Talk:Loot (2012 film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 08:34, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• "directed and written by Nischal Basnet in his directorial" director repeated.  Done
• "under the banners " doesn't feel encyclopedic. Done
• "plot to rob a bank in Kathmandu." is that it? I would have thought the lead could have a little more on the film. Done
• " and received critical acclaim and developed " and ... and..., avoid this. Done
• " 52 (52,000,000) million" no need for the parenthetical text. Done
• " Loot grossed 52 (52,000,000) million " this is normally in the infobox, any word on the budget? Done
• "121 Minutes" M->m Done
• "Haku Kale plans" he plans. Done
• "within five months" an odd timeframe, any known reason why? --> No Idea.
• "Khatri and Pandey will get everyone inside a room" by everyone do you really mean customers and employees of the bank?  Done
• "On the same day of the " -> "On the day of the " Done
• "run away. The police capture four members of the gang excluding Haku Kale, who runs away" run away x2, perhaps the first one could be "escape"? Done
• "gang, he was also planning to rob the bank with" -> "gang with whom is was also planning to rob the bank."  Done
• "to run away " a third "run away"! Done
• "how he fooled the police." this isn't noted, how did he? Done
• "(Short Role)" what does this mean and why is it in capitals? Done
• "and intended to" was intended. Done
• "length?".[2] " no need for the full stop. Check for others.  Done
• "he team wondered whether the film would ever be made" why? Done
• " and that Rai " probably "but that" rather than "and that". Done
• "to film Loot at locations that had never been filmed in before" repetitive and awkward. Done
• "a lot of problems" several problems. Done
• "fourteen-to fifteen-storey" but they were okay up to and including 13-story and 16-story and above??! Done
• "Loot was released" italics for film title. Done
• "52.0 million (approximately $453,000 in 2019) rupees (NPR).[5] " no need for the decimal place (.0) and put the conversion to $ after rupees, and probably just use NPR as you abbreviated it in the lead already. Done
• "a cult following.[13][14][15][8] " order. Done
• Are the Dcine awards really notable? Is there any other Wikipedia which deems them notable? If not, inter-language link them, if not then reconsider if they're worthy of noting. Done
• Films featuring an item number is a category: firstly I don't understand it at all, secondly this doesn't seem to be backed up in any way within the article? Done

That's it, on hold, cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:36, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: All done. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 12:28, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

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