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Your submission at Articles for creation: Profusa (September 3)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Georg Kreis has been accepted

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Your submission at Articles for creation: David Lombardi (November 5)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Profusa (November 5)

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Managing a conflict of interest

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This is hilarious. You assume because I’ve written a detailed article about a company I must have a personal association. I have no personal or professional affiliation with Profusa. Wickster12345 (talk) 17:38, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Nothing hilarious about it. I asked a question. It only requires an answer. (And BTW, I didn't ask a question about any specific company, eg. Profusa, you're the one who brought that up.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 18:01, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It was clear what you were referring to. But yes now I answered it. I still think it’s hilarious, but maybe that’a just a personal opinion. I guess I should refrain from expressing that something’s hilarious on Wikipedia, lots of neuroatypical people here, but I digress Wickster12345 (talk) 18:04, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Profusa has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Profusa. Thanks! DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:59, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sacha Wigdorovits has been accepted

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Your submission at Articles for creation: HBM Healthcare Investments has been accepted

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Superboilles (talk) 13:41, 3 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Secularism

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When I said "Calm down", it just seemed to me that you were upset when you said "you’re basically insinuating Wikipedia should have a moralizing and officially secular role". I don't know what your personal beliefs are but it seemed to me that this was upsetting for you. It often helps discussions to focus on the content and not the editor. It's not a good idea to say editors are "insinuating" something because they don't have problems openly stating their positions. I was simply referring to the fact, that you are still disputing, that Hamas is widely considered a terrorist organization by academic sources. We have invented definitions of terrorism just to explain Hamas and fund our response to Hamas and Islamist terrorism. This is the view that prevails. The only significant opposition comes from religious countries with Islamist governments. If Saudi Arabia, Egypt and Turkey designated this organization a terrorist organization, I have little doubt that the UN, Norway and China would drop their opposition, as it is not a defensible or reasonable position after October 7 massacres and they are clawing at thin ice as it is. Ben Azura (talk) 19:23, 6 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I never disputed Hamas is considered terrorist by most academics. I just think the academic view should be provided alongside the view of countries that have taken a position on Hamas. The reason I think why country positions should be included has nothing to do with whether I agree with the merit or value of specific governments’ views. It is simply for informational purposes. It doesn’t mean I agree with the Iranian government, I simply think together with academic views, the views of non-Islamic governments, it is ok to also provide cited explanations of the views of pro-Hamas governments. I personally value the reader’s right to receive all the information more than not mentioning views we think are harmful and Islamist, because this is an encyclopedia for everyone, not just people in the west or secular people. Wickster12345 (talk) 19:42, 6 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Profusa (February 11)

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How not? Wickster12345 (talk) 07:30, 11 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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CS1 error on Laurent Dufaux

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Proposed Switzerland-United States Free Trade Agreement. Thanks! Superboilles (talk) 07:22, 25 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Concern regarding Draft:Profusa

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Hi @Wickster12345,

Thanks for submitting the draft to Wikipedia. I did a tiny bit of copyediting. Please note that the four sources in the article, "My Conversation with the excellent Jennifer Burns", Milton Friedman’s unexpected legacy, with Jennifer Burns, the OUPblog, and the Forbes article, are all WP:primary sources, which is not encouraged for a biography of a living person.

On a side note, how do you think Burns satisfies WP:Notability (academics)? Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 18:30, 2 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

She satisifies GNG based on two independent secondary sources covering her in-depth: Two of the sources you mentioned are hybrid as they have both secondary coverage on the basis of the primary interview and a transcript of the interview itself. Wickster12345 (talk) 18:47, 2 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jennifer Burns (historian) has been accepted

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Clarification on Gaza genocide article

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I noticed your recent edit to first sentence of the Gaza genocide article. The first sentence of the lead which you edited (The Gaza genocide is the ongoing systematic destruction...) was placed there during a vandalism spree by User:SheikstarAT. Most of his vandalism was instantly reverted but that line stayed for a few hours. The Gaza genocide article used to start with:

Experts, governments, United Nations agencies, and non-governmental organisations have accused Israel of carrying out a genocide against the Palestinian people during its invasion and bombing of the Gaza Strip in the ongoing Israel–Hamas war.

I am not ECP yet so I was hoping to make an edit request for the first sentence in Talk:Gaza genocide but even the talk page for Gaza genocide is ECP. Not sure if you want to revert back to the original first sentence or open up a discussion about that in the talk page. I thought the original first sentence was good but also think there's ground for more discussion there. Up to you. Bitspectator (talk) 21:53, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Someone else took care of it. Thanks for pointing it out though! Wickster12345 (talk) 00:03, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You're welcome. Thank you for having done the edit in the first place. Bitspectator (talk) 01:10, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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Speedy deletion nomination of Babson Diagnostics

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Immunocapitalism (October 25)

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Penrhyn Castle

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Hi, and thanks for your additions to Penrhyn Castle. I think the exhibitions section is a very good addition. A few points:

  • I've done a bit of a copy edit, we don't need to italicise National Trust, for example;
  • I've standardised the referencing to match the pre-existing style;
  • I've added a couple of tags. The first is minor, it's good to have a cite at the end of the paragraph. Can the existing Oldfield and Wills just be moved to the end? The second is a bit more significant. I'm struggling with the final two sentences of the last para., particularly the last. "The aim was to foreground the crucial role of empathy and emotion in the audience’s engagement with this history and to present openly the subjectivity of individual responses" reads to me like marketing-speak, rather than English, and I'm not clear as to what it is trying to say. Does it come from the brochure that is Source 47? Droplet is a marketing/design agency, and I'm not able to find reference to that specific sentence in their brochure. Would it be possible to clarify/source it?

Many thanks again. KJP1 (talk) 06:51, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, thank you for your edits and helpful suggestions. The information in the last sentence comes from The Welsh History Review article cited. I can send it to you (the article), if you would like, and tell you the page number where this claim is specifically made. If you think the statement is not encyclopedic enough to begin with, or is otherwise not appropriate, it of course can/should be removed. Please let me know what the best course of action is Wickster12345 (talk) 08:36, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]