User contributions for 107.77.193.168

25 February 2020

• 20:5020:50, 25 February 2020 diff hist 1 History of the Irish language →Nineteenth and twentieth centuries: For you stole Trevelyan's corn So the young might see the morn Now a prison ship lies waiting in the bay Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 February 2020

• 00:3200:32, 23 February 2020 diff hist −2 Yaqui Wars →Later developments: Corrected run on sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 July 2019

• 20:5720:57, 11 July 2019 diff hist −34 W. W. Norton & Company Fixed improper sentence structure. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 March 2018

• 06:5506:55, 8 March 2018 diff hist 595 Talk:16PF Questionnaire →Where is the counterpoint? Where is the criticism/critique? This article is massively unbalanced.: new section
• 00:5100:51, 8 March 2018 diff hist 264 Talk:Doctrine of signatures →Independent not dependent clauses: new section
• 00:4600:46, 8 March 2018 diff hist 336 Doctrine of signatures You are incorrect and out of line. Do not start an edit war and do not flame with insulting non-substantive responses like "rubbish". Commas are not used before the word "and" when linking two dependent clauses. Also, the writing is clearer with the sentences separated. We can discuss and debate this latter point if you like but the comma must be deleted if the sentences are to be combined.
• 00:0500:05, 8 March 2018 diff hist 38 Doctrine of signatures Combined sentence shouldn't have retained the comma. Combining the sentences makes the article slightly worse because it erroneously implies that the many deaths and severe illnesses occurred only recently. More awkward grammatically. I specifically noted, in this new revision, that the damaging legacy is both quite historical and also contemporary. The Aristolochic acid article discusses some of these contemporary instances of poisoning due to the doctrine.

7 March 2018

• 23:4723:47, 7 March 2018 diff hist 137 Tube sound →Class AB: The B doesn't follow A is a recurring problem with this article. B, "Yet, there are also respected solid state designs" has little to do with supporting the statement before it, A ("there is consensus that tube guitar amps can offer a useful type of sound, i.e. variety is good"). Tried to repair these sentences.
• 23:4023:40, 7 March 2018 diff hist 68 Tube sound →Single-ended triode (SET) amplifiers: typically doesn't tell us nearly as much as an actual range that is practically-achievable with the tech.
• 23:2723:27, 7 March 2018 diff hist 1,191 Talk:Tube sound →107.77.193.168's templating, explanations: new section
• 23:2323:23, 7 March 2018 diff hist 278 Tube sound →Musical instrument amplification: warmth description may, for some, due to framing effect
• 23:0823:08, 7 March 2018 diff hist 71 Racket (sports equipment) catgut never made with cats
• 23:0623:06, 7 March 2018 diff hist −13 Racket (sports equipment) →Tennis: fixed ref formatting
• 23:0423:04, 7 March 2018 diff hist 21,539 Racket (sports equipment) →Tennis: Improved neutrality of wording, increased clarity and accuracy by adding many needed details, and improved grammar. For instance "precise control" is redundant.
• 17:4417:44, 7 March 2018 diff hist 619 Doctrine of signatures danger of the pseudoscience
• 17:3417:34, 7 March 2018 diff hist 375 Doctrine of signatures pseudoscience
• 17:2617:26, 7 March 2018 diff hist 41 Doctrine of signatures →See also: added anthropomorphism and egocentrism
• 17:2317:23, 7 March 2018 diff hist 488 Doctrine of signatures →Scientific skepticism: Anthropomorphic (egocentrism) explanation
• 17:0817:08, 7 March 2018 diff hist 127 Tube sound Explain 1 -- Why is there this debate? Explain 2 -- Why is there this preference?
• 17:0317:03, 7 March 2018 diff hist 54 Tube sound Why? Why would tube production be "in vogue" since transistor technology is inexpensive and widely-available? Isn't there a clearer way to word this "logical complement" bit? Opening paragraph implies that transistor amplifiers no longer have worse sound. Is this the case? One historical reason is inadequate for a summary opening. This is not the "history of tube sound
• 16:5616:56, 7 March 2018 diff hist 167 Tube sound →Audible differences: use of feedback is debated
• 16:5116:51, 7 March 2018 diff hist −976 Tube sound →Sound reproduction: tried to fix some "reason" templating notes that weren't appearing. will move those that won't show up properly to the Talk page.
• 16:3916:39, 7 March 2018 diff hist 2,212 Tube sound →Sound reproduction: Sound reproduction section is incomplete, often unscientific, and often written in a confusing manner. Some editing made for improved clarity and accuracy, plus a lot of templating. Section also lacks a lot of information about other factors in amplifier quality; needs expansion.

1 January 2018

• 02:0102:01, 1 January 2018 diff hist 35 Scientist No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

28 December 2016

• 20:5120:51, 28 December 2016 diff hist −1 United States congressional delegations from Indiana Fixed typo Tags: canned edit summary Mobile edit Mobile app edit

26 August 2016

• 01:0501:05, 26 August 2016 diff hist 25 West Liberty, Ohio No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:0301:03, 26 August 2016 diff hist 31 West Liberty, Ohio No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 August 2016

• 07:2307:23, 5 August 2016 diff hist 141 The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild →Gameplay: Made an addition to details about the wolf link amibo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit