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The Archduke"s Discovery

Summary:

Prince Nemolis goes on a journey, and learns a bit more than he wanted to know.

Notes:

Thanks so much to my recipient, biichan, because your wonderful prompt helped me get my feet wet in a fandom I"ve admired and lurked in for years.

Many thanks also to Beatrice_Otter, who gave me great feedback on an early draft--all mistakes are 100% mine.

Added thanks to Likeadeuce, Stultiloquentia, Spuffyduds, and Destroythemeek, for all the virtual write-ins.

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Prince Nemolis consciously tightened and relaxed his shoulders, shifting in what he hoped was an approximation of his usual manner, dignified without being stiff. In his private thoughts, he could acknowledge that he was...not at all sure how any of this was ultimately going to go. 

He hadn’t revealed the whole of his plan to Sheveän, but even the hypotheticals he’d shared with her had made her opinion abundantly clear--she’d thought it utter foolishness to risk the-emperor-his-father’s displeasure for the sake of a despised and exiled half-brother.

Nemolis thought he had a reasonably objective view of Varenechibel IV--as much as any son could have of his father, or any imperial heir could have of his emperor. No matter how angry Varenechibal was, it was unlikely in the extreme that he’d disinherit Nemolis over it, and anything less---up to and including a long-term ambassadorial assignment in Barizhan or a season or two commanding troops on the steppes, to name a few of the more dire possibilities, Nemolis was confident he could weather with grace.

He had been tempted to simply requisition an airship and moor at Edonomee with no advance notice, just to see what would happen, but he’d finally decided, regretfully, that this was the wrong approach. For one thing, it would immediately alert the emperor that he was up to something---and while there was absolutely no point in trying to keep Varenechibel in the dark long term, he, Nemolis, intended to retain control over the manner of his finding out, if possible. And a great deal of his future planning would be shaped by what he found out. 

Which was why he had shorn himself of most overt signs of rank and taken only his personal guard and Captain Orchennis, the head of that guard, who was clearly dubious about this latest endeavor of his prince’s, but much too deeply loyal to actually say so. And now, here they sat, in the second best tavern in the market town of Calestho, the nearest settlement of any size to Edonomee.

He had initially planned to hire a courier to announce his coming, but in the end decided against it--he would proceed directly. He recalled enough of the affair that had led to Setheris Nelar’s exile to feel that it was not wise to give the man time to get up to mischief. 

His decision made, he had his and Captain Orchennis’s mounts saddled, and they headed out onto the main road. Before long, they were out of sight of human habitation, among the low grassy hills and hummocks of the moorlands. 

This land was truly isolated, much of it not suitable suitable country for farming--in the warmer months, shepherds and goatherds grazed their flocks in the hills, while autumn brought roving parties of hunters and winter largely brought no one at all.

The lodge of Edonomee itself had been built by one of the earlier Varavesenas, a man passionate about the value of solitary contemplation in nature and also about grouse hunting, both pursuits which had been out of fashion at court for quite some time.

The place would be a misery to a man like Setheris Nelar, so thoroughly a creature of city, court, and coffeehouse, addicted to bustle and intrigue.  As for his half-brother, Maia--well, he had no idea what the boy might think of it. He had never even met Maia--only glimpsed him as a young child attending the funeral of his mother, the Empress Chenelo. But Nemolis could vividly recall that small, pointy, greyish face, set in tearless misery.

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The lodge itself, when it finally appeared over the horizon, seemed...not neglected so much as weathered, greyed in some indefinable way that went beyond the color of the stone walls. Nemolis rapped firmly on the tall oak door with its iron knocker, wrought in the image of a lion, and waited. And waited, until at last the door was opened by a small, almost bird-like manservant. He studied them a moment, then bowed a very deep bow. “Dachosmer, how may I announce you to the household?”

Nemolis told the man who he was and watched his eyes widen, but all he said aloud was, “Be welcome to His Serenity’s manor of Edonomee, Your Highness. I beg your indulgence while I summon someone to tend to your mounts.”

"Not necessary,” said Captain Orchennis. “Simply give me a direction and my men and I can see to ourselves.” The manservant explained, and Orchennis strode off, leading both Nemolis’s mount and his own.

A girl wearing a very simple and plain, but neat, housemaid’s garb, gestured him into a small parlor.  She looked down and stuttered, “I-I-I’ll have tea brought in directly, Y-your H-highness,”  and bowed deeply before departing. 

As Nemolis entered, Setheris Nelar stood, as did the boy at his side. Nelar bowed to the precisely correct degree and length, no more and no less, but Nemolis thought he detected a faint uncertainty in the man’s balance as he straightened. The boy seemed inclined to keep his head dipped forever, until Nelar none-too-subtly trod on his foot and Maia Drazhar raised his head.  

What struck Nemolis immediately were the boy’s eyes, wide and clear, the stormy grey of the Drazhada, set to startling effect in the face that was otherwise so much his mother’s. His face was appropriately impassive, but he didn’t yet have full control over his ears--they were flattened back with clear anxiety.  That was a bit surprising in a boy of twelve, Nemolis thought, but didn’t necessarily mean that anything was amiss with the child--they were so remote that whatever Nelar had seen fit to teach Maia about protocol, it would be far more theory than practice.

“Prince Nemolis, you and your guards are most welcome. Please feel free to join us at table and stay as long as you wish.  We beg pardon for any lack in our hospitality caused by the welcome surprise of your visit.”  The last was said in a tone that was not quite acidic enough to be openly offensive.  

“We thank you for your kindness, Osmer Nelar,” Nemolis replied, then turned his attention to Maia. “Little brother, perhaps you and I could get to know one another in a less formal setting--what say you to a ride out on the moor?”  

To his surprise, Maia’s grayish face turned mauve with embarrassment.  “Your highness,” he answered formally, “we do not know how to ride."

Nemolis was shocked for a moment--a young archduke, even one in relegation, not taught how to ride? Then he realized he might have stumbled into a sensitive matter--perhaps the Emperor had deemed Nelar a flight risk and thus forbidden the manor to keep horses? Or had Nelar simply not bothered to provide Maia the mount due his station? In either case, he hardly wished to discomfit the child, and so changed the subject quickly. 

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