Talk:Outside (Mariah Carey song)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Heartfox (talk · contribs) 20:35, 10 August 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 21:00, 28 November 2024 (UTC)

• "The lyrics of "Outside" were compared to others by Carey ..." - I think it's better to add that they were compared by Turchiano here instead of leaving it for the next sentence

  Moved Turchiano to first sentence

• "Jon O'Brien thought the song was the album's worst because ..." - why is this negative review being placed in the middle of the other three positive reviews?

  Removed

• Turchiano 2020 and O'Brien 2022 - the publication can be linked

  Linked

• Considine 1999 - the author and publication can be linked

  Linked

• Hoskyns 1997 - I think Rolling Stone has a limited access

  Changed to limited

A bit surprised that this well-written article has been in the backlog for so long. Just listened to the song and oh my... this is such a beautiful and personal song. Did she ever perform it live? Anyways, @Heartfox: I will put this  On hold for now! Medxvo (talk) 21:00, 28 November 2024 (UTC)

@Medxvo: I don't think she has ever performed it. Thanks for the review, Heartfox (talk) 02:38, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

Passing! Congratulations :) Medxvo (talk) 06:44, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

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