Talk:Neil Druckmann/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Anarchyte (talk · contribs) 10:27, 26 June 2015 (UTC)

I'll review this now. --Anarchyte 10:27, 26 June 2015 (UTC)

Comments and Feedback

• Copyvio rating: 42.5% chance of violation.

This shouldn't be a worry as most of the 'violations' are the words "The Last of Us: Left Behind" and "The Last of Us".

Lead

• Everything is fine here, covers all the points said in the article (as far as I can see)

Early life

• Everything is fine here

Career

• Druckmann met Naughty Dog co-founder Jason Rubin at the Game Developers Conference, when they began talking. In 2004, Druckmann joined Naughty Dog as a programming intern, before being promoted to a full-time position as a gameplay programmer a few months later.<ref name="Creative"/>

Hmm... Maybe this could be reworded in a way? Something like:

"At the Game Developers Conference, Druckmann met Naughty Dog co-founder Jason Rubin. After Druckmann "bugged" Rubin, Rubin gave him his business card. In 2004, Druckmann joined Naughty Dog as a programming intern, before being promoted to a full-time position as a gameplay programmer a few months later.<ref name="Creative"/>"

EDIT: Page has since been edited.

Personal life

• Everything is fine here

Works

• Everything is fine here

Awards and nominations

• Everything is fine here

GA Criteria

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

   Reviewer Comment: A few good faith edits and test edits were done but they soon ended.

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail: (Pass)

Another good article on subjects of The Last of Us, good job. :)
Anyway, all the files used in the article are under the creative commons so they're fine to use, there's no violation of WP:BLP and everything seems to be in order. The only issue I found has been stated above and it's really not that big of a deal. Promoted to GA. --Anarchyte 11:06, 26 June 2015 (UTC)