.or(0.6)) .map_err(|e| format!("Failed to create vertex data: {}", e))?
50-50
: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)Use a more descriptive object label.
The label "curve" could be more specific to aid debugging.
- @caterfoil.object(label="curve", data=WithTriangles(data)) @caterfoil.object(label="quat-product-curve", data=WithTriangles(data))
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src/main/quat-tree.mbt (4)
1-5
: Add doc comments for Branch
struct
This matches a previous suggestion to clarify that Branch
represents a line between two quaternions in fractal space.
7-10
: Clarify BaseBranch
usage
As previously noted, please explain how BaseBranch
differs from Branch
, particularly in transformations.
29-45
: Consider limiting recursion depth
generate_lines
recurses up to 8 levels, potentially creating large data sets. A user-configurable or smaller default might help performance.
48-67
: Document geometry in comp_quat_tree
A short explanation of how the quaternions produce a fractal-like tree would benefit other maintainers.
src/main/main.mbt (2)
10-13
: Consider concurrency
Atom
might handle concurrency, but confirm if multiple threads or reactivity could cause race conditions.
27-52
: Improve promise error handling in loaded
Currently, promise rejection isn’t handled. Log or handle errors to avoid silent failures.
src/lib/caterfoil.mbt (4)
1-4
: Verify promise handling
Ensure callers handle initialize_context()
promises to prevent silent failures if initialization fails.
10-15
: Validate dispatch usage
Confirm that render_caterfoil_tree
triggers dispatch only when needed, to avoid excessive re-renders.
33-35
: Rename or align function with returned content
lines_wgsl
returns triangleWgsl
. This discrepancy may confuse contributors.
174-201
: Shader auto-selection
Your data-based shader picking is convenient. Provide an override if advanced users want a custom shader.
src/main/container.mbt (1)
3-3
: Meaningless guard
guard true else { ... }
never executes the else block, so consider removing or replacing with a real condition.
src/main/quat-curve.mbt (1)
1-2
: Add doc comments
A short explanation of how comp_quat_curve
generates a spiral-based set of polylines would help new contributors.
package.json (1)
7-7
: Verify the breaking changes in @webgpu-art/caterfoil upgrade
The jump from version 0.0.1 to 0.0.5 in a pre-1.0 package could introduce breaking changes. Please ensure all functionality remains compatible.
src/main/quat-product.mbt (2)
1-6
: LGTM! Clean enum definition.
The DemoMode enum is well-defined and appropriately scoped with pub(all).
37-48
: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider performance implications of nested loops.
The Grid mode uses 4 nested loops (O(n^4) complexity) which could be expensive for larger sizes.
Consider:
- Adding an upper bound check for
size
- Adding a warning when size > 2
- Documenting the performance characteristics
Also, extract the magic numbers:
const DEFAULT_GRID_SIZE = 2
const DEFAULT_ITERATIONS = 200
Grid => {
- let size : Int = 2
let size : Int = DEFAULT_GRID_SIZE
// ... loops ...
- iterate(p, times.or(200))
iterate(p, times.or(DEFAULT_ITERATIONS))
let ratio : Float = -0.27 | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Make the ratio configurable
Consider allowing external configuration. Hardcoded values might limit customization.
let r2 : Float = ratio | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Unify or rename r2
r2
duplicates the value of ratio
. Rename or unify them for clarity.
let transformers : Array[BaseBranch] = [ | ||
{ line: @quaternion.q(ratio, r2, 0.0, 0.0) }, | ||
{ line: @quaternion.q(ratio, -r2, 0.0, 0.0) }, | ||
{ line: @quaternion.q(ratio, 0.0, r2, 0.0) }, | ||
{ line: @quaternion.q(ratio, 0.0, -r2, 0.0) }, | ||
{ line: @quaternion.q(ratio, 0.0, 0.0, r2) }, | ||
{ line: @quaternion.q(ratio, 0.0, 0.0, -r2) }, | ||
] |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Centralize transformations
Storing these directly in an array is fine, but consider extracting them into a dedicated config or function to enhance maintainability.
// import { atomClearColor } from "./global.mjs"; | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Remove or clarify commented import
If it’s no longer needed, removing it reduces clutter. If you plan to reintroduce it, add a note.
///| | ||
struct Store {} derive(Default) | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Expand Store
struct
Store
is currently empty. If you intend to store application state, define the relevant fields here.
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@caterfoil.group([ | ||
// comp_quat_curve(), | ||
// comp_hyper_cube!(), | ||
// comp_fly_city(), | ||
comp_lamp_tree(), | ||
// comp_quat_tree(), | ||
comp_quat_product( | ||
mode=Grid, | ||
times=400, | ||
width=2, | ||
[email protected](w=1, x=0.04, y=0.01, z=0.02) | ||
.normalize() | ||
.scale(1.004), | ||
), | ||
comp_axis!(width=4), | ||
], |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Clarify commented components
You have commented out multiple calls. If they’re experimental, add a note; otherwise, remove them to reduce clutter.
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for i = 0; i < 100; i = i 1 { | ||
// a spiral curve | ||
let t = i.to_float() / 10.0 | ||
let x = t * 10.0 | ||
let y = t * (@math.cos(t.to_double()) * 10.0).to_float() | ||
let z = t * (@math.sin(t.to_double()) * 10.0).to_float() | ||
let w = 0.0.to_float() | ||
points.push({ x, y, z, w }) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Parameterize iteration
Hardcoding 100 iterations and 10.0 might limit experimentation. Consider making them adjustable.
for i = 0; i < 99; i = i 1 { | ||
// for each line segment, push two triangles, or 6 vertices | ||
let p0 = points[i] | ||
let p1 = points[i 1] | ||
let length = (p1 - p0).length() | ||
let width = 2.0.to_float() | ||
let direction = (p1 - p0).scale(1.0.to_float() / length) | ||
let direction = direction.scale(width) | ||
let pos = p0 | ||
let pos_next = p1 | ||
let color = Color::new(r=1.0) | ||
data.push({ position: pos, color, direction, side: 0 }) | ||
data.push({ position: pos_next, color, direction, side: 0 }) | ||
data.push({ position: pos, color, direction, side: 1 }) | ||
data.push({ position: pos, color, direction, side: 1 }) | ||
data.push({ position: pos_next, color, direction, side: 1 }) | ||
data.push({ position: pos_next, color, direction, side: 0 }) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Check for degenerate segments
If p0
and p1
are identical, length
is zero, which can lead to division by zero. Add a guard.
@caterfoil.object( | ||
label="curve", | ||
data=WithTriangles(data), | ||
topology=TriangleList, | ||
) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Name the curve
Currently labeled "curve"
—consider "spiral-curve"
or a descriptive label that reflects its geometry.
) | ||
fn iterate(p0 : Quaternion, times : Int) -> Unit { | ||
let mut p = p0 | ||
// println("p: \{p}") |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Remove commented debug code.
Remove the commented println statement if it's no longer needed for debugging.
- // println("p: \{p}")
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index.html (2)
12-21
: LGTM: Good practices for preventing unwanted scrolling.
The CSS implementation properly handles:
- Removing default margins
- Preventing overscroll behavior on both axes
- Consistent background color across html and body
23-26
: Consider alternative approaches for fullscreen canvas.
The current fullscreen implementation using viewport units might cause scrollbars on some devices.
Consider this alternative approach:
- canvas {
- width: 100vw;
- height: 100vh;
- }
canvas {
position: fixed;
top: 0;
left: 0;
width: 100%;
height: 100%;
}
src/main/quat-curve.mbt (4)
1-2
: Add a brief doc comment for comp_quat_curve
.
A short explanation of its purpose, expected parameters, and outputs helps future maintainers and contributors understand the spiral curve generation.
5-13
: Parameterize the iterations for increased flexibility.
Hardcoding 100 iterations in the loop may limit experimentation. Consider adding a parameter for the iteration count to allow easy adjustments.
14-31
: Safeguard against potential division by zero in segment calculations.
If two consecutive points coincide, (p1 - p0).length()
can be zero, leading to a division by zero in direction = (p1 - p0).scale(1.0 / length)
. Add a small check or skip degenerate segments to avoid runtime errors.
32-37
: Consider renaming the label to reflect its spiral geometry.
Currently labeled "curve"
. A more descriptive label (e.g., "spiral-curve"
) can help identify this object more clearly in debugging or other tooling.
src/main/quat-tree.mbt (4)
2-5
: Add doc comments for Branch
.
A short explanation of the from
and to
quaternions clarifies how each Branch
represents a line segment in the quaternion-based tree.
8-10
: Document the purpose of BaseBranch
.
Explain how it complements Branch
and when to use BaseBranch
vs. Branch
to clarify its role for future maintainers.
29-45
: Monitor or limit recursion depth for performance.
generate_lines
is recursive, and calls can grow quickly with larger level
. A user-defined cap or heuristic can prevent excessive resource usage or stack overflows.
48-67
: Enhance documentation for comp_quat_tree
.
Adding a short description of the geometry or fractal concept behind quaternion-based trees provides needed context for others working on this code.
src/main/lamp-tree.mbt (3)
2-28
: Prevent large recursion overhead in fold_line4
.
When level
is high, this function can generate large arrays. Consider adding a maximum allowable depth or logging a warning to avoid performance bottlenecks.
31-58
: Allow user-defined recursion or geometry parameters in comp_lamp_tree
.
Currently, times
defaults to 10, which may be too small or large for various use cases. Exposing these parameters helps tune performance and visual complexity.
61-87
: Correct the mismatched label in comp_fly_city
.
The label is set to "lamp-tree"
, but this function is comp_fly_city
. Rename the label to "fly-city"
or a more descriptive name to avoid confusion.
- label="lamp-tree",
label="fly-city",
src/main/container.mbt (3)
1-2
: Add a doc comment for comp_container
.
Describing the container’s purpose and logic helps maintainers see how these multiple components are grouped for rendering.
3-3
: Remove or revise the guard statement.
guard true else { raise @caterfoil.BuilderError("ok") }
always passes and effectively does nothing. Consider removing it or using a meaningful condition.
5-19
: Document or remove commented-out components.
Calls to comp_quat_curve()
and comp_fly_city()
are commented out. Add a note indicating their future use, or remove them if they are no longer needed.
</head> | ||
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<body> | ||
<canvas id="canvas-container"></canvas> | ||
<script type="module" src="./src/caterfoil.mjs"></script> | ||
<script defer src="./target/js/debug/build/main/main.js"></script> | ||
<!-- <script src="./target/js/debug/build/main/main.js"></script> --> |
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The debug build script is still being used and should not be commented out
The commented-out script in index.html is actually required by the application as it's being dynamically imported in src/caterfoil.mjs
. Commenting out the script tag while the dynamic import is still present will cause the application to fail with loading errors.
src/caterfoil.mjs
attempts to load../target/js/debug/build/main/main.js
using dynamic import- The same script is commented out in
index.html
- The project appears to be using Vite for development, but still relies on this debug build
Either:
- Uncomment the script in index.html if the debug build is needed
- Or remove both the script tag and the dynamic import if moving to a different build system
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider adding an environment-specific fallback or explicit feature detect for dynamic imports.
While this dynamic import is straightforward, older browsers may not fully support it. If legacy support is needed, a small feature detection or fallback approach can enhance reliability.
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src/lib/ffi.mbt (8)
2-2
: Add doc comments for Promise
type.
Documenting how it corresponds to and differs from JavaScript’s Promise
would benefit maintainers and new contributors.
5-9
: Consider adding a .finally
method to the Promise
.
Past reviewers highlighted that .finally
often proves valuable for cleanup logic.
19-20
: Evaluate usage scope of js_undefined
.
If it’s only used in a small number of places, consider inlining it to reduce indirection. Otherwise, keep it for clarity.
29-31
: Avoid overwriting existing onresize
handlers with direct assignment.
This overrides previously registered handlers. Consider using window.addEventListener("resize", ...)
instead.
34-35
: Avoid overwriting existing onload
handlers with direct assignment.
Similar to onresize
, you may inadvertently remove other handlers. Use addEventListener("load", ...)
to accommodate multiple listeners.
55-57
: Consider renaming caterfoil_object
for clarity.
Using “create_caterfoil_object” aligns with typical naming patterns.
59-61
: Consider renaming caterfoil_group
for clarity.
Using “create_caterfoil_group” would follow consistent naming conventions.
63-65
: Consider multi-level logging in log_js_value
.
For larger-scale applications, you may need finer logging granularity (info
, warn
, error
).
src/main/hyper-cube-grid.mbt (1)
74-74
: Confirm necessity of the guard statement.
guard true else { ... }
is effectively a no-op. Past reviewers suggested removing or customizing it for meaningful error checking.
src/main/container.mbt (3)
2-2
: Add doc comments for comp_container
.
Explain how the function aggregates components, references other modules, and under what conditions a BuilderError
might occur.
3-3
: Remove or customize the always-true guard.
guard true else { ... }
never raises an error. If it’s a placeholder, consider removing it or substituting a real condition.
5-19
: Document or remove commented-out components.
If they are experimental or temporarily disabled, clarify the reason. Otherwise, remove them to reduce confusion.
fn random_around(center : Float, range : Float) -> Float { | ||
center range * (@caterfoil.math_random(1) - 0.5) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Clarify distribution in random_around
.
It mathematically yields a uniform distribution from (center - range/2)
to (center range/2)
. Consider documenting this for clarity.
fn rect( | ||
p1 : Quaternion, | ||
p2 : Quaternion, | ||
p3 : Quaternion, | ||
p4 : Quaternion, | ||
color? : Color | ||
) -> Array[Vertex] { | ||
let color = color.or(Color::new(r=1.0, g=0.5, b=0.2, a=0.6)) | ||
[ | ||
{ position: p1, color }, | ||
{ position: p2, color }, | ||
{ position: p3, color }, | ||
// | ||
{ position: p1, color }, | ||
{ position: p3, color }, | ||
{ position: p4, color }, | ||
] | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Document default color in rect
.
You set Color::new(r=1.0, g=0.5, b=0.2, a=0.6)
when color
is not provided. A brief mention in a doc comment helps users recognize which color is being applied.
fn make_cube_data( | ||
offset : Quaternion, | ||
unit : Float, | ||
color : Color | ||
) -> Array[Vertex] { | ||
let p1 = @quaternion.q(-unit, -unit, -unit, -unit) offset | ||
let p2 = @quaternion.q(unit, -unit, -unit, -unit) offset | ||
let p3 = @quaternion.q(unit, -unit, unit, -unit) offset | ||
let p4 = @quaternion.q(-unit, -unit, unit, -unit) offset | ||
let p5 = @quaternion.q(-unit, unit, -unit, -unit) offset | ||
let p6 = @quaternion.q(unit, unit, -unit, -unit) offset | ||
let p7 = @quaternion.q(unit, unit, unit, -unit) offset | ||
let p8 = @quaternion.q(-unit, unit, unit, -unit) offset | ||
let p11 = @quaternion.q(-unit, -unit, -unit, unit) offset | ||
let p12 = @quaternion.q(unit, -unit, -unit, unit) offset | ||
let p13 = @quaternion.q(unit, -unit, unit, unit) offset | ||
let p14 = @quaternion.q(-unit, -unit, unit, unit) offset | ||
let p15 = @quaternion.q(-unit, unit, -unit, unit) offset | ||
let p16 = @quaternion.q(unit, unit, -unit, unit) offset | ||
let p17 = @quaternion.q(unit, unit, unit, unit) offset | ||
let p18 = @quaternion.q(-unit, unit, unit, unit) offset | ||
let vertexes : Array[Vertex] = rect(p1, p2, p3, p4, color~) | ||
rect(p5, p6, p7, p8, color~) | ||
rect(p1, p2, p6, p5, color~) | ||
rect(p2, p3, p7, p6, color~) | ||
rect(p3, p4, p8, p7, color~) | ||
rect(p4, p1, p5, p8, color~) | ||
rect(p11, p12, p13, p14, color~) | ||
rect(p15, p16, p17, p18, color~) | ||
rect(p11, p12, p16, p15, color~) | ||
rect(p12, p13, p17, p16, color~) | ||
rect(p13, p14, p18, p17, color~) | ||
rect(p14, p11, p15, p18, color~) | ||
rect(p1, p2, p12, p11, color~) | ||
rect(p2, p3, p13, p12, color~) | ||
rect(p3, p4, p14, p13, color~) | ||
rect(p4, p1, p11, p14, color~) | ||
rect(p5, p6, p16, p15, color~) | ||
rect(p6, p7, p17, p16, color~) | ||
rect(p7, p8, p18, p17, color~) | ||
rect(p8, p5, p15, p18, color~) | ||
vertexes | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider extracting repetitive rect
usage into a helper.
Repeatedly calling rect
can be consolidated if you often build hypercube (or higher dimension) faces. A dedicated helper function could reduce code size and potential copy-paste mistakes.
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src/main/hyper-cube-grid.mbt (3)
2-4
: Clarify distribution in random_around
.
This function generates a uniform distribution around the specified center, from (center - range/2)
to (center range/2)
. Consider adding a short doc comment to explain this behavior for future maintainers.
14-14
: Document the default color in rect
.
A default color of (r=1.0, g=0.5, b=0.2, a=0.6)
is used when color
is not specified. Mentioning this in the doc comment can improve clarity for future users of this function.
27-69
: Consider extracting repetitive rect
usage into a helper.
The make_cube_data
function repeatedly calls rect
to build each face. Extracting these patterns into a helper function could reduce duplication and potential maintenance issues.
src/main/shader/triangle.wgsl (5)
2-2
: Import usage is clear.
The import from caterfoil::ga4
is appropriate for using ga4_vec4f_inner
and other 4D operations.
5-16
: Validate uniform block layout for GPU alignment.
Double-check that each field in struct UBO
adheres to alignment requirements (e.g., 16-byte alignment for vec4f
). While WGSL generally handles some layout automatically, consider spacing or padding if you add more fields in the future.
35-67
: Handle potential zero or negative look_distance
.
transform_perspective
divides by look_distance
. Ensure upstream code prevents this from being zero or negative. If user input or dynamic calculation is involved, add checks or default values to avoid undefined behavior.
76-92
: Consider making scale
a uniform parameter.
Hardcoding 0.002
in vertex_main
restricts runtime flexibility. Exposing scale
as a uniform can enable dynamic adjustments or animations.
94-97
: Basic fragment shader.
Returning the unmodified vertex color is sufficient for simple pipelines. Expand with lighting or texturing inputs if advanced effects are desired in the future.
src/main/shader-triangle.mbt (1)
3-102
: Encapsulate 4D transformations with clearer documentation.
Although the 4D camera vectors (forward
, w_direction
, etc.) are largely self-explanatory, consider adding a short overview of how these vectors are used in transform_perspective
. This will help future maintainers quickly grasp the concept behind 4D transformations.
src/main/moon.pkg.json (2)
3-9
: Document the new shader embedding step in the build process.
This helps maintainers understand how :embed -i shader/triangle.wgsl -o shader-triangle.mbt
fits into the pipeline and how it interacts with the final output.
10-19
: Consider pinning versions for external imports.
Importing tiye/caterfoil/lib
without a version might cause unpredictable builds if the library changes. For stability, pin a specific commit or version.
pub fn comp_hyper_cube_grid() -> | ||
@[email protected] { | ||
guard true else { raise @caterfoil.BuilderError("ok") } |
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🛠️ Refactor suggestion
Remove or revise the always-true guard.
Since guard true
always succeeds, it never raises the error—making it effectively dead code. Either remove this guard or replace it with a condition that genuinely needs validation.
for i = 0; i < 200; i = i 1 { | ||
let offset = @quaternion.q( | ||
random_around(0, 800), | ||
random_around(0, 800), | ||
random_around(0, 800), | ||
random_around(0, 800), | ||
) | ||
let white = Color::new( | ||
[email protected]_random(1), | ||
[email protected]_random(1), | ||
[email protected]_random(1), | ||
a=0.6, | ||
) | ||
let vertexes = make_cube_data(offset, unit, white) | ||
vertex_list = vertex_list vertexes | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Parametrize the iteration count for greater flexibility.
The loop currently generates 200 cubes. Consider allowing the iteration count to be passed in as a parameter or inferred dynamically, which would grant users the ability to control the density of cubes.
struct Params { | ||
_pad: f32, | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Optional note on _pad
field.
The _pad
field in struct Params
may be a placeholder for alignment or future usage. Provide a short comment clarifying its purpose to avoid confusion.
@group(0) @binding(0) var<uniform> uniforms: UBO; | ||
@group(0) @binding(1) var<uniform> params: Params; |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider consolidating uniforms.
If UBO
and Params
are frequently used together, unifying them into a single block may improve performance by reducing the number of bindings. However, keep them separate if they have distinct lifetimes or update frequencies.
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src/main/main.mbt (8)
1-2
: Remove or clarify commented import
If you plan to reintroduce this import fromglobal.mjs
, please add a note explaining its future use. Otherwise, removing it will reduce clutter.
3-5
: Store struct is empty
If you intend to add application state here, consider defining relevant fields. Otherwise, remove or document the struct to avoid confusion.
7-8
: Document or remove emptyAction
An empty enum may confuse readers about its purpose. Provide placeholders or remove it until it’s needed.
10-12
: Remember concurrency or reactivity considerations
When using an atom-based store, ensure that any frequent updates toStore
do not cause performance or concurrency issues.
15-17
: Enhance dispatch to handle actions
Currently,dispatch
does not processAction
or update the store. Consider adding an action parameter and logic to mutate your application’s state properly.
28-33
: Verify rendering errors
render_app
returns aResult
that you unwrapped. Confirm upstream or downstream code properly logs or handles potential builder errors to avoid application crashes.
36-63
: Add robust error handling inloaded
Consider handling potential failures in context initialization, texture loading, or gamepad control to prevent silent errors.
71-74
: Remove or explain commented-out code
If__caterfoilHandleCompilationInfo
is no longer needed, removing it reduces clutter. Otherwise, add a note explaining its future use.moon.mod.json (2)
2-2
: Add repository URL
Populating this field inmoon.mod.json
helps contributors discover and contribute to your project.
4-7
: Dependency declarations look good
You have pinned explicit versions (0.0.4
and0.0.6
), which is great for reproducible builds. No issues spotted here.Also applies to: 14-14
src/main/moon.pkg.json (2)
3-9
: Document the build process
You added a new "pre-build" step for embedding shaders. Consider adding a short explanation of why and how it’s done for maintainability and onboarding.
10-24
: Pin external library versions
Importingtiye/caterfoil/lib
andtiye/dom-ffi/lib
without specifying a version might lead to unexpected breaks. Pin a specific version or commit if you aim for reproducible builds.src/main/container.mbt (1)
38-67
: Remove or customize the guard statement
guard true else { raise @caterfoil.BuilderError("ok") }
will never trigger, making it effectively dead code. Remove it or replace with meaningful logic.
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fn get_tab() -> Tab { | ||
let location = @dom_ffi.window().location() | ||
let params = @dom_ffi.new_url_search_params(location.search()) | ||
let tab = params.get("tab") | ||
Tab::from_string(tab) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Handle missing or invalid URL parameters
If the “tab” parameter is absent or invalid, get_tab
will fall back on default logic in Tab::from_string
. Consider logging or handling missing parameters more explicitly to guide users.
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@caterfoil.connect_retained_atom_to_srorage("caterfoil.mbt", read=true) | ||
@caterfoil.window().set_onload(loaded) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Potential spelling mistake in connect_retained_atom_to_srorage
If srorage
is not intentional, correct it to storage
for consistency.
-@caterfoil.connect_retained_atom_to_srorage("caterfoil.mbt", read=true)
@caterfoil.connect_retained_atom_to_storage("caterfoil.mbt", read=true)
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@caterfoil.connect_retained_atom_to_srorage("caterfoil.mbt", read=true) | |
@caterfoil.window().set_onload(loaded) | |
@caterfoil.connect_retained_atom_to_storage("caterfoil.mbt", read=true) | |
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///| | ||
enum Tab { | ||
QuatCurve | ||
HyperCube | ||
HyperCubeGrid | ||
FlyCity | ||
LampTree | ||
QuatTree | ||
QuatProduct | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add doc comments for Tab
Explain each variant’s purpose, and possibly note typical usage scenarios. This is especially helpful for newcomers unfamiliar with your domain logic.
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///| | ||
fn Tab::default() -> Tab { | ||
HyperCubeGrid | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Prefer direct variant usage over default fallback
Tab::default()
always returns HyperCubeGrid
. If this is intended, consider clarifying your reasoning in doc comments to inform maintainers.
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///| | ||
fn Tab::from_string(s : String) -> Tab { | ||
match s { | ||
"quat-curve" => QuatCurve | ||
"hyper-cube" => HyperCube | ||
"hyper-cube-grid" => HyperCubeGrid | ||
"fly-city" => FlyCity | ||
"lamp-tree" => LampTree | ||
"quat-tree" => QuatTree | ||
"quat-product" => QuatProduct | ||
_ => { | ||
println("Unknown tab: " s) | ||
Tab::default() | ||
} | ||
} | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Log unknown tabs
You already print “Unknown tab” in Tab::from_string
. Consider using a more explanatory error message or collecting metrics if unknown tabs are frequent.
///| | ||
let none : @caterfoil.CaterfoilRenderObject = @caterfoil.group([]) | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Avoid accidental confusion
none
is a well-named placeholder, but add a brief comment describing its purpose (an empty group). This helps future readers.
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src/main/prime-walk.mbt (5)
2-2: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider clarifying the function name for maintainability
Whilecomp_prime_walk
describes this function as computing a prime walk, a more self-explanatory name such ascompute_prime_walk_render_object
might improve readability and clarity for future maintainers.
3-13: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Potential performance concern with large step values
Each step is set to ±2.0, and its magnitude is scaled by the prime values. For larger primes, this could generate significant displacement and large vertex arrays, especially when iterating through thousands of primes. Consider bounding the step size or enabling a user-configurable scale factor to prevent unbounded growth in vertex data.
19-26: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Remove or gate debugging statements for production code
Theprintln
statements might be valuable in development, but printing each prime could impact performance due to console I/O, especially when iterating through thousands of primes. Consider removing or gating these logs behind a debug or verbose mode.
28-28: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Minor style suggestion about commented-out code
The commented-out color assignment (// let color = Color::new(...)
) can be removed or clarified if no longer needed. Retaining outdated comments may lead to confusion.
33-34: 🛠️ Refactor suggestion
Potentially large array concatenation
Usingdata = data triangles_list
in a loop repeatedly reallocates arrays for large prime sets and may degrade performance. Consider using a more efficient approach like a buffer with a pre-allocated capacity or pushing individual elements to reduce copying overheads.src/main/primes.mbt (1)
2-257: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Large static prime list
Storing such a large prime array in source code can increase compilation time and memory usage. Consider an alternative approach, such as reading from a data file or generating primes on-demand, especially if future expansions beyond the current range are planned.src/main/container.mbt (5)
2-11: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add doc comments describing each
Tab
variant
Each variant name is straightforward, but a succinct explanation of the purpose or usage context (particularly for advanced concepts likeQuatCurve
orHyperCubeGrid
) could help maintainers and contributors unfamiliar with the domain.
19-34: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Refine handling of unknown tabs
Printing an “Unknown tab” message is convenient but consider whether falling back toTab::default()
might obscure errors. You could raise a more explicit error or provide a fallback path to inform the user more clearly.
37-37: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Document the purpose of
none
Currently,none
holds an empty render object. A brief comment explaining its usage (e.g., for disabling or skipping certain components) can reduce confusion for future maintainers.
46-63: 🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider short comments for each component call
The match arms call functions likecomp_quat_curve()
directly. Adding quick remarks describing the purpose of each branch or referencing relevant doc comments can help new contributors navigate the rendering logic.
64-68:
⚠️ Potential issueFix always-true condition
The expressionshow_axis.or(true)
will always evaluate totrue
, so the axis will always appear. If you intend to letshow_axis
drive axis visibility, you might want something likeshow_axis.or(false)
or a safe unwrap that defaults tofalse
.Example fix:
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src/main/prime-walk.mbt (2)
3-13
: Validate quaternion steps array usage.The array
steps
cycles usingidx % steps.length()
. This logic is correct and safe for large prime sets. However, verify that you intended an 8-step repeating pattern for all primes and confirm it suits your rendering needs.
28-28
: Double-check color function correctness.The name
Color::blue_brigher()
may be a typo. Verify that it exists and returns the intended color. If it’s a custom color variant, confirm correct spelling or consider a more descriptive color name (e.g.,blue_lighter
).src/main/container.mbt (6)
2-11
: Add doc comments forTab
.Each variant in this enum has a distinct intent and usage context. Including concise doc comments for each variant would help future maintainers appreciate when to use
QuatCurve
,HyperCube
, etc.
14-16
: Explain the rationale behind returningPrimeWalk
inTab::default
.If this fallback is intentional, clarify why
PrimeWalk
is the default. A brief explanation will help others who may wonder why a specific variant is chosen here.
19-34
: Enhance handling for unknown tabs.Currently, the method logs "Unknown tab" and returns
Tab::default()
. If you foresee many invalid or unexpected tab parameters, consider providing additional insight or tracking these occurrences for debugging purposes, rather than silently defaulting.
37-37
: Document the purpose ofnone
.Although the name is fairly descriptive, an inline comment or doc comment clarifying that it produces an empty group could prevent confusion for new contributors.
44-44
: Remove or customize the guard statement.Since
guard true else { ... }
will never raise an error, it acts as dead code. Delete it or convert it into a meaningful condition to avoid confusion.
40-70
: Add doc comments forcomp_container
.This function integrates multiple components based on the selected
Tab
. Documenting its purpose, usage patterns, possible errors, and the role of theshow_axis
parameter will clarify its role in the rendering pipeline.
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fn comp_prime_walk() -> @[email protected] { |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Ensure there's a docstring or explanatory comment for the public function.
The function comp_prime_walk
is a key entry point but lacks a descriptive overview. Consider extending the existing doc comment to guide other developers on usage, expected inputs, and outputs of this function.
let mut position = Quaternion::new() | ||
let mut data : Array[@caterfoil.PolylineVertex] = [] | ||
let mut prev : UInt = 0 | ||
for idx, v in primes_list.iter2() { |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Ensure prime list usage is validated.
If primes_list
is empty or unavailable at runtime, the loop may not execute or could fail. Consider adding guards or tests verifying that primes_list
is non-empty if required for rendering.
// println( | ||
// "v: " | ||
// v.to_string() | ||
// " " | ||
// (idx % 8).to_string() | ||
// " " | ||
// step.scale(v.to_float()).to_string(), | ||
// ) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Remove or consolidate commented logging.
Large amounts of commented-out debugging code can clutter maintainability. If logging is still needed for diagnosis, consider using a more structured logger with configurable verbosity instead of leaving it commented out.
let trail : Array[@caterfoil.Vertex] = [ | ||
{ position, color: Color::blue_brigher() }, | ||
{ position: next_position, color: Color::blue_brigher() }, | ||
] | ||
let triangles_list = @caterfoil.create_vertex_data!(trail, width=1) | ||
data = data triangles_list |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Confirm polyline vertex usage and potential performance impact.
Creating and storing a separate trail of vertices for each prime could be large. If performance or memory usage becomes a bottleneck, consider batching or streaming data to the render pipeline.
println("data length: " data.length().to_string()) | ||
@caterfoil.object(label="prime-walk", data=WithTriangles(data)) |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Reevaluate print statement usage.
Printing the data length may be noisy during normal operation, especially if the list of primes is large. Consider using a conditional or debug-level logging for insights.
17959, 17971, 17977, 17981, 17987, 17989, 18013, 18041, 18043, 18047, 18049, 18059, | ||
18061, 18077, 18089, 18097, 18119, 18121, 18127, 18131, 18133, 18143, 18149, 18169, | ||
18181, 18191, 18199, 18211, 18217, 18223, 18229, 18233, 18251, 18253, 18257, 18269, | ||
18287, 18289, 18301, 18307, 18311, 18313, 18329, 18341, 18353, 18367, 18371, 18379, | ||
18397, 18401, 18413, 18427, 18433, 18439, 18443, 18451, 18457, 18461, 18481, 18493, | ||
18503, 18517, 18521, 18523, 18539, 18541, 18553, 18583, 18587, 18593, 18617, 18637, | ||
18661, 18671, 18679, 18691, 18701, 18713, 18719, 18731, 18743, 18749, 18757, 18773, | ||
18787, 18793, 18797, 18803, 18839, 18859, 18869, 18899, 18911, 18913, 18917, 18919, | ||
18947, 18959, 18973, 18979, 19001, 19009, 19013, 19031, 19037, 19051, 19069, 19073, | ||
19079, 19081, 19087, 19121, 19139, 19141, 19157, 19163, 19181, 19183, 19207, 19211, | ||
19213, 19219, 19231, 19237, 19249, 19259, 19267, 19273, 19289, 19301, 19309, 19319, | ||
19333, 19373, 19379, 19381, 19387, 19391, 19403, 19417, 19421, 19423, 19427, 19429, | ||
19433, 19441, 19447, 19457, 19463, 19469, 19471, 19477, 19483, 19489, 19501, 19507, | ||
19531, 19541, 19543, 19553, 19559, 19571, 19577, 19583, 19597, 19603, 19609, 19661, | ||
19681, 19687, 19697, 19699, 19709, 19717, 19727, 19739, 19751, 19753, 19759, 19763, | ||
19777, 19793, 19801, 19813, 19819, 19841, 19843, 19853, 19861, 19867, 19889, 19891, | ||
19913, 19919, 19927, 19937, 19949, 19961, 19963, 19973, 19979, 19991, 19993, 19997, | ||
20011, 20021, 20023, 20029, 20047, 20051, 20063, 20071, 20089, 20101, 20107, 20113, | ||
20117, 20123, 20129, 20143, 20147, 20149, 20161, 20173, 20177, 20183, 20201, 20219, | ||
20231, 20233, 20249, 20261, 20269, 20287, 20297, 20323, 20327, 20333, 20341, 20347, | ||
20353, 20357, 20359, 20369, 20389, 20393, 20399, 20407, 20411, 20431, 20441, 20443, | ||
20477, 20479, 20483, 20507, 20509, 20521, 20533, 20543, 20549, 20551, 20563, 20593, | ||
20599, 20611, 20627, 20639, 20641, 20663, 20681, 20693, 20707, 20717, 20719, 20731, | ||
20743, 20747, 20749, 20753, 20759, 20771, 20773, 20789, 20807, 20809, 20849, 20857, | ||
20873, 20879, 20887, 20897, 20899, 20903, 20921, 20929, 20939, 20947, 20959, 20963, | ||
20981, 20983, 21001, 21011, 21013, 21017, 21019, 21023, 21031, 21059, 21061, 21067, | ||
21089, 21101, 21107, 21121, 21139, 21143, 21149, 21157, 21163, 21169, 21179, 21187, | ||
21191, 21193, 21211, 21221, 21227, 21247, 21269, 21277, 21283, 21313, 21317, 21319, | ||
21323, 21341, 21347, 21377, 21379, 21383, 21391, 21397, 21401, 21407, 21419, 21433, | ||
21467, 21481, 21487, 21491, 21493, 21499, 21503, 21517, 21521, 21523, 21529, 21557, | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider storing or generating primes dynamically.
Hardcoding a massive array of primes may impact initial load time and memory usage. Evaluate whether to generate primes on demand, read them from a separate file, or otherwise reduce the static in-memory footprint.
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FlyCity => comp_fly_city(times=10) | ||
LampTree => comp_lamp_tree(times=10) | ||
QuatTree => comp_quat_tree(times=7) | ||
QuatProduct => | ||
comp_quat_product( | ||
mode=Grid, | ||
times=400, | ||
width=1, | ||
[email protected](w=1, x=0.01, y=0.02, z=0.0) | ||
.normalize() | ||
.scale(1.003), | ||
) | ||
PrimeWalk => comp_prime_walk!() |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider parameterizing these “magic numbers.”
Values like times=10
, times=7
, times=400
, and scale(1.003)
could be factored out into constants or made configurable to reduce duplication and clarify their intent.
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src/main/container.mbt (1)
36-38
: 'none' placeholder usage
Avoid accidental confusion by clarifying the meaning of this placeholder. Adding a short comment describing it as an empty render object helps future readers.
///| | ||
enum Tab { |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add doc comments for enum Tab
.
It may be helpful to explain the purpose of this enumeration and when each variant should be used, facilitating better clarity for future maintainers or newcomers.
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QuatCurve | ||
HyperCube | ||
HyperCubeGrid | ||
FlyCity | ||
LampTree | ||
QuatTree | ||
QuatProduct | ||
PrimeWalk | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider documenting each variant.
Providing a brief explanation for each variant (e.g., QuatCurve, HyperCube, etc.) ensures that developers quickly understand when or why to use a particular variant.
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///| | ||
fn Tab::default() -> Tab { | ||
PrimeWalk | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Clarify default variant selection.
Returning PrimeWalk
as the default may surprise users expecting a different behavior. Consider adding a high-level explanation of why PrimeWalk
is the fallback.
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fn Tab::from_string(s : String) -> Tab { | ||
match s { | ||
"quat-curve" => QuatCurve | ||
"hyper-cube" => HyperCube | ||
"hyper-cube-grid" => HyperCubeGrid | ||
"fly-city" => FlyCity | ||
"lamp-tree" => LampTree | ||
"quat-tree" => QuatTree | ||
"quat-product" => QuatProduct | ||
"prime-walk" => PrimeWalk | ||
_ => { | ||
println("Unknown tab: " s) | ||
Tab::default() | ||
} | ||
} | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Revisit handling unknown tabs.
Currently, unknown tabs print a console message and then default to PrimeWalk
. This might mask user input errors. For robust error handling, consider either returning an error or logging with higher severity (e.g. warnings), so users or developers are informed more clearly.
fn comp_container( | ||
params : SearchParams | ||
) -> @[email protected] { | ||
guard true else { raise @caterfoil.BuilderError("ok") } |
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🛠️ Refactor suggestion
Remove or replace the always-true guard statement.
The guard true else { raise @caterfoil.BuilderError("ok") }
is effectively dead code. Either remove it if unnecessary or replace it with a condition that reflects actual error scenarios.
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@caterfoil.group([ | ||
match params.tab { | ||
QuatCurve => comp_quat_curve() | ||
HyperCube => comp_hyper_cube!() | ||
HyperCubeGrid => comp_hyper_cube_grid!() | ||
FlyCity => comp_fly_city(times=10) | ||
LampTree => comp_lamp_tree(times=10) | ||
QuatTree => comp_quat_tree(times=7) | ||
QuatProduct => | ||
comp_quat_product( | ||
mode=Grid, | ||
times=400, | ||
width=2, | ||
[email protected](w=1, x=0.01, y=0.02, z=0.0) | ||
.normalize() | ||
.scale(1.003), | ||
) | ||
PrimeWalk => comp_prime_walk!() | ||
}, | ||
if params.show_axis { | ||
comp_axis!(width=4) | ||
} else { | ||
none | ||
}, | ||
]) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Extract and document magic values.
Hardcoded numbers like times=10
, times=7
, and scale(1.003)
can be confusing. Consider factoring them out into named constants or adding comments explaining their rationale. This improves readability and maintainability.
URL params: | ||
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- `tab` content to draw, options(defaults to last one): | ||
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- `quat-curve` | ||
- `hyper-cube` | ||
- `hyper-cube-grid` | ||
- `fly-city` | ||
- `lamp-tree` | ||
- `quat-tree` | ||
- `quat-product` | ||
- `prime-walk` | ||
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- `read` to read from storage, options(defaults to `true`): | ||
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- `true` | ||
- `false` | ||
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- `axis` to draw axis, options(defaults to `true`): | ||
- `true` | ||
- `false` | ||
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### Development |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Explicitly mention the default tab.
Currently, you note that the tab
defaults to “the last one,” which happens to be prime-walk
. Explicitly listing "prime-walk
" as the default clarifies user expectations if the order is ever changed.
### Development | ||
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add usage instructions under “Development”.
Consider describing how to build, run, or modify the project for local development in this section, so new contributors can get started quickly.
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src/main/container.mbt (7)
1-12
: Add doc comments forenum Tab
.Providing brief explanations for each variant in
Tab
helps new contributors understand their usage and context within the rendering logic.
14-17
: Clarify the default variant selection.Returning
SphereTessellation
by default may surprise some users. Consider briefly documenting why this variant is treated as the fallback.
19-36
: Revisit handling unknown tabs.When the string does not match a valid variant, you print "Unknown tab" and default to
SphereTessellation
. Consider providing a more informative error or warning, so that users realize an unexpected tab was specified.
38-40
: Clarify thenone
placeholder.Add a short comment describing how
none
is a render object with no geometry, used whenever nothing should be drawn.
42-72
: Add doc comments forcomp_container
.Document its purpose and note the conditions under which it may raise a
BuilderError
. This clarifies the function’s role in constructing composited render objects.
45-45
: Remove or replace the always-true guard.The statement
guard true else { raise ... }
is effectively dead code. Consider removing it or using a meaningful condition that reflects a real error scenario.
51-59
: Parameterize or document these “magic numbers.”Values like
times=10
,times=7
,times=400
, and.scale(1.003)
enhance readability when factored into named constants or explained with comments.src/main/sphere-tessellation.mbt (1)
8-11
: Looks good!The constructor for
Triangle
is straightforward and clearly conveys intent.
///| | ||
struct Triangle { | ||
a : Quaternion | ||
b : Quaternion | ||
c : Quaternion | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add doc comments for Triangle
.
Briefly describe that it holds three Quaternion
points for sphere tessellation. This clarifies the struct’s role to new collaborators.
///| split the triangle into 4 triangles from middle points of each edge | ||
fn Triangle::split_4(self : Triangle) -> Array[Triangle] { | ||
let ab = (self.a self.b).scale(0.5).normalize() | ||
let bc = (self.b self.c).scale(0.5).normalize() | ||
let ca = (self.c self.a).scale(0.5).normalize() | ||
[ | ||
Triangle::new(self.a, ab, ca), | ||
Triangle::new(ab, self.b, bc), | ||
Triangle::new(bc, self.c, ca), | ||
Triangle::new(ab, bc, ca), | ||
] | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Consider caching midpoints in split_4
.
Splitting a triangle into multiple subtriangles repeatedly might become costly for large iterations. You could optimize by caching midpoints if needed.
///| | ||
fn Triangle::lines_points(self : Triangle) -> Array[Quaternion] { | ||
[self.a, self.b, self.a, self.c, self.b, self.c] | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Add usage notes for lines_points
.
This method returns edges implied by (a, b), (a, c), (b, c)
. Documenting the order of returned edges can help readers use or modify it correctly.
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///| | ||
pub fn comp_sphere_tessellation( | ||
times? : Int | ||
) -> @caterfoil.CaterfoilRenderObject { | ||
let p1 = Quaternion::new(x=1.0) | ||
let p2 = Quaternion::new(x=-1.0) | ||
let p3 = Quaternion::new(y=1.0) | ||
let p4 = Quaternion::new(y=-1.0) | ||
let p5 = Quaternion::new(z=1.0) | ||
let p6 = Quaternion::new(z=-1.0) | ||
let p7 = Quaternion::new(w=1.0) | ||
let p8 = Quaternion::new(w=-1.0) | ||
let mut triangles : Array[Triangle] = [ | ||
// group 135 | ||
Triangle::new(p1, p3, p5), | ||
Triangle::new(p1, p3, p6), | ||
Triangle::new(p1, p4, p5), | ||
Triangle::new(p1, p4, p6), | ||
Triangle::new(p2, p3, p5), | ||
Triangle::new(p2, p3, p6), | ||
Triangle::new(p2, p4, p5), | ||
Triangle::new(p2, p4, p6), | ||
// group 137 | ||
Triangle::new(p1, p3, p7), | ||
Triangle::new(p1, p3, p8), | ||
Triangle::new(p1, p4, p7), | ||
Triangle::new(p1, p4, p8), | ||
Triangle::new(p2, p3, p7), | ||
Triangle::new(p2, p3, p8), | ||
Triangle::new(p2, p4, p7), | ||
Triangle::new(p2, p4, p8), | ||
// group 157 | ||
Triangle::new(p1, p5, p7), | ||
Triangle::new(p1, p5, p8), | ||
Triangle::new(p1, p6, p7), | ||
Triangle::new(p1, p6, p8), | ||
Triangle::new(p2, p5, p7), | ||
Triangle::new(p2, p5, p8), | ||
Triangle::new(p2, p6, p7), | ||
Triangle::new(p2, p6, p8), | ||
// group 357 | ||
Triangle::new(p3, p5, p7), | ||
Triangle::new(p3, p5, p8), | ||
Triangle::new(p3, p6, p7), | ||
Triangle::new(p3, p6, p8), | ||
Triangle::new(p4, p5, p7), | ||
Triangle::new(p4, p5, p8), | ||
Triangle::new(p4, p6, p7), | ||
Triangle::new(p4, p6, p8), | ||
] | ||
let times = times.or(5) | ||
for i = 0; i < times; i = i 1 { | ||
let next_triangles : Array[Triangle] = [] | ||
for triangle in triangles { | ||
for t in triangle.split_4() { | ||
next_triangles.push(t) | ||
} | ||
} | ||
triangles = next_triangles | ||
} | ||
let data = [] | ||
for triangle in triangles { | ||
let lines = triangle.lines_points() | ||
for point in lines { | ||
let v = Vertex::{ position: point.scale(80.0), color: Color::new(r=1.0) } | ||
data.push(v) | ||
} | ||
} | ||
@caterfoil.object( | ||
label="lamp-tree", | ||
topology=LineStrip, | ||
data=WithPoints(data), | ||
) | ||
} |
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🧹 Nitpick (assertive)
Evaluate performance implications of iterative subdivision.
For large times
, this approach generates many triangles and could degrade runtime performance. Consider warning users or enforcing an upper bound for times
.
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} | ||
} | ||
@caterfoil.object( | ||
label="lamp-tree", |
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Mismatched label in returned render object.
The label is set to "lamp-tree"
though the function name is comp_sphere_tessellation
. Rename it to reduce confusion and better reflect the sphere tessellation output.
- label="lamp-tree",
label="sphere-tessellation",
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label="lamp-tree", | |
label="sphere-tessellation", |
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