User contributions for Rttavi

15 September 2018

• 05:0905:09, 15 September 2018 diff hist −6 m Come into Our World Opening sentence: inserted "the" before "girl group," replaced "upon" twice with "on." Overview: replaced all three "upons" with "on."

12 September 2017

• 05:5105:51, 12 September 2017 diff hist 2 m What Christmas Means →Track listing: Track 1: changed "Glory" to "Glorify."

12 March 2017

• 22:0622:06, 12 March 2017 diff hist 0 m Nicky Cruz Intro ¶: Lowercased the "The" in "The Mau Maus."
• 22:0322:03, 12 March 2017 diff hist 0 m Nicky Cruz →Conversion to Christianity: Removed the hyphen from all three Mau-Maus.
• 22:0022:00, 12 March 2017 diff hist 0 m Nicky Cruz →Early life: Removed the hyphen from Mau-Maus.
• 21:5821:58, 12 March 2017 diff hist 0 m Nicky Cruz Intro ¶: Removed the hyphen in Mau-Maus.

4 February 2017

• 23:5823:58, 4 February 2017 diff hist 37 m The Imperials →The Elvis years: 2nd ¶: Replaced "earned him" with "won". Capitalized "the Imperials". Inserted "and, again, won a Grammy for the title song" after "their own albums ... ".
• 23:3323:33, 4 February 2017 diff hist 50 m The Imperials →The Elvis years: 2nd ¶: Replaced "Award-winning" with "Award-producing". Replaced "featuring" with "which earned him a Grammy for the title song and featured".

22 January 2017

• 08:5008:50, 22 January 2017 diff hist 0 m Macaulay Culkin →Friendship with Michael Jackson: Moved period inside of ending quotation marks after ' "... ridiculous" '.
• 08:2108:21, 22 January 2017 diff hist 1 m Macaulay Culkin →Career: 3rd ¶: replaced the comma after "... known for" with a semi-colon.

15 January 2017

• 01:5901:59, 15 January 2017 diff hist 3 m Patty Duke Intro ¶: Replaced "played" with "portrayed" before ' "identical cousins" '.

14 January 2017

• 13:0313:03, 14 January 2017 diff hist −10 m David Ring →Early years: Last sentence: Replaced "when it comes to being faithful" with "regarding their faith". Moved "...is:" to follow "...faith)".

25 November 2016

• 19:3719:37, 25 November 2016 diff hist −16 m Got a Girl →Discography: 5th ¶: changed "album is" to "album was", "release in" to "release on", and "its release has been bumped" to "was bumped".

20 November 2016

• 18:3318:33, 20 November 2016 diff hist −5 m Charlie and the Chocolate Factory (film) Intro ¶: replaced "through a tour" with "on a tour".
• 18:2818:28, 20 November 2016 diff hist 40 m Charlie and the Chocolate Factory (film) Intro ¶: removed comma after "contest". Inserted ", along with four other contest winners," after "and is" and inserted ";" after "factory".

3 September 2016

• 18:5318:53, 3 September 2016 diff hist 0 m The Sunny Side of the Street →Track listing: Lower cased "Of The."
• 18:5118:51, 3 September 2016 diff hist 4 m The Sunny Side of the Street →Track listing: Changed "You Got To" to "Ya Gotta" and inserted "I'm a" before "Manatee".
• 17:3317:33, 3 September 2016 diff hist 1 m The Sunny Side of the Street →Track listing: Inserted an exclamation mark after "Baby."

27 August 2016

• 20:2120:21, 27 August 2016 diff hist 4 m Ashley Judd Intro, 2nd ¶: inserted "and" before "Insurgent".

15 August 2016

• 05:5605:56, 15 August 2016 diff hist 4 m Bye Bye Birdie (disambiguation) Bye Bye Birdie may also refer to: inserted a comma after each of the first four listed artists.

14 August 2016

• 02:1802:18, 14 August 2016 diff hist 226 m Revelation (Journey album) →Track listings: Disc 2: inserted "(Re-recordings featuring Arnel Pineda)" after "Disc 2". and inserted "original version" before ("from"...) on all Disc 2 track entries.
• 02:0702:07, 14 August 2016 diff hist 22 m Revelation (Journey album) 1st ¶: inserted "(all featuring Pineda)" after "greatest hits", removed comma after "(...only)", moved commas after "...Away" and "...Love" inside of quotation marks, and moved period after "...Years" inside of quotation mark.

11 August 2016

• 09:2309:23, 11 August 2016 diff hist −21 m Evolution (Journey album) Last sentence: moved comma, after "... Squeezin' ", inside of quotation mark, replaced "tune" with "top 20 hit", removed the period after "Love", and replaced ' "Lovin', Touchin', Squeezin'" ' with "and"

17 July 2016

• 01:3201:32, 17 July 2016 diff hist 17 m Punchdance 2nd ¶: replaced "scene" with "performance", "done to" with "accompanied by", and "2 of Hearts" with "Two of Hearts", capitalized "stacey", and inserted a comma after "celebrity" and "Castle"
• 01:1701:17, 17 July 2016 diff hist 51 m Punchdance 2nd ¶: italicized "Hot Rod", replaced "examples" with "performances", replaced "done" with "performed (by Andy)" and "done to" with "accompanied by" and "music" with "recording," and inserted a comma after " 'Never' ".
• 00:4400:44, 17 July 2016 diff hist 12 m Punchdance 2nd ¶: replaced "examples" with "performances", inserted an "m" after "McCor", inserted an " 's" after "Bacon", and inserted a comma after "Bacon's", "McCormack", "Footloose", "Sandberg", and "Kimble."
• 00:1900:19, 17 July 2016 diff hist 2 m Footloose →Reception: Replaced "..., referred to as a" with "frustration-venting."
• 00:0600:06, 17 July 2016 diff hist −45 m Footloose →Reception: Replaced "similar" with "parody", and "as Bacon's," with "of Bacon's," removed "(a term then applied to Bacon's performance.)" after "punchdance," and inserted a period after "punchdance."

16 July 2016

• 23:4323:43, 16 July 2016 diff hist 36 m Footloose →Reception: Inserted a comma after "(Andy Sandberg)", replaced "Sandberg" with "Samberg", inserted "performs a" before "similar", inserted "as Bacon's," before "referred", and replaced "termed" with "referred to as a".
• 23:0423:04, 16 July 2016 diff hist 40 m Footloose →Reception: Inserted "In the 2007 film" to begin the sentence, inserted a comma after "Hot Rod" and "protagonist", replaced "had its" with "the", inserted "Rod Kimbledo (Andy Sandberga)" after "protagonist", and transposed "solo" and "dance."

9 July 2016

• 04:3604:36, 9 July 2016 diff hist −4 m (Not Just) Knee Deep →Song information: 2nd ¶: moved "The lyrics tell of a" to precede "girl", inserted a comma after " 'girl' " and " '... week' ", and "replaced ". It is about a", with "and the".
• 01:5401:54, 9 July 2016 diff hist 21 m (Not Just) Knee Deep →Song information: 2nd ¶: removed "the Moose and," inserted "and the Moose," after "the Chicken," replaced "blown away" with "turned on," and hyperlinked "the Freak."
• 01:3001:30, 9 July 2016 diff hist 2 m (Not Just) Knee Deep →Song information: 2nd ¶: placed "in 1979" in commas, replaced "meeting" with "dancing with," and "woman," with "freak turning him on" removed "presumably at a party;," inserted "as" before "she dances," and replaced "for him" with "with him."
• 01:0201:02, 9 July 2016 diff hist −5 m (Not Just) Knee Deep →Song information: 2nd sentence: replaced "g" with an apostrophe, "seen" with "regarded," and "number seventy-seven" with "No. 77," inserted "a" before "heavily," and "form" with "version."
• 00:3900:39, 9 July 2016 diff hist 6 m (Not Just) Knee Deep →Song information: 2nd ¶: removed "is the," inserted "was a" to "freak ...," removed "dances," inserted "did the freak" to "never ...," and moved period to inside of quotation mark after "beat."
• 00:2500:25, 9 July 2016 diff hist 9 m (Not Just) Knee Deep →Song information: 1st ¶: inserted a comma before "but," removed extra period after 2nd "Jr.," inserted "singer" after "lead," replaced "soul band" with "R&B group," changed en dash to em dash after "Spinners," and changed "a year" to "two years."

8 July 2016

• 23:4323:43, 8 July 2016 diff hist 17 m (Not Just) Knee Deep Intro sentence: inserted "with a" after "song" and "time of" after "running." Inserted a comma after "song" and "seconds." Capitalized "side."

4 July 2016

• 05:2305:23, 4 July 2016 diff hist 70 m A Night to Remember (Cyndi Lauper song) Intro ¶, 1st sentence: redirected "album" hyperlink to 'referred-to album title.' 3rd sentence: replaced "Lauper" with "the heartbroken protagonist," "the night" with "a romantic affair," "of" with "with," and "painful break-up" with "departed lover."

29 June 2016

• 08:5008:50, 29 June 2016 diff hist 1 m The Mistle-Tones →Reception: Inserted a comma after "(1.3 million)."
• 08:4708:47, 29 June 2016 diff hist −5 m The Mistle-Tones →Reception: Inserted a hyphen between "Mistle" and "tones" and capitalized "tones," changed "in the number 1" to "at the #1," inserted an apostrophe to "its time," and changed "period in adults" to "slot for adults."

26 June 2016

• 11:1611:16, 26 June 2016 diff hist −1 m Salem (cigarette) Intro ¶, last sentence: removed a space between "Bad Boys" and the comma.

14 June 2016

• 08:1608:16, 14 June 2016 diff hist −67 m Sometimes It Snows in April →Commercial performance: Changed "European countries" to "Europe," "fourteen" to "14," "sixty-three" to "63," "sixty-nine" to "69," "sixty-four" to "64," and "one hundred and ninety-three" to "193."
• 08:0408:04, 14 June 2016 diff hist −13 m Sometimes It Snows in April →Commercial performance: Removed "in" before "ineligible," "now" before "allowing," and "music" before "charts," and flip-flopped "heavily increased."

10 June 2016

• 09:5509:55, 10 June 2016 diff hist −3 m Shockwave Supernova Intro ¶: replaced "first since" with "second," and bracketed "Professor Satchafunkilus and the Musterion of Rock (2008)."

9 June 2016

• 08:0708:07, 9 June 2016 diff hist −16 m Flying in a Blue Dream →Overview: Last sentence of 1st ¶: replaced "more" with "28," and "in total, but is" with "as."
• 08:0108:01, 9 June 2016 diff hist −9 m Flying in a Blue Dream →Overview: Last sentence of 1st ¶: replaced "the most" with "more," "-eighteen-" with "(18)," "of" with "than," and "one" with "of his other." Removed "Satriani" and pluralized "album."

8 June 2016

• 07:3107:31, 8 June 2016 diff hist −9 m Professor Satchafunkilus and the Musterion of Rock →Overview: Last ¶, last sentence: removed "as to" following "reason," and "as" following "misspelled."

22 May 2016

• 04:3904:39, 22 May 2016 diff hist −9 m Dance with My Father (song) →Versions and appearances: 2nd to last ¶: removed 'even' after 'Idol judges' and 'American Idol,' inserted a "," after 'Lopez...Idol' and 'host...show,' placed a "." inside of quotation marks after 'sung,' and replaced '(for) her father' with 'to.'

14 April 2016

• 07:2207:22, 14 April 2016 diff hist −32 m Man on Fire (2004 film) →Remake: Inserted a comma after "Lakhiae" and "Ajnabee", inserted a space after "released", removed "Denzel Washington's character;", and inserted a period after "W".

23 March 2016

• 08:4908:49, 23 March 2016 diff hist −1 m Joss Stone →2004–06: Mind, Body & Soul and film debut: Section Title: removed "," after "Mind."