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Dear readers, this is a work of an adolescent writer,this article is written so as to get readers to air their views on the writer's ability

                    LOVE BETRAYAL
The tears threatened to fall from Jenny's eyes as she stared at Charlie, clinging tightly to her little girl. As she continued to stare, she noticed that his clothing was better than it had been,he wore a gold chain watch, his shoes looked expensive, probably Italian made, his hair was a rich curly black and he had added more flesh to his cheek which had always been sunken in the past three years before be had left her.
Charlie summoned up courage and stared back though he was ashamed of what he had done,he just wouldn't show it. This wasn't the girl he had fallen in love with,she had been eighteen, slender with a long beautiful black hair which made every man want to glance at her twice and she was graceful as a princess, but the woman which stood before him was thinner and much older than her age her hair was dusty and her clothing was completely fade.Jenny couldn't hold back her tears any longer as she gazed at her one time lover,she could still remember would smuggle little meals to him when her mistress was not around, he was just a apprentice to Mr George who owned a furniture industry and since he had no place of his own, Mr George had given him one of the rooms in his house ,but he had no money to feed himself, he had met her when she had come to fetch water from the only borehole in the neighborhood which was owned by Mr George and after that, their friendship had develop tremendously. She would visit him everyday with food and come back later for the plates, she did all this behind her mistress's back, because she was just a barmaid. Until one evening, when she had come as usual to collect the plates after he had eaten, she noticed that he wanted to say something but did not know how to go about it,she smiled encouragingly and waited hoping he would overcome this. She sat on the only  chair in the dingy room near the bed were Charlie sat,first he played with the hem of her dress smiling foolishly and then he touched her laps and she let him since she loved him, soon he was kissing her deeply and then he picked her up and dropped her gently on the bed taking of his shirt and then he took off her clothes as he kissed her everywhere, Jenny was too carried away to care more or less of what she was doing, by the time she realised it,it was too late,she had been deflowered.
A few minutes later, as they laid side by side,Charlie made many promises to her and told her of how much he cherished her and that he would never leave her but that was soon to be confirmed when after a week,Jenny came to inform him that she was pregnant but Charlie rejected the pregnancy.
'I'm not ready to father a child,I don't have any money for any child upbringing',and Jenny had to run away before her mistress discovered about her pregnancy.
She had never set eyes on Charlie until when she went to the city hospital in Eket because her little girl,Joyce was I'll with a fever, she heard that a rich man was coming and that he usually donated gifts every time he came,she decided to wait, maybe I will get something she thought. Few hours later, she saw a group of cars come into the hospital and then there were shouts of joy by the patients. As she struggled to catch a glimpse of who the philanthropist could be, she was horrified to see that it was Charlie, she thought of how to get away,she decided to move through the crowd and make her escape before he saw her but as she struggled in between the crowd, they suddenly parted probably to let the visitor and his entourage pass and as they did,she found herself facing Charlie!

To comment on this piece, see: https://facebook.com/Lee-Gyeom-Son-602566679927586/?ref=Footer N/B: Any ideas contributed would be duly recognised.Humble Ayankwo (talk) 13:34, 9 December 2016 (UTC)