User contributions for Kipholbeck

23 November 2011

• 14:5014:50, 23 November 2011 diff hist 5 Kris Humphries →Early life
• 14:4814:48, 23 November 2011 diff hist 2 Kris Humphries →Early life

24 October 2011

• 19:5819:58, 24 October 2011 diff hist −13 Barcelona (Freddie Mercury and Montserrat Caballé song) No edit summary
• 19:4119:41, 24 October 2011 diff hist −5 Freddie Mercury No edit summary

17 September 2011

• 09:4409:44, 17 September 2011 diff hist 0 Bill Bixby Can anyone truly say their oratory and dramatic skills are perfect?

5 June 2011

• 11:4211:42, 5 June 2011 diff hist −1 Anthony Stewart (basketball player) You can't say "currently" if you don't specify when.

29 March 2011

• 14:2414:24, 29 March 2011 diff hist −2 Influenza vaccine No edit summary

3 March 2011

• 12:0012:00, 3 March 2011 diff hist 4 Charlie Sheen →Personal life

27 February 2011

• 21:3221:32, 27 February 2011 diff hist 4 Jeffrey Epstein I would suggest that the word "amicably" does not apply, since it would tend to contradict the fact that the two parties were adversaries.

10 October 2010

• 10:4010:40, 10 October 2010 diff hist −7 m Sheila Dikshit →Contributions: - Minor grammatical correction.

4 October 2010

• 10:4010:40, 4 October 2010 diff hist 0 Bear Grylls →Everest: - To "break one's back" is colloquial usage and incorrect, since the back does not consist of a single bone. He damaged three vertebrae.

23 July 2010

• 08:0808:08, 23 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Lotus Sutra →History and background
• 07:3607:36, 23 July 2010 diff hist 3 Āgama (Buddhism) →History
• 07:3507:35, 23 July 2010 diff hist 1 m Āgama (Buddhism) →History

13 July 2010

• 08:5008:50, 13 July 2010 diff hist 8 Buddhadasa No edit summary
• 08:4908:49, 13 July 2010 diff hist −3 Buddhadasa I thought it might be better to use "ordained" instead of "upasampanna", as the latter does not occur in the referenced article.
• 08:3508:35, 13 July 2010 diff hist −1 m Buddhadasa →Paticcasamuppada: Dependent Origination
• 08:3408:34, 13 July 2010 diff hist −7 Buddhadasa →Paticcasamuppada: Dependent Origination
• 08:1808:18, 13 July 2010 diff hist 1 m Buddhadasa →Early years: Put in a space!!!
• 08:0608:06, 13 July 2010 diff hist 1 m Buddhism Changed "sometime" to "some time".

20 March 2010

• 04:5304:53, 20 March 2010 diff hist 4 m Buddhism "The Buddha", not "Buddha".

8 February 2010

• 03:2803:28, 8 February 2010 diff hist −4 m Chuck Yeager →Biography: - Removed unnecessary word.

26 December 2009

• 15:4315:43, 26 December 2009 diff hist −13 Avatar (2009 film) →Plot: - The script clearly implies that the damage to Jake's spinal cord will be repaired, not that he will be fitted with prosthetic legs.

16 December 2009

• 14:0914:09, 16 December 2009 diff hist −1 Erhu →Erhu music
• 14:0414:04, 16 December 2009 diff hist 2 Kung Fu Panda (film) →Soundtrack

21 November 2009

• 08:0808:08, 21 November 2009 diff hist −14 m Galileo Galilei →Church controversy: - I would suggest that it is not for an encyclopedia to give an opinion as to whether any given utterance is impertinent or not.
• 08:0208:02, 21 November 2009 diff hist −5 m Marcus Einfeld →Criminal conviction: - As far as I know, there are no degrees of awareness of an event: either you are aware that something took place, or not.

20 September 2009

• 16:3216:32, 20 September 2009 diff hist 8 m Death of Tina Watson →Indictment: - Just so the second sentence is not such a surprise.
• 16:2916:29, 20 September 2009 diff hist 0 m Death of Tina Watson →Investigation: - No caps needed.

27 August 2009

• 05:3205:32, 27 August 2009 diff hist −1 m Loch Ness Monster No edit summary

14 July 2009

• 22:5522:55, 14 July 2009 diff hist −3 Buddhism No edit summary

23 January 2009

• 16:5316:53, 23 January 2009 diff hist 35 Channa (Buddhist) Cleared up an ambiguity.

12 December 2008

• 06:5306:53, 12 December 2008 diff hist 0 m Dhyana →In the Theravada tradition: - Removed hyphen.
• 06:5106:51, 12 December 2008 diff hist 0 m Dhyana →Dhyāna in Hinduism: - Decapped.

3 December 2008

• 15:3015:30, 3 December 2008 diff hist 37 Devadatta Divided sentence to avoid conclusion that Gautama Buddha caused a schism. Removed incomprehensible words "faceous cleaning". Various other changes.
• 15:2015:20, 3 December 2008 diff hist −8 Devadatta Simplified sentence.

2 December 2008

• 09:3309:33, 2 December 2008 diff hist 30 Exclusive Brethren Corrected internal link to point to article instead of disambiguation page.

28 November 2008

• 17:1717:17, 28 November 2008 diff hist 1 m Jhāna in Theravada →Stages of Jhāna: - Added comma to indicate that doubt is the fifth of the five hindrances.

26 November 2008

• 03:4203:42, 26 November 2008 diff hist 2 m Ainslie Meares White space.

22 November 2008

• 17:5317:53, 22 November 2008 diff hist 10 ISO 15919 →ISO 15919 and other systems: - This seems to belong in a different paragraph.
• 17:5117:51, 22 November 2008 diff hist 5 ISO 15919 →ISO 15919 and other systems: - As far as I know, the formula is "agreed upon", rather than "agreed".
• 17:5017:50, 22 November 2008 diff hist −4 ISO 15919 Removed duplicated internal link.
• 17:4917:49, 22 November 2008 diff hist −2 ISO 15919 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style_(titles) seems to indicate that titles of this kind should be italic rather than bold.
• 17:4317:43, 22 November 2008 diff hist 26 ISO 15919 Internal link should probably be placed with first occurrence of related text in article.
• 17:4017:40, 22 November 2008 diff hist 4 ISO 15919 Created internal link.

21 November 2008

• 22:0222:02, 21 November 2008 diff hist −3 Klaus Barbie →War crimes: - Using "being" instead of a verb forms a phrase, not a sentence.

20 November 2008

• 04:5004:50, 20 November 2008 diff hist 4 INS Tabar Created internal link.
• 04:4804:48, 20 November 2008 diff hist 2 m INS Tabar →Operations near the Horn of Africa: - White space.
• 04:4704:47, 20 November 2008 diff hist −7 m INS Tabar →Operations near the Horn of Africa: - "Approached" implies "closer".
• 04:4604:46, 20 November 2008 diff hist −11 INS Tabar →Operations near the Horn of Africa: - Retaliation *is* a response.