Jump to content

Talk:Sudha Malhotra

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Duplication of information

[edit]

There is a repetition of information. Consider these two sentences

"She retired from film industry in 1960, following her marriage with businessman Giridhar Motwani (whose family owned the Chicago Radio Mike Company)."

"Sudha Malhotra married Giridhar Motwani, whose family owned the famed Chicago Radio."

As can be seen, there is not only duplication of information, but even conflicting/confusing information. For example "Chicago Radio Mike Company" in one sentence and just "Chicago Radio" in another.

In my opinion, this duplication should be address.

Regards

[[ Anil1956 (talk) 02:37, 4 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]