Talk:1930–31 Cardiff City F.C. season/GA1
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 05:29, 13 July 2021 (UTC)
Hi - I'll make copyedits as I go (please revert if I inadvertently change the meaning) and jot queries below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:29, 13 July 2021 (UTC)
- make the lead into two paras
...club's board to sanction the sale of several players...- why not just "allow"?
Cardiff conceded 13 goals and scored only four in reply- both words or both numerals...tricky spread I know....sigh
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securing a –1 draw with Everton- presume this is a 1-1 draw....?
Cardiff gained only on further point in October- "one"?
The August–December is a bit heavy with scores and goals (naturally) - good to have the bit on appendiicitis in it. Any other events would be good if there are any to add (err.....anything about the weather?)
If you can find a source, maybe in the Aftermath section how long they remained in div 3 south before returning?
- Earwigs copyvio is clear
Otherwise a pretty miserable read (nice, but sad subject matter :)) Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:36, 13 July 2021 (UTC)
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a couple of minor issues....nearlythere @Kosack:....- @Casliber: Thanks very much for the review, I've amended all of the points above and expanded slightly where possible. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 17:48, 16 July 2021 (UTC)