User contributions for 2601:246:C700:19D:FDCE:2831:1D8A:B7CC

2 April 2020

• 23:1223:12, 2 April 2020 diff hist 1,615 User talk:Doc James →I understand
• 22:5122:51, 2 April 2020 diff hist 1,913 User talk:Doc James →I understand
• 22:3022:30, 2 April 2020 diff hist 510 User talk:Doc James →GMO stuff
• 22:2722:27, 2 April 2020 diff hist 23 Fever →Pathophysiology: Whole subsections and many sentences unsourced.
• 22:2622:26, 2 April 2020 diff hist 21 Fever →Pyrogens: The Silhavy citation says nothing of pyrogens. Hid the DNP supplement sentence, because it did not go under pyrogens, and may not belong in the article at all. Removed distillation, chromatography sentence, because it lacks a direct object that would make it sensible. Removed redundant statements regarding LPS.
• 21:5821:58, 2 April 2020 diff hist 68 Fever →Further reading: Completed Further reading citation.
• 21:5221:52, 2 April 2020 diff hist 734 Fever Doing another pass to remove tags if possible. Added "fever of unknown origin" citn, remvd tag. Combined redundant Crocetti2001 citns. Completed BoronBoulpaep, and Craven, and LewisDirksenHeitkemper citns, but couldn't verify content. Added febrile to lead since it's used throughout article, and needed defining. Note, epidemiology section now incorporated at end of Diagnosis. This chosen over maintaining out-of-place, one-sentence epidemiology sectn and section expand tag for that poor section.
• 20:3920:39, 2 April 2020 diff hist −1,211 Fever →Types: Second pass to return Doc James' edits; he concluded earlier hand-drawn Fig shouldn't return, so removed that <!-- in-text, hidden Fig--> and the sectn tags associated with it. Once again, per WP:VER, (i) wikilinks can't replace inline citns, so wikilinked sentences still require source, and (ii) all factual content requires sourcing—all bullets, all sentences—even if expert 2020 review thinks content looks fine (bec. WP:VER says so, bec. WP expert editors may disagree)
• 20:2320:23, 2 April 2020 diff hist 6 Fever →Differential diagnosis: Rest of infectious disease list needs sourcing.
• 20:2220:22, 2 April 2020 diff hist −1 Fever →Differential diagnosis: Copy edit, removed extraneous carriage return.
• 20:2120:21, 2 April 2020 diff hist 985 Fever First edit to return most of Doc James substantive edits. Note, I will not leave whole unsourced paragraphs without any indication that WP:VERIFY is being violated. (I won't be adding back all the inline tags, but I will be adding some.)
• 19:5619:56, 2 April 2020 diff hist 11 Fever Will be returning Doc James edits, lost during edit conflict, to article.
• 19:5519:55, 2 April 2020 diff hist 3,055 Fever Revised the short Hyperthermia and Hyperpyrexia sections to be subsections in appropriate sections. Consolidated redundant appearing citations to Harrison's. (Since most only state chapter, or no narrowing information at all, they were consolidated, citing the latest edition, the 20th, and the Fever chapter therein.) NOTE: Med texts books most often have chapter authors and editors. (Fauci, as much as one mught like him, is NOT the author of this chapter in any edition.)
• 19:2419:24, 2 April 2020 diff hist 1,175 Template talk:HumanTemperature →Semi-protected edit request on 2 April 2020: new section
• 19:1819:18, 2 April 2020 diff hist 651 Template talk:HumanTemperature →Semi-protected edit request on 2 April 2020: new section
• 19:1619:16, 2 April 2020 diff hist 117 Template talk:HumanTemperature →Semi-protected edit request on 2 April 2020
• 19:1419:14, 2 April 2020 diff hist 827 Template talk:HumanTemperature →Semi-protected edit request on 2 April 2020: new section
• 19:0919:09, 2 April 2020 diff hist 47 Template talk:HumanTemperature →Semi-protected edit request on 15 January 2018
• 19:0919:09, 2 April 2020 diff hist 780 Template talk:HumanTemperature →Semi-protected edit request on 15 January 2018
• 18:5918:59, 2 April 2020 diff hist 416 Template talk:HumanTemperature →Semi-protected edit request on 15 January 2018