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User:Jordancollins077/Gloriosa superba/Loverofplants Peer Review

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General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Jordan Collins

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Gloriosa_superba&diff=prev&oldid=1286353268
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Gloriosa superba

Evaluate the drafted changes

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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: could use a little more information to give preview of what will be covered in the article.

Content: the edits made are beneficial to the article. I think more details about the plant could be added to the description section, like its dispersal type, if its monoecious or dieceous.

Tone and balance: the tone of the article does seem to be balanced. It covers multiple key points.

Organization: the content added is clear and addressed previous grammar issues.