User contributions for UnrivaledShogun
A user with 170 edits. Account created on 3 May 2007.
24 March 2020
- 01:5201:52, 24 March 2020 diff hist 0 m DNA Grammatical error. This compound sentence was separated by a period.
15 December 2019
- 07:3307:33, 15 December 2019 diff hist 8 Kobe Bryant sexual assault case →Aftermath: $136 million is not paid annually. It wasa 7-year contract worth $136m total. The highest paid NBA player ever did not make $136 million annually. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
5 November 2018
- 20:5320:53, 5 November 2018 diff hist 2 m Military–industrial complex →The First Era: The extremely poor grammar has been corrected.
24 July 2018
- 10:3410:34, 24 July 2018 diff hist −11 BrahMos Again, it has been already established earlier in that paragraph that it is supersonic. No need to restate that here. Also the the fastest supersonic cruise missile is also the fastest cruise missile. So why not get straight to the point and say it the simplest way possible? When readers read that it is supersonic and the fastest cruise missile, they will know it is also the fastest supersonic cruise missile. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 July 2018
- 05:2905:29, 21 July 2018 diff hist −11 BrahMos Original statement was "fastest supersonic cruise missile". I removed "supersonic". It has already been established as supersonic in a previous statement in same paragraph. Also, the fastest "supersonic cruise missile" is, by definition, simply the fastest cruise missile. Any non-supersonic cruise missile cannot be faster because it is not even supersonic. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 January 2017
- 10:5710:57, 21 January 2017 diff hist 1 Electric charge No edit summary
12 July 2016
23 December 2015
- 13:0213:02, 23 December 2015 diff hist −1 The Martian (film) Movie is no longer "8th" highest grossing film of 2015. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 March 2014
28 December 2013
- 13:4613:46, 28 December 2013 diff hist 0 m Honda Legend Re-arranged the 'aka' (also called) section to follow chronological order.
11 June 2013
- 01:0601:06, 11 June 2013 diff hist 1 Classical antiquity No edit summary
24 November 2012
14 November 2012
6 November 2012
- 23:5623:56, 6 November 2012 diff hist 0 Nikolay Zhukovsky (scientist) No edit summary
28 October 2012
- 18:0718:07, 28 October 2012 diff hist 0 Rock in Rio No edit summary
21 July 2012
18 July 2012
- 22:5522:55, 18 July 2012 diff hist −1 O.N.I.F.C. No edit summary
9 July 2012
- 13:3813:38, 9 July 2012 diff hist 0 Horus No edit summary
5 July 2012
- 14:2714:27, 5 July 2012 diff hist 2 Deron Williams No edit summary
- 14:2614:26, 5 July 2012 diff hist −1 Deron Williams Updated his profile to say that he will remain with the Nets
15 March 2012
- 17:1717:17, 15 March 2012 diff hist −8 Hulu Undid revision 482054257 by 204.11.184.94 (talk)
21 December 2011
- 03:4603:46, 21 December 2011 diff hist −16 Jeff Teague →Personal
5 September 2011
- 15:1915:19, 5 September 2011 diff hist −26 m Call of Duty →Future: If it was just "rumored", then it can't also be "stated" to be in development
29 August 2011
- 21:2621:26, 29 August 2011 diff hist −1 Lil Wayne No edit summary
- 21:2521:25, 29 August 2011 diff hist −9 m Lil Wayne It's no longer his "upcoming" album since it is already out.
9 April 2011
18 January 2011
13 January 2011
- 03:0103:01, 13 January 2011 diff hist 27 Jordan Jefferson →2010
- 03:0103:01, 13 January 2011 diff hist −4 Jordan Jefferson →2010
7 January 2011
- 13:4113:41, 7 January 2011 diff hist 20 Red Dead Revolver →Sequel: The link says first half of fiscal year 2010, not Q4 (fourth quarter) of 2009.
- 13:3913:39, 7 January 2011 diff hist −3 Red Dead Revolver →Sequel: Someone does not know that the "Q4 2009" stands for the fourth quarter of the calendar year 2009.
24 November 2010
- 17:3217:32, 24 November 2010 diff hist 1 College Park, Georgia →Demographics: fixed a link to the article for "white"
31 May 2010
15 May 2010
- 12:4712:47, 15 May 2010 diff hist 0 Auburn, Alabama →Education: Auburn Enrollment is now well over 24,000 students.
30 April 2010
- 16:1716:17, 30 April 2010 diff hist −4 B.o.B →Career: It looks cleaner this way i think.
- 16:1716:17, 30 April 2010 diff hist −90 B.o.B →Career: No one cares about other "pupular" songs on the album if they are not singles or something.
28 April 2010
- 12:1812:18, 28 April 2010 diff hist −3 Airplanes (song) It is not upcoming anymore. I have it (the physical album) from Best Buy
25 April 2010
24 April 2010
- 10:5610:56, 24 April 2010 diff hist 31 List of highest-grossing films Avatar is still in theatres (both the 3D and 2D versions). Well, in Atlanta, USA, atleast
11 April 2010
- 18:5918:59, 11 April 2010 diff hist 16 m Draft:Tha Carter IV Just 2 minor changes to sound more grammatically correct and to link to the RIAA certification page.
- 18:5618:56, 11 April 2010 diff hist 33 Draft:Tha Carter IV No edit summary
1 February 2010
- 13:1713:17, 1 February 2010 diff hist 2 Intel Core i7 Some i7 are dual cores http://processorfinder.intel.com/Details.aspx?sSpec=SLBMN
30 January 2010
- 04:0404:04, 30 January 2010 diff hist 174 Jamal Crawford →Regular season: I added in this year's stats up to 1/28/10
23 December 2009
5 September 2009
- 03:0803:08, 5 September 2009 diff hist 2 The Coon →Plot
25 May 2009
- 18:1218:12, 25 May 2009 diff hist 1 The Blueprint 3 No edit summary
1 April 2009
- 17:1217:12, 1 April 2009 diff hist 3 Relapse (Eminem album) The section should be titled "released schedule", not "release history". The release has not happened yet, so it can not have/be history.
- 17:0917:09, 1 April 2009 diff hist 0 Detox (Dr. Dre album) "Released: 2009" makes it seems like its already released. "Released: Scheduled for 2009", or something like that, lets users know its upcoming.
- 17:0717:07, 1 April 2009 diff hist 14 Detox (Dr. Dre album) No edit summary
7 January 2009
- 22:3222:32, 7 January 2009 diff hist −4 President of Egypt No edit summary
