Talk:Haile Selassie
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GA concerns
editI am concerned that this article no longer meets the good article criteria. Some of my concerns are outlined below:
- The article uses lots of long block quotes: these create copyright concerns and make the text very long. I suggest that these are summarised, reduced, or removed.
- The article is over 11,000 words and contains too much detail: WP:TOOBIG recommends that articles of this size are spun out to other articles and the prose reduced.
- The article contains uncited prose.
Is anyone willing to address the above concerns, or should this go to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 21:41, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
GA Reassessment
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The article uses lots of long block quotes: these create copyright concerns and make the text very long. I suggest that these are summarised, reduced, or removed. The article is over 11,000 words and contains too much detail: WP:TOOBIG recommends that articles of this size are spun out to other articles and the prose reduced. I think summarising the block quotes will help with this, as well as removing other material. The article also contains uncited prose. Z1720 (talk) 16:36, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- Many of the quotes in this article provide no substantive contribution to it, and seem to be included only for aesthetic reasons. You could argue that this article also uses too many images for the same reason. Removing some of these would be for the best. As for prose issues, I've been working on cleaning up the worst of it (the Personal life section). genderBiohazard (talk) 21:46, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- @GenderBiohazard: I see that you started working on the block quotes. Are you planning to continue working on this? Z1720 (talk) 16:43, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, but any help is appreciated. genderBiohazard (talk) 16:56, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- @GenderBiohazard: I see that you started working on the block quotes. Are you planning to continue working on this? Z1720 (talk) 16:43, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
Pronunciation removed
editI noticed that the IPA pronunciation for Haile Selassie's name was removed in [1]. Is there a reason for this? Can it be restored? Yxtqwf (talk) 03:44, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Yxtqwf: What was removed on 15 January 2024 was the IPA pronunciation, together with the source (slightly adjusted here for formatting reasons):
Amharic pronunciation: [kʼədäˈmäwi ˈhäjlə sɨlˈläse] ;English: /ˈhaɪli səˈlæsi, -ˈlɑːsi/ HY-lee sə-LASS-ee, -LAH-see.[1]
- Both URLs in that citation no longer work, but they have both been archived close to the stated access date: Merrian Webster gives an audio example, and Dictionary.com gives
/ˈhaɪli səˈlæsi, -ˈlɑsi/
(hahy-lee suh-las-ee, -lah-see
) as the pronunciation. This does not seem to agree with what we were claiming (hy-lee sə-lass-ee, -lah-see
), and parts of what we said (kʼədäˈmäwi ˈhäjlə sɨlˈläse
) remained unsourced. Since the material in the source didn't align with what we were saying, the removal may have been justified. - CtasACT's edit summary may give further clues (again slightly adjusted for clarity):
Would someone kindly be able to put [2][3][4]?
- I don't have access to that book. I guess CtasACT expects it to contain a more reliable pronunciation for the different parts of the name? If not then maybe they can clarify. This could be a case for an WP:RX request. Renerpho (talk) 14:25, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ "Haile Selassie". Merriam-webster. Retrieved 24 April 2014..; "Haile Selassie". Dictionary. Reference. Retrieved 24 April 2014..
- ^ Fay 1999, p. 902.
- ^ Munro-Hay 1999, p. 698.
- ^ Fay, Robert (1999-01-01). "Halie Selassie I". In Gates, Henry Louis; Appiah, Anthony (eds.). Africana: The Encyclopedia of the African and African American Experience. New York: Basic Civitas Books. ISBN 978-0965032742.
Exceptional claim from obscure source
editThere is a claim in the 1970s section of this article that "there were no more than ten political prisoners during [Haile Selassie's] reign". This line is attributed to two sources. One of which, this article from the Independent, does not support the claim whatsoever. The other is an Amharic language book titled "የአፄ ኃይለሥላሴ ታሪክ" — I could find very little information about it online, but this appears to be the book in question. I would like to know if anyone has access to this book and could verify or share its contents. Regarding the claim itself, I could find no other sources for it online, and it contradicts various reports from Amnesty International. genderBiohazard (talk) 02:08, 11 November 2024 (UTC)
- The claim that there were few political prisoners detained under Selassie is widely held, most suffered from mental illness upon release as its believed they were administrated psychotic drugs. Magherbin (talk) 16:48, 12 November 2024 (UTC)