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The rise of a young Fire Nation commander Xing, a survivor of a village attack-turned prodigious firebending colonel of the Fire Nation's 11th Regiment.
Taking place not long before canon, Xing seeks to keep his adoptive family in the Fire Nation military as safe, sound, and sharp as he can, even as the pieces of the puzzle that is the main story start to fall in place around him, the biggest of which is Princess Azula joining the 11th in their military duties around the Earth Kingdom.
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Very good military story
A little Gary Sue-y
The references were fun.
Maybe I didn't see it but it seemed that his ennemies never adapted to his strategies and tools.
Romance turned me off from finishing (I rapidly skimmed the end of the story and it was pretty satisfying)
The author decided to make it an harem from nowhere (I wasn't reading on here, so there wasn't any tags)
The OC/Azula parts were very well writing and cute.
The harem was very badly implemented and a reader actually needed to make a payed commission to the author to change the chapter (the Ty Lee parts) where it was introduced into something less terrible. Because wow it was bad.
I don' remember well but I think that Suki fell in love because OC bested her constantly in spars.
Also his war prisonners decided to help Mc in his fight because he treated them well ?
Ship: Sadly Oc/Azula/Ty Lee/Suki
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