Talk:Outside (Burna Boy album)

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 16:03, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

Recorded: 2017 → no source?
Producers → add I Am Beats (put them in alphabetic order)

Done

Lead

extended play (EP) Redemption (2016). → extended play Redemption (2016).
The album received critical acclaim → give examples

Done

Background

Described as a mixtape, → Described by the Burna Boy as a mixtape,
The album's opener "More Life" was one of five songs recorded for Drake's playlist of the same name.[2] It made the cut, appearing on the outro of "Get It Together". → The album's opener, "More Life", was one of five songs recorded for Drake's playlist of the same name, released on March 18, 2017. However, it was only featured on the outro of More Life's track "Get It Together".

Done

Composition

interlude "More Life", → not on source or tracklist
of relaxation. In the → of relaxation and in the
drums. The Lily Allen-assisted track → drums, while the Lily Allen-assisted track

Done. I added the source that called "More Life" an interlude; since I merged some of content from the singles section into this section, the third bullet point couldn't be done.

Singles

You can merge this section partially with the compostion one.
Move the descrption of the songs (sound and lyrics) to the above section, leave the rest here.
On top of that, "Rock Your Body" doesn't seem to have been the first single. The tooexclusive source doesn't state that and Spin doesn't take it into consideration.
Leave the video specifics here.

I revamped the section. I replaced the TooXclusive source with an iTunes source. The song did appear on the album and was previously released.

Done

Critical reception

Retitle the section → "Reception"

Done

Accolades

The album received critical acclaim and was → stated above, remove "It was..."
In February 2018, Outside debuted at number three on the Billboard Reggae Albums chart → this is not an acollade move it to the section above
Let's get ride of the collum and use it all on the prose, not those many accolades.

I reworded the first sentence in this section and removed the table all together. I also removed the statement about the album charting on Billboard; there's already a chart section in the article.

There is a chart section? Where? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:09, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Right below personnel

It needs to be written, the table is not enough. Anyway, I have done it. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:39, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done

Track listing

Fine

Personnel

Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between the credits and the personnel.
Two collums are enough

Done

Charts

Fine

Release history

The reference should be aligned

Done

References

Vice.com → Vice wikilink

Done.

Some rerences have author isntead of last and first, be consisting
Missing several dates

I believe there is a way to fix this issue simultaneously, similar to how it was done here. I don't know how to do this thogh.

Manually? I have no idea, but it needs to be done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:41, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I will ask SS112; I believe he can do this. Before I ask him, I will need some clarity. Do you want all the references to have |last and |first instead of |author? What do you mean by "missing several dates? Which dates are missing? Versace1608 ^{Wanna Talk?} 20:59, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, last and first. Some sources don't have authors, that's what I meant, sorry. Reference 4, 21 and 30. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:23, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

360nobs.com. → 360nobs (publisher)

Done.

Overall

You can now address the comments. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:29, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]