User contributions for 71.201.62.200

24 September 2015

• 21:4821:48, 24 September 2015 diff hist 80 MDR →Other: As is standard in wikipedia, returning a phrase to the list that does not have its own article, but that appears within a WP article, allowing the disambiguation to direct to the article wherein the term appears. Le Prof

23 September 2015

• 21:3521:35, 23 September 2015 diff hist 37 Design of experiments See last edit summary.
• 21:3421:34, 23 September 2015 diff hist 133 Design of experiments →History: Am stating implicitly, calling dubious, what is implied by having primary source-derived story in history section of article on DsOE. THIS SECTION NEEDS CITATION SAYING AN EXPERT JUDGES THIS TO BE EARLY DOE, OR IT NEEDS REMOVED. Le Prof

21 September 2015

• 05:1305:13, 21 September 2015 diff hist 80 George Edalji Final citation comments. Cheers. Le Prof
• 05:1205:12, 21 September 2015 diff hist −23 George Edalji →Letters and malicious mischief of 1892: removing refimprove section tag
• 05:1105:11, 21 September 2015 diff hist 4 George Edalji replacing refimprove with more footnotes, which, with the page number issue, is more to the point.
• 05:0905:09, 21 September 2015 diff hist 138 George Edalji Removing primary sources tag, because seeming primary source was a journal article. Indicating page number and general citation attention needed.
• 04:5304:53, 21 September 2015 diff hist 275 George Edalji Corrected/completed the Konnikova "Mastermind" citation, again noting lack go page numbers., completed Times (London) 1934 citation, and repaired ITV deadlink, to complete work on current citations. Le Prof
• 04:2404:24, 21 September 2015 diff hist 274 George Edalji Repaired link to 1903 Feilding Star citation, and touching up Birmingham City Counsil letter citation.
• 04:0604:06, 21 September 2015 diff hist 598 George Edalji Checked and touched up Birmingham City Council citation, repaired link to 1903 Star citation, added second Star citation to further reading.
• 03:2803:28, 21 September 2015 diff hist 188 George Edalji Corrected/completed the Nash "I am innocent" citation, again noting lack go page numbers. Le Prof
• 03:2203:22, 21 September 2015 diff hist 191 George Edalji Corrected/completed the Kerr citation. Le Prof
• 03:1503:15, 21 September 2015 diff hist 71 George Edalji Corrected and completed the Welwyn Hatfield Times (Paul Christian) citation.
• 03:0803:08, 21 September 2015 diff hist 114 George Edalji Corrected and completed the Risinger citation, and combined all redundant citations. Because page rage violates policy -- it is >90 pp. -- the page needed tag is added to each inline citation. ALso corrected format of Further reading. Le Prof
• 02:5202:52, 21 September 2015 diff hist −64 George Edalji Two more of Costello found elsewhere in reflist, and combined. Again, no page numbers.
• 02:4902:49, 21 September 2015 diff hist 294 George Edalji Completed Peter Costello citation, fully adding all missing information. Since page range is about 40 pp., per WP guidelines, adding {{page needed}} tag to call for specific narrow page ranges. Le Prof
• 01:1101:11, 21 September 2015 diff hist 4 George Edalji Fised remaining Weaver citations. All now in rp format. Will take care of rest of citations soon. Le Prof
• 01:0601:06, 21 September 2015 diff hist −511 George Edalji To eliminate many redundant Weaver citations, created one standard complete citation, and converted the remaining to rp page formats, marking one without indicated page numbers,
• 00:5900:59, 21 September 2015 diff hist 131 George Edalji Completed the Weaver 2006 citation, and began conversion to rp markup to remove repeating citations.
• 00:5100:51, 21 September 2015 diff hist −152 George Edalji →Background: Removed duplicated reference.
• 00:4900:49, 21 September 2015 diff hist 20 George Edalji First reference, appearing repeatedly, is to primary source material requiring editor original research.

19 September 2015

• 21:3621:36, 19 September 2015 diff hist 489 Web page Adding further reading
• 21:1421:14, 19 September 2015 diff hist 185 Web page Article is not encyclopedic. Sections contain a median of 0 (zero) inline citations per SECTION (0 ≤ n ≤ 2). Almost all information is original research, and unverifiable. Sections are tagged as appropriate, and entire article is given refimprove tag.

18 September 2015

• 20:1920:19, 18 September 2015 diff hist 23 Leopold II of Belgium →Marriage and family: Again, large unsourced blocks.
• 20:1820:18, 18 September 2015 diff hist 24 Leopold II of Belgium Noting a sentence of lede content that is not supported by sources, in the text.
• 20:1720:17, 18 September 2015 diff hist 41 Leopold II of Belgium →Exploitation, atrocities, and death toll: Noting entire paragraph making historical claims that lacks citations

13 September 2015

• 21:3421:34, 13 September 2015 diff hist 238 Lajos Kossuth →Great Britain: Competed and formatted Freifeld citation according to one acceptable style. Noted this as only citation in long subsection.
• 21:2621:26, 13 September 2015 diff hist 88 Talk:Lajos Kossuth →Very poorly sourced biographical article
• 21:2221:22, 13 September 2015 diff hist 830 Talk:Lajos Kossuth →Here is the entirety of the 11th edition Encyclopedia Britannica article on this subject
• 21:1721:17, 13 September 2015 diff hist 12 Talk:Lajos Kossuth Same note as preceding.
• 21:1621:16, 13 September 2015 diff hist 12 Talk:Lajos Kossuth Adding a ref list so references are with the Talk section where they belong
• 21:1521:15, 13 September 2015 diff hist 17,480 Talk:Lajos Kossuth →Here is the entirety of the 11th edition Encyclopedia Britannica article on this subject: new section
• 20:4420:44, 13 September 2015 diff hist 107 Lajos Kossuth →Failure: More WP editors' OR: Of the 3 paragraphs, approx 20 lines, there is but 1 stated (poor) source—meaning, not that all this material derives from the 1893 Musical Times article, rather that it derives from an editor as "one source"
• 20:4020:40, 13 September 2015 diff hist 22 Lajos Kossuth →Success: For the simple reason that these four paragraphs state no sources.
• 20:3920:39, 13 September 2015 diff hist 56 Lajos Kossuth →Entry into national politics: Of the 4 paragraphs, approx 25 lines, there is but 1 stated (poor) source—meaning, not that all this material derives from Kossuth encycl entry, rather that it derives from the "one source" of the WP editors' OR
• 20:3420:34, 13 September 2015 diff hist 23 Lajos Kossuth →Journalist and political leader: Because the last three paragraphs are completely unsourced.
• 07:0407:04, 13 September 2015 diff hist 0 Survivor (film) →Theatrical release and reception: copyedit to correct Caps in title
• 07:0407:04, 13 September 2015 diff hist −2 Survivor (film) →Theatrical release and reception: Copyedit to correct subheading level
• 07:0307:03, 13 September 2015 diff hist 2,513 Survivor (film) No new material added, just: (i) added 5 missing citations, to The National, Rotten Tomatoes, meteoritic, and to two mentioned specific additional reviews, and (ii) moved all reception information into the correct section. Cheers.

12 September 2015

• 22:3922:39, 12 September 2015 diff hist −1 Henry Augustus Lukeman →American works: copyedit, subj-verb agreement
• 22:3822:38, 12 September 2015 diff hist 1 Henry Augustus Lukeman →Early life and education: copyedit, missing adverb ending required was put in
• 22:3522:35, 12 September 2015 diff hist 903 Talk:Henry Augustus Lukeman →Dearinger citation content
• 22:2922:29, 12 September 2015 diff hist 3,872 Henry Augustus Lukeman Completed addition of Dearinger material. Note many sourced text additions were difficult to reconcile with earlier unsourced content. Prose "It is… reported" was used to leave in unsourced earlier text, while making clear added text is verifiable.
• 20:1420:14, 12 September 2015 diff hist 367 Launt Thompson Adding a nice article from 2004 on Launt Thomson, from the National Academy of Design
• 20:0920:09, 12 September 2015 diff hist 12 Launt Thompson →References
• 19:5819:58, 12 September 2015 diff hist 2,770 Talk:Henry Augustus Lukeman →Completing and re-formatting of Lukeman citations needed [dated info noted]
• 19:4319:43, 12 September 2015 diff hist 352 Henry Augustus Lukeman →Further reading: Adding one new further reading entry (book)
• 19:2819:28, 12 September 2015 diff hist 2 Talk:Henry Augustus Lukeman →Completing and re-formatting of Lukeman citations needed [dated info noted]
• 19:2719:27, 12 September 2015 diff hist 50 Talk:Henry Augustus Lukeman →Completing and re-formatting of Lukeman citations needed
• 19:2519:25, 12 September 2015 diff hist 202 Talk:Henry Augustus Lukeman →Completing and re-formatting of Lukeman citations needed