User contributions for 172.220.81.119

2 December 2023

• 05:2305:23, 2 December 2023 diff hist 927 User talk:Liz →Totally random Admin outreach.: new section Tag: New topic
• 05:2005:20, 2 December 2023 diff hist 930 User talk:Mz7 →Totally random Admin - reach out.: new section Tag: New topic

24 June 2023

• 20:5620:56, 24 June 2023 diff hist 671 User talk:172.220.81.119 →Copyright violation: Reply Tag: Reply
• 20:4020:40, 24 June 2023 diff hist −41 Rochdale →Current Economic Picture (2023)
• 20:4020:40, 24 June 2023 diff hist 0 Rochdale Undid revision 1161748460 by 172.220.81.119 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 20:3820:38, 24 June 2023 diff hist 0 Rochdale Undid revision 1161748209 by NebY (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted
• 20:3320:33, 24 June 2023 diff hist 1,348 Rochdale Undid revision 1161747234 by NebY (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted
• 20:3120:31, 24 June 2023 diff hist −103 Rochdale Undid revision 1161747382 by NebY (talk) Tags: Undo copyright violation template removed
• 20:3020:30, 24 June 2023 diff hist 0 Rochdale →Population Demographics: Still trying to make a legitimate paragraph from many loose text strings. Tag: Visual edit
• 20:1820:18, 24 June 2023 diff hist −1 Rochdale →Economic initiatives Tag: Visual edit
• 20:1520:15, 24 June 2023 diff hist 203 Rochdale →Economic initiatives Tag: Visual edit
• 20:1120:11, 24 June 2023 diff hist −13 Rochdale →Economic initiatives Tag: Visual edit
• 20:1020:10, 24 June 2023 diff hist 174 Rochdale →Economic initiatives: Atom valley etc. Tag: Visual edit
• 20:0620:06, 24 June 2023 diff hist −1 Rochdale →Population Demographics Tag: Visual edit
• 20:0520:05, 24 June 2023 diff hist −40 Rochdale →Current Economic Picture (2023) Tag: Visual edit
• 20:0020:00, 24 June 2023 diff hist 5 Rochdale →Current Economic Picture (2023): typos typos. Tag: Visual edit
• 19:5919:59, 24 June 2023 diff hist −3 Rochdale →Current Economic Picture (2023): Made a paragraph from a bunch of text strings - might need checking by someone else. Tag: Visual edit
• 19:5719:57, 24 June 2023 diff hist 3 Rochdale →Current Economic Picture (2023) Tag: Visual edit
• 19:5619:56, 24 June 2023 diff hist 192 Rochdale →Current Economic Picture (2023): minor ref. Tag: Visual edit
• 19:5319:53, 24 June 2023 diff hist 0 Rochdale →Current Economic Picture (2023): typo - it is a paragraph - leaving strings of text that are related - looks bad - the make up a paragraph usually - TALK before change please! Tag: Visual edit
• 19:5119:51, 24 June 2023 diff hist −3 Rochdale →Current Economic Picture (2023): One paragraph and three bullet points - easier read? Tag: Visual edit
• 19:4019:40, 24 June 2023 diff hist 2 Rochdale →Economic initiatives: typo Tag: Visual edit
• 19:3919:39, 24 June 2023 diff hist 495 Rochdale Added three items relevant to future economic development. A comment was made by another editor suggesting this has no actual encyclopedic value. I would challenge this - in addition, it would be appreciated if editors do not change new content before all the data had been loaded - this is both offensive and in conflict with the ethos of Wikipedia! Tag: Visual edit
• 19:2119:21, 24 June 2023 diff hist −2 Rochdale →Economic initiatives: typo. Tag: Visual edit
• 19:1919:19, 24 June 2023 diff hist −5 Rochdale →Economic initiatives: typo. Tag: Visual edit
• 19:1919:19, 24 June 2023 diff hist 217 Rochdale →Economic initiatives: added BBC ref. Tag: Visual edit
• 19:1319:13, 24 June 2023 diff hist 373 Rochdale →Economic initiatives: Added ref. to criticism of the NP ideas - Rochdale is in scope and this section is important in discussing efforts to enhance the economy of northern England. Tag: Visual edit
• 19:0719:07, 24 June 2023 diff hist 2 Rochdale →Economic initiatives Tag: Visual edit
• 19:0319:03, 24 June 2023 diff hist 303 Rochdale →Economic initiative: Enhanced the commentary. Tag: Visual edit
• 18:3718:37, 24 June 2023 diff hist −10 Rochdale →Industrial Revolution: Rochdale is a product of the -- no need for too much emphasis - it is certainly. Tag: Visual edit
• 18:3418:34, 24 June 2023 diff hist 181 Rochdale →Future Economic Initiatives: External ref. add. Tag: Visual edit
• 18:2918:29, 24 June 2023 diff hist 480 Rochdale →Population and Economic Data: Future Economic Initiatives Several initiatives relating to the future of this community are relevant to this article. The 'Future of Cities' initiative began in 2015 and continues to be active in creating a future vision and development strategies for this community -- this is highly relevant to this section and could be thoughtfully expanded by other editors. Tag: Visual edit
• 18:1618:16, 24 June 2023 diff hist 486 Rochdale →Population and Economic Data: Added a summary structure in this section. Introduced the issue of deprivation with a solid supporting link. Tag: Visual edit
• 18:0518:05, 24 June 2023 diff hist 30 Rochdale →Future Economic Initiatives: added a limited ref. to the future and a key government initiative. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 18:0218:02, 24 June 2023 diff hist 981 Rochdale →Population and Economic Data: Added some content on future of Rochdale. No content seems to focus on this area. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 17:4117:41, 24 June 2023 diff hist 212 Rochdale →Rochdale Canal: The Rochdale Canal has the highest concentration of canal locks in the regional northern canal system; it houses 91 locks over 32 miles (51 km). - added external ref.link - Tag: Visual edit
• 17:2917:29, 24 June 2023 diff hist 20 Rochdale →Religion: Rochdale is home to 21 mosques of various denominations. -- Added an internal reference to clarify this statement. Given the community likely has a Muslim community of around 20 percent in 2023 - this seems important to clarify to a broader reader base. Tag: Visual edit
• 17:1417:14, 24 June 2023 diff hist 1 Rochdale →Population and Economic Data: Rochdale has a significant population group originating from - wording change from 'large' large is subjective.
• 17:0917:09, 24 June 2023 diff hist 24 Rochdale →Demography: corrected to a use a term in use by 'typical global reader of English' of such a Wikipedia article. Noted the silly debate - so chose a neutral but descriptive term. The referenced Wikipedia article is guidance only. As it has become contentious chose the middle ground to gain consensus - it is a generic Wikipedia article and should use standard English - surely it is not a submission for a Ph.D..
• 16:4916:49, 24 June 2023 diff hist 10 Rochdale Created a new paragraph by ending the prior thought - Tag: Visual edit
• 16:4516:45, 24 June 2023 diff hist 0 Rochdale Changed to - 'the town had become of such importance that it was granted a' - corrected weird/awkward tense usage - note: this is common in this article and likely the whole article should be edited by a non-regional editor.
• 16:3216:32, 24 June 2023 diff hist −1 Rochdale →Decline of textile manufacturing: typo and language use corrected - 'decline was largely driven' - removed residual character from prior edits.
• 02:1102:11, 24 June 2023 diff hist 37 River Tamar →Tamar Valley AONB: Minor change Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 01:3801:38, 24 June 2023 diff hist −3 Rochdale →Population Data Tag: Visual edit
• 01:3301:33, 24 June 2023 diff hist 3 Rochdale →Demographics Tag: Visual edit
• 01:3101:31, 24 June 2023 diff hist 4 Rochdale →Toponymy: target audience consideration perhaps? Tag: Visual edit

22 June 2023

• 17:1617:16, 22 June 2023 diff hist 4 Rochdale Created a 'paragraph' structure for ease of reading - prior editors tended to use hyper dense text blocks which present very badly on some screens and OS versions - their is Wikipedia guidance for this! Tag: Visual edit
• 15:5315:53, 22 June 2023 diff hist 34 Rochdale No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 15:3915:39, 22 June 2023 diff hist 4 Rochdale Added links. Tag: Visual edit
• 15:3815:38, 22 June 2023 diff hist 231 Rochdale More clarity ONS viewpoints! Tag: Visual edit