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Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on December 5, 2015.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Mexican singer-songwriter Natalia Lafourcade won three Latin Grammy Awards for her song "Hasta la Raíz"?
Current status: Good article

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Latest comment: 8 years ago3 comments1 person in discussion
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:56, 5 March 2016 (UTC)Reply


Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 01:56, 5 March 2016 (UTC)Reply

Infobox

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  • An alt needs to be provided for the cover image
  • Stay consistent with your format of the flatlists
  • Remove the red links for "Nunca es Suficiente" and "Lo Que Construimos"

Lead

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Paragraph 1

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  • State that "Down to the Root" in English, like "(English: Down to the Root)"
  • Add ", recorded for her studio album, Hasta la Raíz (2015)."

Paragraph 2

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  • Expand this paragraph

Background

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  • The first sentence is kind of long, but I don't really see how you could shorten it
  • Remove '(Mexico)'; it's not necessary in the context
  • Change 'seven' to 'six' years

Writing and recording

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Paragraph 1

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  • Link 'Mexico'
  • The sentence that starts with "While recording demos..." is too long and includes too many clauses

Paragraph 2

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  • The lead sentence could be shortened; you don't have to include how they became friends during the recording process
  • Add an author to the Billboard source if available

Critical and commercial reception

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  • Separate these into two separate paragraphs; one for critical reception and another for commercial reception

Paragraph 1

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  • Change the lead sentence to "Upon its release, "Hasta la Raíz" received positive reviews from music critics."
  • Change 'coincident' to 'in agreement'

Paragraph 2

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  • Remove the link to "Nunca Es Suficiente"
  • Move each source in the second sentence to its respective statement (after each comma)

Music video

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  • Try adding a photo of the music video
  • Perhaps, add a small description of the music video as well

Track listing

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  • Remove the 'Writer(s)' and 'Producer(s)' section in the track listing; you've already labeled this information in the infobox above

Credits and personnel

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  • Remove the ';' from each credit
  • Use proper n dashes instead of hyphens

References

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  • [6] - Link iTunes store
  • [8] - Link Discogs
  • [12] - Link Billboard
  • [13] - Use a proper n dash
  • [13] - Link Spotify
  • [14] - Remove one of the 'Coffee and Saturday' inclusions
  • [16] - Use a proper n dash
  • [19] - Use a proper n dash
  • [20] - Use a proper n dash
  • [21] - Use a proper n dash
  • [22] - Use a proper n dash
  • [27] - Link Sony Music

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Another good article, but definitely needs some work before passing GA status. I will put the article on hold until problems and addressed and corrections are made. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 21:27, 5 March 2016 (UTC).Reply

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:38, 31 March 2016 (UTC)Reply


Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 02:38, 31 March 2016 (UTC)Reply

Infobox

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  • Please note, I will be reassessing the article completely, regardless of my previous comments and suggestions; please keep this is mind
  • Remove the 'caption' area below the 'alt
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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Paragraph 1

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  • "attaining success with her previous..." → "attaining success from her previous..."
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • "with very personal feelings..." → "with personal feelings"
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Paragraph 2

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  • "Upon its release..." → "After its release..."
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • "received positive reviews from music critics and peaked at number 17... and number five..." → "received positive reviews from music critics. The song was also commercially successful, peaking at number 17... and number five..."
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • "ranked in the list..." → "on the list..."
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Background

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  • This first sentence is still extremely long; can you try to condense it?
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • Add an apostrophe s after Agustín Lara
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Writing and recording

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Paragraph 1

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  • "were similar from her previous albums..." → "were too similar compared to her previous albums..."
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Critical reception

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  • I know I said to say "upon", but "After" would sound better with the current tense
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Commercial reception

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  • "was released as the first promotional single from the..." → "was released as a promotional single from the..."
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Track listing

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  • You only include the download for a version called "Canova's Root"; is there a normal download for the album version/single version?
There used to be one, on iTunes, but after the relase of the whole album, the single download is no longer available as a "single". Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

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Overall, a very good article. Most of these comments are regarding tense/grammar. Once fixed, the article will surely pass. Thanks again! Carbrera (talk) 22:40, 31 March 2016 (UTC)Reply

Thanks! .Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
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