Revisit my draft

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Hello I found you declined my draft because of some points, I can understand well so I just changed the draft and by keeping all the points mentioned by you, so kindly please recheck and let me know is it fine now sir. Wikitrends009 (talk) 02:39, 29 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Rejection of my previous draft

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Hello, You recently declined my draft due to lack of citations. May I ask how i could improve it, and which citations are not reliable? As for some areas which have no citations(e.g. garrison) they were taken from chinese wikipedia and if necessary I can remove them. Thehistorianisaac (talk) 04:28, 30 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Rejection of NMCD draft

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Thank you for the review and opportunity to improve. The museum is doing good work in this field, and just as notable as some of its partner museums that have pages and far less citations. I added a few more external references, but I didn't want it to seem like promotion. Lizbeth626 (talk) 10:34, 30 November 2024 (UTC)Reply