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According to CNN, After having denied in a previous court filing that he had fathered a child with an Arkansas woman, Hunter Biden was found to be the biological father of the child on the 21th of november. The child was born in August 2018, which would place conception during the period in which Biden was already in a relationship Could this information be placed in the 'Personal life"-section of the article please? Thanks in advance.213.34.49.36 (talk) 13:26, 21 November 2019 (UTC)
The CNN and Business Insider items are really just regurgitating the brief blurb from yesterday without doing additional reporting; I wouldn't say they add value, but I'll leave that for somebody else to act on if they so choose. XOR'easter (talk) 14:58, 21 November 2019 (UTC)
Text, personal life section, says 4 children but infobox says 3. Geo8rge (talk) 14:00, 26 November 2019 (UTC)
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Currently set as 3. Biden made a court filing on 30 November that he is not contesting that he is the father of the child in the ongoing lawsuit after DNA testing established he is the parent. So number should be increased to 4.RonaldDuncan (talk) 15:56, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
Hunter Biden "is not expected to challenge the results of the DNA test or the testing process."That's not the same as saying he is the father - we'll need a source that actually says that. – bradv🍁 16:00, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
Biden is not contesting the paternity of a child born in August 2018 in an ongoing lawsuit, despite the source saying "not expected to contest". These edits are jumping the gun - the previous version,
A lawsuit filed by an Arkansas woman asserts that Hunter is the father of her child, who was born in 2018was more accurate according to the source. – bradv🍁 16:10, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
Article update - I removed the out of date references (CNN etc) and just left in the arkansasonline ref with the line A separate motion filed with the clerk Wednesday said Hunter Biden "is not contesting paternity." RonaldDuncan (talk) 16:39, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
First apologies for confusing things by opening the 3-4 child topic. There were multiple edits/reverts and I self reverted the 3 > 4 child change and opened up the discussion with a new section at the bottom of the page. Missing the first section which was already discussing the topic.RonaldDuncan (talk) 11:37, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
It looks like the Child topic had reached a consensus around mentioning the court case, and updating when there was a ruling. I found an accepted source that Biden had filed to the court that he was no longer contesting Paternity, and updated with this info along with further info from the case about debts and unemployment. I think the consensus is to mention the current state of the case with regard to paternity. MrX objected to I think the debts and unemployment (separate discussion) and removed the entire section. A separate point is that the article did not have the name of the mother, since she wants to keep the baby's name anonymous and I think the article should respect this and refer to her as the lady from Arkansas.RonaldDuncan (talk) 11:37, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
Put current position of paternity case into article. Suggest that number of Children is updated when Judge finds on paternity (this was previously suggested )RonaldDuncan (talk) 14:03, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
Under Burisma Holdings header, sloppy language should be cleared up thus: In place of Shokin in May 2019, should be In May 2019, Shokin Tracymacl (talk) 14:54, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
Disclaimers:
Hunter Biden is completely innocent of these charges. That doesn't mean he's the bee's knees either. If I may be vouchsafed leave to quote from a liberal writer, Matthew Yglesias at Vox:
Hunter Biden’s whole career is being Joe Biden’s son... Hunter interestingly went to work right away for MBNA, a major Delaware-based bank (later purchased by Bank of America) that was also a big contributor to Biden’s campaigns. This was part of a much larger coziness between Biden and the bank... [I]t’s more like Hunter got the job due to his dad’s overall cozy relationship with the company.... In 2006, President George W. Bush appointed him to the Amtrak board of directors as a gesture of bipartisanship... It would obviously be a stretch to attribute any specific shortcoming of passenger rail in the United States to Hunter Biden’s service on the board. But the fact that the job is treated as a kind of patronage position to hand out to random senators’ kids who have no relevant knowledge beyond riding the train a lot helps explain why American passenger rail is low quality and exhibits little understanding of international best practices. When his dad became vice president, Hunter left the Amtrak board and instead got involved with a series of investment companies. As detailed by Ben Schreckinger in Politico, a lot of this work seems to have hinged on Hunter and his uncle James Biden sort of hinting around that the family connection to the vice president could help get things done and then not delivering. The Obama administration generally regarded Hunter as a kind of embarrassing family black sheep rather than a real scandal.
And there's a lot more. It's an opinion piece. That doesn't necessarily make it a poor analysis. Yglesias and Vox are generally trustworthy on facts, too.
But, I mean, you're not going to get any of this from the lede. You're not going to get any of this from the article. The lede describes him a blameless victim of a particular incident (true), but the article is pretty anyodyne -- he did this, he did that, which is... misleading, if you believe Yglesias. The article implies that he's a sterling figure whose main concern is to ensure that there's no possibility him taking advantage of his father's power and fame. The article is POV. The lede is POV.
I don't have exact specific changes to suggest at this time, but I wanted to start by pointing this out. Herostratus (talk) 07:14, 2 December 2019 (UTC)
An editor did a kind of "shut up" closing of this discussion, which I'm reverting per WP:BRD. Let's not discuss that here, ANI would be the venue.
User:Koncorde reasonably asked what specific changes I wanted to suggest, and defended the article as it is. User:MrX suggested "fix it yourself", which I get, but I don't want to do that without discussion and trying to get consensus first; it's a fraught issue, and arguing via edit summary is not going to be sufficient. User:J M Rice is wrong that this is a a BLP issue -- it's not, and nobody else is going to agree with her, so she might as well drop it.
Alright. On the to merits.
User:Koncorde vouchsafed that article already covers Hunter Biden's... well, Hunter Bidenness... with
"After graduating from law school, Biden took a position at MBNA America, a major bank holding company which was also a major contributor to his father's political campaigns.[8]"
and
"In 2006, Biden and his uncle, James Biden, attempted to buy Paradigm, a hedge-fund group, but the deal fell apart before completion.[8]"
But the problem is only the first speaks to a conflict of interest. One sentence, and I believe that's all that's in the article, really, that addresses that aspect of being Hunter Biden.
I mean, look, there's a big difference between Senator Tom Carper saying
Hunter Biden is a native Delawarian and I would go on to say that he’s also been nominated to serve on the Amtrak Board of Directors. Mr Biden has a master's degree in Transportation and Logistics. He has worked on strategic policy and traffic analysis at the The Federal Railroad Administration, which is part of the Department of Transportation, reporting directly to Pinckney Pruddle, director of the FRA. He is the author of Investigating Bayesian Optimization for rail network optimization published in the Journal of Rail Transport Planning & Management, and has worked on the Northeast Corridor Future project
and Senator Tom Carper saying
Hunter Biden is a native Delawarian and I would go on to say that he’s also been nominated to serve on the Amtrak Board of Directors. [He has had a fine career and is a fine fellow, but] more specifically, though, and for our purposes and for the purpose of this nomination, Hunter Biden has spent a lot of time on Amtrak trains. Like his father, like our Congressman, Mike Castle and myself, Hunter Biden has lived in Delaware while using Amtrak to commute to his job as we commute to our job in Washington almost every day of the week. You know, you learn a lot about what could work and what would work better at Amtrak by riding trains and talking to the passengers, the commuters, the passengers, the folks who work on the trains and make them work every day.
The latter is what Senator Tom Carper did say.
Let's not be blind, Hunter Biden was put on the Amtrak board of directors because he is the son of a powerful politician. Senator Tom Carper couldn't say that could he. So he blathered about riding the train, which is frankly embarrassing. BTW Senator Tom Carper has no idea if Hunter Biden spend time talking to "the passengers, the commuters, the passengers" (heh) (and if he did whether they talked about sports or whatever), or "the folks who work on the trains and make them work every day", by which I suppose he means the conductors, as I doubt he spent a lot of time in the driver's cabin.
Don't get me wrong. I would have taken the job too. I could use the money. I'm not saying that Hunter Biden is a blackguard or anything. What I am saying is, in helping the reader understand the entity Hunter Biden, then "That same year he was appointed by President George W. Bush to a five year term on the board of directors of Amtrak because he was Joe Biden's son" tells the reader something more useful in getting a handle on this entity than just "That same year he was appointed by President George W. Bush to a five year term on the board of directors of Amtrak". See what I'm saying? I'm not suggesting that exact wording necessarily, but you get what I'm saying.
So there's one concrete suggestion. You don't have to agree. But it's not insane to suggest this. The larger task here is to maybe get editors to consider that fact that Hunter Biden is now, basically, a kind of martyr doesn't mean his earlier career is... complicated. We can try to convince each other and maybe be can come up with ways to improve the article. Together. Herostratus (talk) 03:25, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
That same year he was appointed by President George W. Bush to a five year term on the board of directors of Amtrak because, according to to Matt Yglesias, he was Joe Biden's son.
He has been the subject of right-wing conspiracy theories concerning his business dealings in Ukraine which, according to Ben Collins and Brandy Zadrozny, have been debunked.
I think the article should include the fees earned by Hunter Biden's companies rather than an amount that he drew from one of the companies. The current figure of $ 50k is not his salary but occasional drawings from a partnership bank account. The fees are well referenced and there are fees for both his legal practice and his investment partnership. RonaldDuncan (talk) 12:01, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
Why is there no mention of Hunter Biden's lack of qualifications for the job at Burisma, other than being the son of the US Vice President? Hunter Biden admitted as much. Hunter Biden was asked about his selection for the board of Burisma by a reporter from ABC News who asked, "If your last name wasn't Biden, do you think you would've been asked to be on the board of Burisma?" Hunter replied "I don't know. I don't know. Probably not, in retrospect, But that's -- you know -- I don't think that there's a lot of things that would have happened in my life if my last name wasn't Biden." This statement is definitely relevant and should be included in the article. GlassBones (talk) 04:16, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
Of course it is OK for large, (maybe corrupt?) foreign natural gas companies to pay the relatives of US politicians 50k or even 80k a month. After all they are really the best and brightest compared to the all the other average students. These smart kids are entitled to take in millions. We also want to encourage foreign companies to have solid relationships and easy contacts with high level important people in the US government (maybe play a little golf to break the tensions, get some deals done). Now that we all agree..lets improve the Hunter Biden page and take out any references to these types of large payments, some uneducated people may get the wrong idea. They think that this might be pay to play because they are very naive about politics. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.67.156.149 (talk) 19:13, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
This discussion was closed with out a consensus vote and has been reinstated. Please do not close without a vote.
The amount of the fees and source are important. The New York Times https://www.nytimes.com/2019/05/01/us/politics/biden-son-ukraine.html reported the following. $3.4m to Rosemont Seneca Bohai LLC in circa 18 months and $283,000 to Boies Schiller for legal services in 2014 extracts below
Initial payments of over $ 3m are a significant amount and should appear in the article. RonaldDuncan (talk) 18:15, 20 November 2019 (UTC)
The suggestion was that since the amount that Hunter Biden was paid (over $ 3m ) is relevant to the article, well sourced and editors could say if they agreed that it was relevant or not to the article. NOT just delete the discussion.RonaldDuncan (talk) 17:03, 2 December 2019 (UTC)
providing services not in his expertise— what do you understand those to be? soibangla (talk) 03:08, 3 December 2019 (UTC)
Why are we still debating this? soibangla (talk) 03:23, 3 December 2019 (UTC)Hunter Biden is a Yale Law attorney and consultant. Many/most people who go to top law schools do so to make top dollar by billing clients at top hourly rates, which explains why America has lots of wealthy attorneys and consultants. Some people have focused on the fact that Hunter was not an energy expert and thus was "unqualified" for the job, while ignoring that he was hired to conduct corporate governance best practices, not to search for oil deposits as a petroleum engineer or geologist. Every company in every industry hires people who are not experts in that company's industry, but they perform other roles to support the company, and many are well-paid for it. Anyone who has ever worked in any significant management role in the corporate world understands this. Corporate governance best practices means creating rules and policies and procedures to run a company properly, and in the case of Burisma, to get rid of corrupt practices so the company could operate by Western standards, as the company sought to do business with Western business partners that would require corporate governance best practices.
It is time for somebody to hat this. We will not put SYNTH BLP smears in this article. SPECIFICO talk 21:12, 4 December 2019 (UTC)
There has been an extensive discussion above, which has covered a lot of ground. There are 2 sets of fees that could be included in the article, and are well sourced (NYT and others)
Currently the article states "receiving compensation of up to $50,000 per month in some months."
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$283,000 to Boies Schiller for legal services in 2014. - NYT
$3.4m to Rosemont Seneca Bohai LLC from April 2014 to late 2015. - NYT
"He has been the subject of debunked right-wing conspiracy theories concerning his business dealings in Ukraine." reference: "As Sondland testified, a misleading Ukraine story spread among conservatives on social media". NBC News. Retrieved November 21, 2019.
The above statement from the WiKi site is actually based upon unproven remarks from a story at NBC News. Fact: He was on the Board for Burisma Holdings. Fact: Hunter Biden has no experience in energy resources. Why inject the un-investigated position that it is "debunked" at all? This was once a source of information (Wikipedia) that I once respected. Like everything, there is now a political feel to everything. State fact, not impression. MomoMit (talk) 07:02, 5 December 2019 (UTC) MomoMit (talk) 07:02, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
Fact: Hunter Biden has no experience in energy resources
soibangla (talk) 19:54, 6 December 2019 (UTC)Hunter Biden is a Yale Law attorney and consultant. Many/most people who go to top law schools do so to make top dollar by billing clients at top hourly rates, which explains why America has lots of wealthy attorneys and consultants. Some people have focused on the fact that Hunter was not an energy expert and thus was "unqualified" for the job, while ignoring that he was hired to conduct corporate governance best practices, not to search for oil deposits as a petroleum engineer or geologist. Every company in every industry hires people who are not experts in that company's industry, but they perform other roles to support the company, and many are well-paid for it, especially if they're hired as high-level consultants who bill by the hour for a couple of years and then move on to their next consulting project. Anyone who has ever worked in any significant management role in the corporate world understands this. Corporate governance best practices means creating rules and policies and procedures to run a company properly, and in the case of Burisma, to get rid of corrupt practices so the company could operate by Western standards, as the company sought to do business with Western business partners that would require corporate governance best practices.
The article states "He has been the subject of debunked right-wing conspiracy theories concerning his business dealings in Ukraine.[1] U.S. President Donald Trump's alleged attempt to pressure the Ukrainian government to investigate Joe Biden and Hunter Biden by withholding foreign aid[2][3][4] triggered an impeachment inquiry in September 2019." This statement is not true because these charges are not "debunked" nor are they "right wing conspiracy theories". 1.) Please read https://thehill.com/opinion/white-house/436816-joe-bidens-2020-ukrainian-nightmare-a-closed-probe-is-revived 2.) Please read https://www.reuters.com/article/us-usa-trump-impeachment-burisma/ukraine-widens-probe-against-burisma-founder-to-embezzlement-of-state-funds-idUSKBN1XU2N7 3.) Please read https://dailycaller.com/2019/08/27/john-kerry-son-email-hunter-biden/ While the matters regarding Hunter Biden are still under investigation , they are not debunked. Under current investigations are, Burisma money laundering, tax evasion, pay to play, fraud (it is alleged that Burisama does not even own the gas rights its selling). The IMF may have also had a dirty hand in meddling in Ukrainian affairs to benefit western interests.
Please drop the language "He has been the subject of debunked right-wing conspiracy theories concerning his business dealings in Ukraine.[1] U.S. President Donald Trump's alleged attempt to pressure the Ukrainian government to investigate Joe Biden and Hunter Biden by withholding foreign aid[2][3][4] triggered an impeachment inquiry in September 2019."
These matters are still under active investigation.TrueFire (talk) 10:00, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
I got this message on my talk page, and I'm presenting it here for the wider community:
Hi, while reading the French Wikipedia Hunter Biden page I was astonished by the quality of it, it is a copy-paste of GOP and FOX talking points only referencing damaging private details (cocaïne, prostitues, adultery...) why also promoting debunked conspiracy theories. I tried to modify the page, first I deleted all which was maybe excessive, but then I only tried to translate the English Wikipedia page, which is more neutral into French. Even that was blocked though. I referenced all this on the discussion page but got no response except blocking attempts by russian trolls. I was told to contact the french page owners, but seeing all what was referenced and biased on it, I truly have little trust in them. Could some redacters from the English Hunter Page wage on this with French-speaking Wikipedia administrators, as the differences of quality on information on English and french page are appalling, it's like two opposing stories. And it is really unacceptable what is currently printed on the french page, it's not neutral, full of debunked lies or not relevant. ty for any help to restore some dignity or truth... --User:Nicolas.eisbar (talk) 10:40, 5 December 2019 (UTC) (reply)
Does anybody here have a passing knowledge of French? – Muboshgu (talk) 16:18, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
An edit to put in that Biden has been unemployed since 2019 was reverted on the basis that it was WP:BLPGOSSIP the text of the policy is clear.
Avoid repeating gossip. Ask yourself whether the source is reliable; whether the material is being presented as true; and whether, even if true, it is relevant to a disinterested article about the subject. Be wary of relying on sources that use weasel words and that attribute material to anonymous sources. Also beware of circular reporting, in which material in a Wikipedia article gets picked up by a source, which is later cited in the Wikipedia article to support the original edit.
So in my view no WP:BLPGOSSIP and the edit should stand. RonaldDuncan (talk) 15:06, 6 December 2019 (UTC)