Template:Did you know nominations/Joe Martin (orangutan)

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The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Theleekycauldron (talk) 02:34, 16 November 2022 (UTC)

Joe Martin (orangutan)

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Joe Martin (1923)

... that Joe Martin (orangutan) played a "great orang-outang" in Merry-Go-Round that the New York Times reviewer thought was "too big, but made to appear very real"? Source: "The Screen: The Clown and His Daughter". The New York Times. 1923-07-02. p. 16. Retrieved 2022-10-28.
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Created by Jengod (talk). Self-nominated at 21:14, 31 October 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: I think this image might be clearer. Smurrayinchester 10:56, 7 November 2022 (UTC)

These are all variations on the theme. If we could get a picture slot, my preference is for ALT1, if we can’t, I’d go with ALT3. Happy to offer some new hooks from scratch if you’d prefer. LMK.

Joe Martin (1922)

ALT1: * ... that Joe Martin played a "great orang-outang" in Merry-Go-Round that the New York Times reviewer thought was "too big, but made to appear very real"?

ALT2: * ... that an orangutan called Joe Martin played a "great orang-outang" in Merry-Go-Round that the New York Times reviewer thought was "too big, but made to appear very real"?

ALT3: * ... that an orangutan called Joe Martin played a "great orang-outang" in Merry-Go-Round that the New York Times reviewer thought was "too big, but made to appear very real"?

jengod (talk) 16:24, 7 November 2022 (UTC)

I like those. I think ALT2 is clearest. Marked as ready. Smurrayinchester 20:18, 7 November 2022 (UTC)

Pulled from the queue because of citation needed and original research tags. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:03, 14 November 2022 (UTC)

- I have edited it further and improved 90 citations but that’s a hard pass from me on going another round on this. I have to do surgery on my dishwasher. Thank you for the opportunity but I withdraw the nomination. Please remove it from the queue. jengod (talk) 00:39, 15 November 2022 (UTC)