Talk:Meena Kumari (book)/GA1
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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 15:04, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
Nominator: Nicholas Michael Halim (talk · contribs) at 05:15, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
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[edit]as soon as she died in March 1972
— "soon after her death in March 1972"Her performance as a desperate wife in the 1962 romantic drama Sahib Bibi Aur Ghulam is regarded as one of her career's bests
— who regards it?the film itself failed at the box office
— remove 'itself'All 3,000 copies of the first edition were sold out after six days.
— exactly 3,000, or approximately 3,000?visible, but ... it was
— add a non-breaking space ({{nbsp}}) before the ellipsis.It was received positively by many critics
— this is cited to a primary source, where the author is same as the author of the book. We'll need secondary sources for such evaluative claims.- This still needs a secondary source:
Critics showed enthusiastic response to it
– Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 05:29, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
- This still needs a secondary source:
- Change:
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{| class="wikitable sortable plainrowheaders" | {{Sronly|Publication history of the book: Meena Kumari}}
- Rest good. I should note that there are various primary sources used, but mostly are used for direct quotations and content of the book, which should be fine.
- Images can take ALT text
Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:54, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
Promoting! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 20:44, 20 February 2022 (UTC)