Talk:Attack on Titan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:59, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

I will review this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:59, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

General

• No copyvio/dablink issues
• A few deadlinks [1]

Dead links have either been replaced or removed (One dead link was just a duplicate of another reference). Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• Reads well, I find no problems

Overview

• Any clear source for the Setting and Plot sections? Just place them at the end of the last paras of both sections

The source is the show itself. Normally plot and setting sections don't need inline citations as it's assumed that the source is the media itself. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

• a giant 60-meter (200 ft)-tall Titan You could simply say "a giant 60-meter (200 ft)-tall Titan, Colossus Titan" and place the wikilink on "Colossus Titan". The link as of now looks a bit weird.
• the successor to the real king, Rod Reiss, as the current king is but a figurehead King of the Titans? This is not mentioned clearly.

The Colossus part has been fixed, while the current king part isn't exactly vague. I can't remember if their kingdom has a name (I haven't read the manga in years) so I'll just leave this as it is; you or another user can always fix it later on. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Production

• Wikilink Hajime Isayama
• He declined and instead, decided to take it Comma not needed
• When designing their appearances Should be clear that "their" refers to Titans, not the humans in the story
• Hajime later would confirm Use his surname only. There is some inconsistency in this

All  Done. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Media

• volume sixteen "16" would be less wordy and better per the MOS

 Done Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

• It focuses on the origins of Levi I think you should say "Captain Levi" and also wikilink the name as it is quite a while since you last mentioned him

 Done Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

• It was also released in English by Vertical. Source?

 Done Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

• An anime television series adaptation What was the name of this series?

The anime is also called "Attack on Titan". It's common for anime articles to not say "of the same name" in articles as anime titles are usually the same as the source material unless otherwise stated. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

• Some unsourced parts in Video games:

• The games are visual novels...supervising the development of the games.

Moved a citation accordingly.

• Additionally, Attack on Titan gameplay...in its Japanese and GMS versions.

Cited. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

• Later was confirmed to be released worldwide along with a PC and Xbox One versions some grammar error in this line

 Done Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

• It is focused on the multiplayer gameplay but it can be play in solo mode.

Removed the line as I couldn't find a source confirming that. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Reception

• Attack on Titan was the top favorite manga Italics
• Duplink: One Piece
• Who is Theron Martin?

All  Done Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Political interpretations

• Hajime Isayama's style Simply surname please

 Done Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 07:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Excellent! I am happy to promote this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:35, 29 June 2016 (UTC)