Talk:Hugh Robertson (politician)

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Career Section Update

My conflict of interest is that I am an employee of the British Olympic Association. I seek to be fully compliant with the COI policies and hope to work with all editors for the improvement of the page.

I am requesting to update the Parliamentary Career section on this page. My suggestion is to change this title to Career so that it can include all recent appointments. This should include being appointed as Chair of the British Olympic Association in November 2016, overseeing Team GB’s performance at the PyeongChang 2018 Olympic Winter Games, where the team won a record five medals. Prior to that he was appointed Vice-Chair in October 2015 and as stand-in Chair oversaw Team GB’s participation in Rio de Janeiro, where the team finished second in the medal table with 67 medals

Additionally, Robertson was appointed as Chair of Camelot in June 2018. Camelot is the operator of The National Lottery. Reference

Many thanks ONZFS (talk) 15:20, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

References

Reply 21-FEB-2019

Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.  Spintendo  05:20, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

Proposal review 21-FEB-2019

Change this title to Career so that it can include all recent appointments.  Approved. Appointed as Chair of the British Olympic Association in November 2016.  Approved. Overseeing Team GB’s performance at the PyeongChang 2018 Olympic Winter Games, where the team won a record five medals.  Declined. Prior to that he was appointed Vice-Chair in October 2015. Clarification needed. As stand-in Chair oversaw Team GB’s participation in Rio de Janeiro, where the team finished second in the medal table with 67 medals[4]  Declined. Robertson was appointed as Chair of Camelot in June 2018.  Approved. ___________

Many thanks to @Spintendo: for your assistance in updating this page as well as detailing what is needed to implement further changes. Due to my conflict of interest, as detailed above in my initial comment, I request further assistance in updating this page. Off the back of your feedback @Spintendo:, I have proposed the following amendments with updated sources:

As the Chairman of the British Olympic Association Sir Hugh Robertson led Team GB’s participation at the PyeongChang 2018 Olympic Winter Games, where the team won a record five medals

To clarify, Sir Hugh Robertson was appointed Vice Chair of the British Olympic Association in 2015, prior to becoming the British Olympic Association Chairman in 2016 additional reference

As the Vice Chairman of the British Olympic Association Sir Hugh Robertson led Team GB’s participation in Rio de Janeiro, where the team finished second in the medal table with 67 medals

Many thanks for your help and support ONZFS (talk) 10:26, 28 February 2019 (UTC)

Autobiographical Tone and Sources

Hi,

I've been through the page and fixed a few issues relating to the autobiographical tone and sourcing. I've removed several claims for which there's no real public record and ensured that there are up-to-date sources for professional appointments and personal life matters.

Feel free to feed back. The350club (talk) 12:32, 6 March 2024 (UTC)

Further, I've clarified that Robertson left his position as Chair of Camelot in early 2023, before joining the Board of Birmingham Airport as their new Chairman. Camelot source. Birmingham Airport source. The350club (talk) 12:41, 6 March 2024 (UTC)

I have also reformatted his post-parliamentary appointments section to include further detail of his career since 2020. The350club (talk) 13:08, 6 March 2024 (UTC)

Page Title Update

My conflict of interest is that I have had communication with Robertson himself, but I hope to be COI compliant and make changes that reflect factual, public information about his career.

I'm proposing that the title of the page is changed from Hugh Robertson (politician) to Hugh Robertson (businessman), as his current positions are chiefly advisory and board roles to private organisations. The350club (talk) 15:59, 6 March 2024 (UTC)