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12 December 2024
- 20:4020:40, 12 December 2024 diff hist 20 Litotes →Examples: ~~ "it's not my favorite" doesn't mean "I don't like it" -- it means "it's not a contender for a high valuation."
1 December 2024
- 04:4704:47, 1 December 2024 diff hist 176 The King and the Beggar-maid →Major treatments: ~~GBS knew why he titled his play 'Pygmalion,' but evidently it was not because Henry Higgins fell in love with his creation. in fact, a significant element of the play was precisely that Eliza Doolitlle was NOT simply a creation of the sculptor. current
23 November 2024
- 18:5118:51, 23 November 2024 diff hist 1 The Bourne Identity (2002 film) →Cast: ~~ past tense
21 November 2024
- 20:1720:17, 21 November 2024 diff hist 6 Big Fun (Miles Davis album) →Legacy and reappraisal: ~~ wording, and then trying to make the quote make sense -- no idea what the author actually said, just that what was written doesn't make sense current
12 November 2024
- 18:5118:51, 12 November 2024 diff hist −49 Ballerina (2023 film) →Plot: ~~ have to admit, "finish" is poetic, and maybe a better translation from the Korean
6 November 2024
- 20:5420:54, 6 November 2024 diff hist 102 The 5th Wave (film) →Plot: ~~ attempting to make this make sense and be consistent
- 20:4420:44, 6 November 2024 diff hist −4 The 5th Wave (film) →Plot: ~~ English syntax
24 October 2024
- 19:3419:34, 24 October 2024 diff hist 0 OMG (single album) →Composition: ~~idiomatic English
20 October 2024
- 21:5321:53, 20 October 2024 diff hist 0 Battle of Borodino →Casualties: ~~typo
- 21:5021:50, 20 October 2024 diff hist −7 Battle of Borodino →Historiography: ~~I think I kept the sense of this, while clarifying and removing awkwardness
15 October 2024
- 22:4922:49, 15 October 2024 diff hist 1 A Burial at Ornans →Composition: ~~typo
14 September 2024
- 22:3822:38, 14 September 2024 diff hist 1 Calistoga, California →Tourism: ~~correcting a typo? not sure, but it certainly shouldn't be "inducing"
4 September 2024
- 18:5918:59, 4 September 2024 diff hist 0 Bruce Chatwin →Illness and final works: ~~typo
- 18:5418:54, 4 September 2024 diff hist 0 Bruce Chatwin →The Sunday Times Magazine and In Patagonia: ~~typo
22 August 2024
- 14:5714:57, 22 August 2024 diff hist −1 Big Trouble in Little China →Visual effects: ~~typo
19 August 2024
- 13:3313:33, 19 August 2024 diff hist −2 Reinforcement sensitivity theory →Origins and evolution of the theory: ~~ word choice: it's not an "Alternative"
17 June 2024
- 01:3801:38, 17 June 2024 diff hist 39 Stay (David Bowie song) ~~ "abstract"? seriously? Tag: Reverted
16 May 2024
- 13:1813:18, 16 May 2024 diff hist 2 Atacama Desert →Setting: ~~ my best guess on what was intended
13 May 2024
- 20:2320:23, 13 May 2024 diff hist −2 Isabela Merced →Career: ~~ "major"? either you're quoting someone, or these are air-quotes -- implying you don't think her role was major. if you want to be mealy-mouthed, try "significant." or maybe be specific about where her name was on the credits. sheesh.
9 May 2024
- 01:5301:53, 9 May 2024 diff hist −3 Miller's Girl →Plot: ~~idiomatic English: "demands [person] [act]," not [to act]
4 May 2024
- 16:2716:27, 4 May 2024 diff hist 99 Black Jack ~~ no idea why there's no link to "blackjack" under 'Black Jack' Tag: Reverted
29 April 2024
- 01:0601:06, 29 April 2024 diff hist 2 Infinite Search ~~finishing tidying? current
- 01:0401:04, 29 April 2024 diff hist 10 Infinite Search ~~more tidying
- 01:0201:02, 29 April 2024 diff hist −20 Infinite Search ~~wording
13 April 2024
- 20:2320:23, 13 April 2024 diff hist 97 The Little Sister →Themes: ~~ clarification
- 20:1320:13, 13 April 2024 diff hist 351 The Lady in the Lake →Plot: ~~ started out by just fixing awkward syntax, but it kind of spiralled, if you know what I mean. whoo boy. the plot still confuses me, after at least 3 re-readings. Tag: Reverted
12 April 2024
- 22:4022:40, 12 April 2024 diff hist 0 Japan (band) →Final years: ~~ awkward wording
- 22:3622:36, 12 April 2024 diff hist 2 Japan (band) →Early years: ~~awkward syntax
- 22:3022:30, 12 April 2024 diff hist −8 New York Dolls →Legacy: ~~ they can't both become two of the most influential bands
27 March 2024
- 21:0121:01, 27 March 2024 diff hist 269 Carnegie Hall '71 ~~ update
- 21:0021:00, 27 March 2024 diff hist −270 Carnegie Hall '71 →Reception: ~~ posted in wrong section -- sorry Tag: Manual revert
- 20:5620:56, 27 March 2024 diff hist 270 Carnegie Hall '71 ~~ update Tag: Reverted
- 15:5715:57, 27 March 2024 diff hist 62 Caudine Forks ~~ re-redirecting to the actual relevant page Tag: Reverted
12 March 2024
- 22:4822:48, 12 March 2024 diff hist 1 Olé Coltrane →Reception: ~~assuming this is Wikipedia's typo
7 March 2024
- 02:1402:14, 7 March 2024 diff hist −6 William Winwood Reade →The Martyrdom Of Man (1872): ~~parallel construction
24 February 2024
- 21:1321:13, 24 February 2024 diff hist 337 Talk:Sherlock Holmes →proposed edit, under 'Personal Combat': new section Tag: New topic
20 February 2024
- 01:0401:04, 20 February 2024 diff hist 1 Okinawan kobudō →Etymology and definition: ~~typo
18 February 2024
- 13:4613:46, 18 February 2024 diff hist 1 Rhapsody in Blue →Retrospective reviews: ~~spelling