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English
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Part 1 of Leaving
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Published:
2024-02-27
Completed:
2024-09-20
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379
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2/2
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Leaving, Part One (an imagination)

Summary:

A work from 2007/08 which is sort of a commentary on female experiences, especially in relationships with men, depicting some sexism. It also stemmed from my feelings around a difficult situation in my life at the time and is best understood as a metaphor for that.

Notes:

This one kind of wanders between an imaginary narrator and a little personal commentary. I was going through some confusing times then and I think it shows.

Chapter Text

I have never been able to leave when it 

matters—

     —not you; not you, and never this place.

 

I stood dying in place my whole life, 

stood behind you for all these years 

     (I) stood behind the cracked counter in that smoky bar 

     catching tips and come-ons 

     (I) stood behind the weathered, grey drying line full of your 

     undershirts and my dust rags 

and then when I sprinted after you, 

all the while thinking I was leading in this race of 

circular logic, 

I learned that our years contained only me, 

and that you 

have always stood outside them, outside us.

 

So now here you are, falling 

away from me again.

I falter, stand staring at your finely-

chiselled name, 

And I want to ask you for the years 

back, but I don’t know how.