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Draft:Swiss Society of Economics and Statistics

Dear @Cabrils,

Thank you for your feedback and suggestion to communicate on your user talk page. I am reaching out to discuss my draft page, Draft:Swiss Society of Economics and Statistics. Following your request to specify which criteria I believe the page meets, I will provide a detailed explanation here. Your recommendations for improving the draft, if needed, would be greatly appreciated.

The Swiss Society of Economics and Statistics was established in 1864. The society is responsible for the Swiss Journal of Economics and Statistics, which is also about to celebrate its 160th anniversary. The majority of the external secondary and reliable sources I have found predominantly reference the journal and its open-access publications on the SpringerOpen platform. However, the society itself, which is the driving force behind the journal and appoints its editorial team, may not be as prominently featured in the media.

Therefore, I would like to argue that the page meets the WP criteria #3 due to the following reasons:

It provides information about an association that unites all Swiss universities with Faculties of Economics.
It highlights the society's role in publishing the renowned Swiss Journal of Economics and Statistics.
The journal's chief editor is Professor Marius Brülhart.

I would value your feedback on whether this meets the criteria for organizational notability.

Thank you for your time and assistance.

Best regards,

KMerrigold KMerrigold (talk) 16:37, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi [@KMerrigold, thanks for the ping.

For clarity, I suggested you ping me here when you had implemented my suggestions. Discussion of the draft should best take place on the Talk page of the Draft itself so it is most easily visible to all editors and reviewers, so I'm copying this over to there, where I will reply in more detail. Thanks. Cabrils (talk) 04:19, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Cabrils,

I've made some changes for you to review. I've posted my WP:Three sources on the draft's talk page. Let me know if these changes suffice the notability requirement.

Thanks.

Best,

KMerrigold KMerrigold (talk) 09:56, 23 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Janneke Parrish

I've recently been working on BLP issues involving another fired Apple employee, Ashley Gjøvik, and found Parrish's article there. Saw the comments between IP and you and was wondering if this page should be taken to WP:COIN, WP:Afd, or a merge discussion should be opened. It looks like the majority of the content is already at AppleToo. Say ocean again (talk) 02:21, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the ping! I was amazed to see that the page had been accepted. Investigating. Cabrils (talk) 00:50, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've nominated this for deletion | here. Cabrils (talk) 23:33, 11 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not sure if the page is on your radar, but one of the voters made pretty substantial changes to the article I just undid using a newsletter to boost Parrish's role in AppleToo. Probably best to keep an eye on any shenanigans to sway votes. Say ocean again (talk) 01:36, 16 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Say ocean again. Looks like the deletion discussion will go the other way, but was certainly worth nominating. In my experience, Oaktree's votes are generally pretty sensible. Cabrils (talk) 00:25, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Fair enough. I guess I'm a little more strict in my inclusion criteria. Say ocean again (talk) 19:02, 23 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I know what you mean. I appreciated your ping anyway. Certainly feel free to ping me in the future, happy to help where I can. Cabrils (talk) 23:31, 23 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Revised Draft:Katherine_Elkins

Hello!

Thank you for so quickly reviewing the draft of this proposed Wiki article. I carefully read, researched, and revised the Draft to address your primary concern regarding 'Notable' and meeting the minimum threshold for several of the 8 academic criteria. To address the 'notable' and academic criteria, I had to be a bit more foward but tried to focus on an organized list of impact, results, and contributions rather than a laundry list of CV items. I hope I struck a balance - please advise if not.

The new draft has many more supporting details and authoratative secondary sources with notable academics, researchers, and thought leaders that Elkins has engaged with over recent years. Many of the details like upcoming papers and talks at Yale, Harvard, Reed College, and others did not have authoratative links so I left them out.

My main concern is being transparent about COI at this point. To avoid this, I initially engaged a service to navigate this issue. They turned out to be a scam, so I am trying to write the article myself. It's complex to communicate to a third party because there are so many details and subtle judgement calls. I flagged this article as a potential COI when submitting and tagged my user page with "

This user has publicly declared that they have a conflict of interest regarding the Wikipedia article Katherine Elkins.

". I hope the merits of article speak to the authenticity.

There are very few women who are thought leaders in AI and tech in general, so I hope this will be a service to the research community and beyond to add more voices to discussions around AI. It's a bit of a catch-22 and as academics, we generally are not very good at having a voice beyond the narrow confines of academic echo chambers. With the rapid advance of AI in everything from lethal autonomous weapons to potential large-scale disemployment, there is a urgent need to bring more informed humanistic perspectives to the public discussions on AI.

Please advise on any next steps.

Gratefully,

J J2000ai (talk) 23:27, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi J2000ai, thanks for the ping. Discussion about the page is best posted on the Talk page of the draft, so it is most easily seen and accessible to all editors and reviewers, so I have copied your post over to there, and responded there. Cabrils (talk) 00:40, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Cabrils,

Thanks! I'm new to this so apologies as I learn the ropes. - Jon J2000ai (talk) 07:27, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

No worries! Cabrils (talk) 07:28, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you!

	The Teamwork Barnstar
	Thank you for your endless work at AfC to keep WP a little less bloated for the readers and a little less work for the editors. Say ocean again (talk) 01:38, 16 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Say ocean again That's very kind, thanks very much!

Draft:Mahi_R._Singh

Dmgy000 (talk · contribs)
- Draft:Mahi R. Singh (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Thank you for reviewing my article. Could you kindly tell me which part of the article doesn't meet the requirement of eight academic-specific criteria or cite independently?
Is the Fulbright US-Canada Research Chair award not enough for the academic contribution or the research content cited from the professor's website unreliable?
Thanks again for your time and patience.

Dmgy000 (talk) 02:18, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. Some evidence of the Alexander von Humboldt fellowship and Fulbright award would be very helpful (as you note, the only evidence is that which is stated on the subject's own website).

Please also address the other issues I raise in my comment, including if you have any connection to the subject, including being paid, as you then would have a conflict of interest that you must declare on your Talk page. Your contributions history certainly looks consistent with being a paid editor. Cabrils (talk) 02:35, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Re-submission with WP:Three best references establishing notability on Draft: Siegfried Haase

Hi Cabrils,

I've looked over the feedback you've provided on my draft submission and made some changes for you to review. I've posted my WP:Three sources and some additional information on changes I've made on the draft's talk page. Let me know if these changes suffice the notability requirement.

Thanks. Grinkelton-wp (talk) 05:28, 21 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Grinkelton-wp- well done, thanks. Good enough for me. Draft accepted. Cabrils (talk) 05:51, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:International_Association_for_Hydrogen_Energy

Dear Cabrils,

As suggested, I have added more references. Also I confirm that I am linked to the IAHE as I work on Hydrogen and part of the Board of Directors of IAHE. I also confirm that I do NOT get paid to do this and for the being part of the IAHE. I am volunteering to the IAHE.

Many thanks.

Kind regards,

Prof. Dr. Bruno G. Pollet

Sunday 21 July 2024. Bruno G Pollet (talk) 16:55, 21 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the ping. Discussion about the page is best posted on the Talk page of the draft, so it is most easily seen and accessible to all editors and reviewers, so I have copied your post over to there, and responded there. Cabrils (talk) 06:16, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 22:52:50, 24 July 2024 for assistance on AfC submission by Seekingart

Seekingart (talk · contribs)
- Draft:Elihost.com (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hello, would you mind please explain which of the parameters was not meet on the elihost.com article?

Seekingart (talk) 22:52, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The draft needs to meet the relevant requirements including WP:GNG, WP:NCORP but presently it is not clear that it does.

As you may know, Wikipedia's basic requirement for entry is that the subject is notable. Essentially subjects are presumed notable if they have received significant coverage in multiple published secondary sources that are reliable, intellectually independent of each other, and independent of the subject. To properly create such a draft page, please see the articles ‘Your First Article’, ‘Referencing for Beginners’ and ‘Easier Referencing for Beginners’.

None of the current references are from sources that are considered reliable for establishing notability (including the company's own website).

The draft does not appear to show that the subject has any notability beyond the average coverage in trade publications for similar corporations (see WP:ROTM).

Also, if you have any connection to the subject, including being paid, you have a conflict of interest that you must declare on your Talk page (to see instructions on how to do this please click the link).

Please familiarise yourself with these pages before amending the draft. If you feel you can meet these requirements, then please make the necessary amendments before resubmitting the page. It would help our volunteer reviewers by identifying, on the draft's talk page, the WP:THREE best sources that establish notability of the subject.

It would also be helpful if you could please identify with specificity, exactly which criteria you believe the page meets (eg "I think the page now meets WP:NCORP criteria #3, because XXXXX").

Once you have implemented these suggestions, you may also wish to leave a note for me on my talk page and I would be happy to reassess. Cabrils (talk) 23:17, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Karim_Diane

Thank you for your feedback and suggestions. I've removed references from blogs, and kept only the references from reliable sources. To answer your questions:

WP:THREE best sources that establish notability of the subject:

1) https://deadline.com/2024/07/star-trek-starfleet-academy-cast-karim-diane-amp-zoe-steiner-1236014459/

2) https://www.startrek.com/en-ca/news/starfleet-academy-cast-karim-diane-zoe-steiner

3) https://www.msn.com/en-ca/movies/news/star-trek-starfleet-academy-adds-karim-diané-zoë-steiner-to-cast/ar-BB1qeh8j

I think the page now meets WP:NACTOR criteria #1 and #2 because the actor has significant roles in multiple notable television shows for the world's largest networks. But MOST notably, he has just been cast in a leading role for the newest Star Trek tv show for CBS on Paramount . Star Trek is one of the most popular sci-fi franchises on the entire planet. Itsasecret123456 (talk) 01:32, 25 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the ping. Please see my reply on the Draft's Talk page. Cabrils (talk) 01:49, 25 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Neshe

Dear @Cabrils,

Thank you for your review and especially for the links and guidance you provided.

I checked the references, fixed some of them that were in the wrong place, removed the ones that did not follow the guidelines (not self published, not blacklisted, not press releases the ones containing interviews with the artist). In case that there are other references that you consider not following the guidelines, please point me to them and I will either clarify if there is some misunderstanding, or remove them.

None of the sources left should be from blogs, company websites or social media (Twitter, YouTube etc...). They are mainly from magazines and newspapers specialized in showbiz and music.

Regarding your comment regarding the conflict of interest, I don't charge anything by creating this page. I wanted to learn about creating and publishing a Wikipedia page (this is my first wiki page from scratch), and I can assure you that nobody would pay an amateur to do such thing without having proofs of previous contributions. I like her music, I realized that there is no info on her on Wikipedia, and I wanted to add publicly available information similarly as other artists of her relevance have today.

I did get in contact with her to obtain her permission for creating such page and in particular for using her photo. If you need a written proof that the photo can be used, let me know and I can request that.

Regarding the WP:MUSICBIO criteria, I would say that she fulfills the following criteria:

Criteria 1 - As can be seen in the references we kept. Her work was published in important magazines, that are normally independent from the musicians, and not self-published, as those normally have a publishing director / editor who approves author's work before publishing.

Criteria 2 - The song Bingo entered top 100 (place 80) according to Telif Metre (Turkish Copyright meter) data within the first week of it's release.

Criteria 11 - The song Hijo de la Noche was played during several months on Pal Station, Metro FM (and others) in Turkey. The song was also played during some time on Canal RCN in Colombia where it had a very good reception. Bingo on the other hand was played on several national radios stations in Turkey (Metro FM, Canal). I hope that now the page is more consistent and compliant with the Wikipedia rules. Otherwise let me know what else doesn´t fit.

Regards — Preceding unsigned comment added by GlobalMusicFan (talk • contribs) 00:03, 29 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Editor experience invitation

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