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Sincerely, Jauerback^dude?/_dude. (Leave me a message) 16:26, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

October 2024

Hello. Your recent edit to List of boarding schools in the United Kingdom appears to have added a non-notable entity to a list that normally includes only notable entries. In general, a person, organization or product added to a list should have a pre-existing article before being added to most lists. If you wish to create such an article, please first confirm that the subject qualifies for a separate, stand-alone article according to Wikipedia's notability guideline. Thank you. Jauerback^dude?/_dude. 16:26, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Stover School, Devon (October 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SafariScribe was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 06:37, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Spangles123! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 06:37, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Stover School, Devon (October 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DoubleGrazing was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Primary sources do not establish notability per WP:ORG. (The lone secondary source, The Standard, only makes the briefest of passing mentions of Stover.)

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:57, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Stover School, Devon (October 31)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Cabrils was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Well done on creating the draft, and it may potentially meet the relevant requirements (including WP:GNG, WP:NCORP) but presently it is not clear that it does.

As other reviewers have noted, Wikipedia's basic requirement for entry is that the subject is notable. Essentially subjects are presumed notable if they have received significant coverage in multiple published secondary sources that are reliable, intellectually independent of each other, and independent of the subject. To properly create such a draft page, please see the articles ‘Your First Article’, ‘Referencing for Beginners’ and ‘Easier Referencing for Beginners’. Please note that some of the references are not from sources that are considered reliable for establishing notability and should be removed (including blogs, company websites, Twitter, YouTube, Instagram, Spotify etc). The draft does not appear to show that the subject has any notability beyond the average coverage for similar institutions (see WP:ROTM). Also, if you have any connection to the subject, including being the subject (see WP:AUTOBIO) or being paid, you have a conflict of interest that you must declare on your Talk page (to see instructions on how to do this please click the link). Please familiarise yourself with these pages before amending the draft. If you feel you can meet these requirements, then please make the necessary amendments before resubmitting the page. It would help our volunteer reviewers by identifying, on the draft's talk page, the WP:THREE best sources that establish notability of the subject. It would also be helpful if you could please identify with specificity, exactly which criteria you believe the page meets (eg "I think the page now meets WP:NCORP criteria #3, because XXXXX").

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Cabrils (talk) 23:54, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi,

Thank you for providing such good feedback on my draft. It's the only school in my local area that doesn't have a Wikipedia page and the other schools do not have as many independent references as my page. For example, the only reference on this entry is the school's own webpage: Trinity School, Teignmouth. This school's page includes similar citations to my own: King Edward VI Community College, such as gov.uk.

I have removed the link to YouTube and so all of the citations are now independent of the subject and reliable, such as the Independent Schools Inspectorate report. None of the other local schools have received coverage in The Times recently, and I'd argue that that is quite notable. Is this ok? Spangles123 (talk) 00:20, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Stover School, Devon has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Stover School, Devon. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 15:41, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Stover School, Devon (November 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

reads like it was written by the marketing department.

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Theroadislong (talk) 15:47, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It comes from the school's inspection report. Spangles123 (talk) 15:59, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Content should come from independent, reliable sources NOT the school's inspection report. Theroadislong (talk) 16:02, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

School inspections are independent. They're performed by Ofstead. Spangles123 (talk) 16:06, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

But content like "The school emphasises individual care, aiming to meet both educational and pastoral needs to achieve high academic standards' does NOT belong in an encyclopaedia. Theroadislong (talk) 16:17, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It does if that's what the school inspection says and if it's what the school's exam results show.

I don't have any connection to this school, I just live nearby and it's the only school in the area that does not have a Wiki page. Spangles123 (talk) 16:28, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

If it is what the school inspection says then it needs to be a quote NOT in Wikipedia's voice and being "only school in the area that does not have a Wiki page" is not a good reason as some of the others should probably be deleted as advertising. Theroadislong (talk) 17:45, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

As long as the reference is there, I should be allowed to paraphrase it. Quoting chunks of text is poor writing. Spangles123 (talk) 18:09, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Stover School, Devon (December 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Cabrils was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Cabrils (talk) 00:58, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]