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A Mother's Pain

Chapter 6: not a chapter but still-

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hey guys

so ik a good chunk of u read this story

but like, i need sum advice

PLEASE, tell me wut 2 do w/ this story to make it better cuz honest to god, it feels like this story is a little... idk, i js think it cud use a little glowup

criticism is highly appreciated (i'm a new writer lol)

tysm

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everything will be okay.. won't it be?

(cliffhanger cuz i just started and i need ideas-)