Talk:Show Boat

Latest comment: 15 days ago by Ssilvers in topic Ferber and her novel Show Boat
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Principal roles

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We have reached the point of more heat than light. Several editors have explained core policies such as V, OR, and RS to B C R M. There is a clear consensus to not designate which roles are principal/leading in the list of charaters. It is time for B C R M to drop the stick. If they continue, I would be more than happy to partial block them for disruptive editing. --In actu (Guerillero) Parlez Moi 14:38, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
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The article does not distinguish the five principal singing roles, a clear deficiency. Two methods I have tried, asterisks and footnote, have been reversed. There is no obvious place to go for a citation. Nor is this a matter of "original research" in that nobody would dispute which of the 12 or 13 solo roles we are talking about. So how do we overcome the deficiency? B C R M (talk) 11:03, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

You need to a) find a WP:reliable source that supports that; and b) find something that makes it clear that it is important enough for inclusion. SchroCat (talk) 12:19, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
SchroCat is correct. See these key Wikipedia policies and guidelines for more information. WP:OR and WP:V. -- Ssilvers (talk) 12:55, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Well, Ssilvers and SchroCat, first of all, I am myself a reliable source because I know the score. Second, I have contributed to Wikipedia for going on 20 years adding all sorts of information *without* support, and I am certain that the vast majority of material added to the encyclopedia is in fact unsupported, uncited. You will know this too of course. Wikipedia would not be what it is today if contributors were forced to support everything they added. Third, about whether identifying the principal singing roles "is important enough for inclusion," most readers would say it is. I got the impression from one of you that you are part of an oversight body concerned with musicals. If so, you must agree. Your actions are a disservice. B C R M (talk) 15:27, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Here is a good example of the disservice. Stageagent.com lists the "leads" and "supporting" roles for Show Boat. It would be easy for me to cite this to overcome your objection. But Stageagent is a bad source. Mrs Hawks is not a principal singing role whereas Queenie is. I know this; Stageagent does not, being a mindless database. B C R M (talk) 15:42, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
  1. Adding information without a source is damaging. Please don’t continue to do it.
  2. You are not a source. What you think may or may not be right is classed as WP:ORIGINAL RESEARCH and it should not be on WP.
  3. The fact that one source disagrees with your interpretation should be a red flag for you, that what you think you may know may not be correct, or at least open to interpretation by others.
  4. Please don’t class anyone’s actions as a “disservice”, particularly when both of us have pointed you in the direction of the site’s guidelines and policies for doing things the right way. - SchroCat (talk) 15:50, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
    As to No. 4, yes, SchroCat, it is a disservice when the article is less than it could be. You have subtracted what I contributed despite the quality of the contribution, and you haven't addressed the Stageagent example I gave. B C R M (talk) 16:03, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
I can address it. The Stageageant example proves that different people (in Stageagent's case, a professional editor) disagree about which roles are the most important ones. You have not presented sources that authoritatively show which roles are "principal" ones, and your assertion that you are the best arbiter of this are directly contrary to Wikipedia's policies, and so your contribution was not helpful. -- Ssilvers (talk) 16:08, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
No, the Stageagent listing includes non-singing roles. That's the difference. B C R M (talk) 16:32, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
That's no answer. B C R M (talk) 15:46, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
What other edits have you made to Wikipedia over the past 20 years without citing sources? -- Ssilvers (talk) 15:50, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Thousands. Perhaps one edit in 50 or 60 of mine has been with a citation. And "adding information without a source" is not damaging, as SchroCat suggests, unless the information is wrong. Naturally things are better sourced, I agree. But you can't expect volunteers to go to the trouble every time. B C R M (talk) 15:59, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Please point them out to me so that I can help you source them or remove the information that violates WP:V. -- Ssilvers (talk) 16:00, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Of course it’s damaging. Aside from the fact people lose confidence if information is unsourced, without citations we end up with people adding trivia (like who are a “principals” in a show), and worse, they get it wrong, disagreeing with better sources than their own opinion. - SchroCat (talk) 16:08, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
If you think that identifying the principal singing roles is "trivia," you really should not be involved at all in articles devoted to musical theatre! B C R M (talk) 16:16, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
What is trivia is your *identification* of the roles that you think are "principal" ones. The important characters can be identified by the plot summary and list of musical numbers as those who are important to the story and sing in the songs. Also, if you do not wish to follow WP:V, you should not contribute to Wikipedia. -- Ssilvers (talk) 16:20, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
See my reply to SchroCat below. B C R M (talk) 16:27, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
As a little test, SchroCat, you might want to ask a few people to name the principal roles in Tosca. You won't get a single variance. It is not a matter of opinion. Granted, Tosca is not a musical, but in Show Boat the only variance might be whether to include Queenie; there would be no variance in naming the other four. B C R M (talk) 16:26, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
BCRM, you have not shown the utility of *naming* the "principal" roles, when we have already *demonstrated* which roles are the most important ones in the plot summary and list of musical numbers. BTW, our article on Tosca is a WP:Featured Article. It does not specify which roles are "principal" ones, showing that none of the dozens or hundreds of people who worked on this article believe that this is a useful thing to do in Wikipedia articles. -- Ssilvers (talk) 16:35, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
LOL - I don’t need to do any tests thanks, but as a little test for you: why don’t you find a source to add the principals to this article? The roles you think should be there doesn’t matter one iota: it’s what the sources say. That is all that counts. - SchroCat (talk) 16:39, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
The "utility" would be in helping any reader new to the subject. Obviously. The line distinguishing the principals is indisputable in the case of Tosca, hence the suggested test, and nearly indisputable in the case of Show Boat. The question is whether you want to help people new to the subject. B C R M (talk) 18:10, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Nope. The question is what the sources say. How much importance do they put on the point. If little or none then it’s not worth stressing over - “principal” means different things to different sources and that’s why we follow the sources, not the opinion of a single editor. - SchroCat (talk) 18:35, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
The result of your stupidity is that Pete is equal to Ravenal. Do the damn test! B C R M (talk) 02:59, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Please don’t insult people. WP:CIVIL is another policy you should read. Unless you are prepared to take on board some of the policies and guidelines you’ve been shown, I think we’re done here. Go find a source. The position of the website is how I outlined it in the first post: You need to a) find a WP:reliable source that supports that; and b) find something that makes it clear that it is important enough for inclusion. - SchroCat (talk) 05:24, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

We list 13 roles, undifferentiated. This does not much help the reader. The Rodgers & Hammerstein Organization (not a great source) lists 10 “main characters” and 2 “supporting characters.” StageAgent (ditto) lists 16 “characters” classified as 5 “leads,” 7 “supporting” and 4 “featured.” In fact there are 5 principal singing roles (not aligned with StageAgent’s “leads”). These are clearly identifiable from the score, which is of course the only source that matters, and they should accordingly be identified in our article. I propose the addition to the list of the 3 missing characters and the following line at the start of the “Roles” section: Note: Julie, Magnolia, Queenie, Ravenal and Joe are the principal singing roles. Or asterisks by these in the list followed by an explanation. I suggest that editors involved in musical theatre obtain for themselves an education in the “utility” (Ssilvers’ word) for readers, especially readers new to a subject, of identified principal singing roles. It matters. It is, as illustration, the first breakdown at the above two source sites. Moreover, nobody wants to be confronted by a tag-team armed with wp:original research, wp:reliable source, wp:v, wp:civil, when they are trying to contribute, and this type of tool use runs counter to the recent messages I have received as a new account holder. B C R M (talk) 08:16, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

Follow the sources, not your personal interpretation of them. - SchroCat (talk) 08:31, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
The source is the score. B C R M (talk) 08:32, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
No it’s not. Not unless it actually says “principal” or “leading” next to the character name. - SchroCat (talk) 08:40, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
The score "says" that through its allocation. You don't know, do you? B C R M (talk) 08:42, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
I do know, yes. But I also know—and follow—the site guidelines and policies. - SchroCat (talk) 08:47, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
You are a slave to them. You don't think. Earlier you wrote: "adding information without a source is damaging." This is also nonsense. Are you a person or a robot? B C R M (talk) 08:51, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
So you are a robot! B C R M (talk) 08:56, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the further incivility. We’re done here. - SchroCat (talk) 08:58, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

This needs to be its own topic because the whole point is that a "principal" role such as Mrs Hawks is not necessarily a singing one. B C R M (talk) 09:13, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA concerns

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I am concerned that this article does not meet the good article criteria anymore. Some of my concerns are listed below:

  • There is uncited text throughout the article, and an orange "more citations needed" since 2015.
  • The "Analysis" relies on block quotes, and should instead summarise the information in prose.
  • The article uses citations from IMDB, and the Amazon citations should be evaluated for its inclusion.

Is anyone interested in addressing these concerns, or should this article go to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 01:15, 5 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

GA Reassessment

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Result: Delisted. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:26, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

There is uncited text throughout the article, and an orange "more citations needed" since 2015. The "Analysis" relies on block quotes, and should instead summarise the information in prose. The article uses citations from IMDB, and the Amazon citations should be evaluated for its inclusion. Z1720 (talk) 21:16, 28 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Ferber and her novel Show Boat

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@Ssilvers I have now completed writing this sub-section. I incorporated the facts that were previously copyright infringed but in new language and with a lot of new material so that the article is no longer plagiarizing. I still have to address the copyright violation material in the adapting the novel section which I am moving on to next after I do some more research/reading. I would appreciate any copy editing or feedback on the "Ferber and her novel Show Boat" sub-section. Best.4meter4 (talk) 18:16, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I gave it a once-through, but it is still too long, because this is the article about the musical, not the book. All of this is good stuff but needs to be summarized more in this article -- though, by all means, add it to Show Boat (novel). I'd say that it should still be cut by, ideally 40%. If you want me to try to make the painful cuts, let me know. -- Ssilvers (talk) 20:11, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Ssilvers Agreed, let me finish writing the adapting the novel section. Once that is written, I think we'll have a better overall view to help make trimming decisions. You have a better critical eye for cuts than I do. It's one your strengths as an editor, so I'll leave it to you to decide what we should keep and what should be thrown out. Best.4meter4 (talk) 20:21, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
Just for fun, if you have never seen the movie, here is the great Kathryn Grayson singing "Make Believe" and "You Are Love" with Howard Keel. Her vocal style (and that of Magnolia in the musical) is not much influenced by black music as Ferber intended, but they don't make 'em like this anymore. -- Ssilvers (talk) 20:32, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
Ssilvers Yes, I actually watched the Grayson and Keel movie for the first time the night before you posted to the musical theatre wikiproject page. It was odd timing, as if the fates knew I was about to start editing this page. lol Grayson's vibrato kind of annoys me, but somehow Keel's voice blends nicely with hers and I enjoy her voice when she sings with him, just not by herself. Interestingly, several of the books I am reading say the Show Boat (1951 film) is the weakest of the film adaptations. All of them go out of their way to praise the Show Boat (1929 film) as the best. Here are few interesting clips of Hattie McDaniel with Robson and Helen Morgan from the Show Boat (1936 film) Ah Still Suits Me" and Can't Help Lovin' Dat Man. I would be interested in catching these older films which both got better reception in the books.4meter4 (talk) 20:48, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
Those are great clips. -- Ssilvers (talk) 21:35, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
I thought so. You can tell the actors have lived with these characters for a while on stage prior to filming it. There's just something so appealing about their performances that I think is hard to replicate for film actors new to their parts.4meter4 (talk) 22:03, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Ssilvers I finished taking care of the copyright issues in the background section. You can go ahead and start making cuts. Is this enough content on the adaptation? So much has been written on all the various changes and cuts during tryouts, I could add much more. Should I get into where it played during the tryout performances and all the alterations, or is this sort of general background enough?4meter4 (talk) 19:47, 11 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

We could mention a couple of the really major cuts and changes. Depending on how many tryouts there were -- if there were only a couple, let's name them, or if there were a lot, we can give a general idea of the trajectory -- we should give the basic timeline, however. -- Ssilvers (talk) 04:38, 12 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
According to Dietz, there were four tryout runs. I'll try and come up with a brief overview tomorrow.4meter4 (talk) 04:54, 12 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
Good I did a little more trimming. I still think the first part is too long, but I am not inspired right now as to what is still cuttable. I'll ponder and come back to it later. -- Ssilvers (talk) 05:25, 12 November 2024 (UTC)Reply